大嘴Yuki
3， have --has 4. for--去掉 5. T6. are---do 7. it---one 8. T 9. give--give it 10. right--all right.
丝雨如薇
第一行in May...改成on May...下一行wash 改成washed reached to改成reached第三行是对的下一行rices改成rice下一行fishes改成fish
酒窝喵喵兔
第一行They改为their（“他们的”应用形容词性物主代词）第一行an删掉或把English改为Englishman（English表国籍时是形容词，而Englishman是名词且可数）第二行but different numbers不对，应该是but they have different numbers（but后面直接加宾语时一般是not…but…而且different numbers与前半句中的are或in都不符）（本项不确定）第四行And改为But（根据句意，应选择带有转折意义的连词）第四行his改为he's（做主语时用代词主格he，he must be更好，最准确的表猜测句型）第四行us改为our（“我们的”应用形容词性物主代词）第四行Her改为She（做主语时用代词主格she）第五行She is good teacher 在is和good中间加不定冠词a（teacher是可数名词且做表语，故必须有单数或复数，又因She是单数，所以用a）
奔跑的鱼肝油
At Halloween ,peoples in the West celebrate it by many ways.Children wear special costumes.They dress uo some animals.Children can play a game called ‘trick or treat’.Usually,they can get much sweets as treat.At Halloween ---on celebrate it by many ways---in many ways get much sweets ---many sweets
吧啦左耳
We have two (students) in our class.(Their) names are simon and Alice.Simon is an English.(And) Alice is (an) American. They are twelve.They are in the same row, but different numbers,Simon is Number Six,Alice is Number Seven.Peter is in (our) class,too. He is on duty today.(But) he isn"t here. I think (he's) at home. Miss Brown is (our) teacher.(She) teaches English. She is (a)good teacher
