小小小小野
括号中是修改后的，主要是一些基本语法，语句还可以进一步润色。Nowadays, exam has become one of the most important （ways） to judge how (do the students master knowledge). Who can （get passed） or have a high （score） has a great meaning for his school life or career. All the students try their best to pass. Cheating is one of the ways, and it’s on the rise. There are two （kinds） of cheating students. The first kind want to experience new things in school. They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities. In this situation, they ignore the importance of knowledge and (be) out of mind in the class. In the end of the semester, （they） choose cheating to pass the exams. (The other kind of students) work hard on their study. They gradually notice that cheating can possibly (help them to) succeed in the exam, and they find that who cheats in the exam even has a higher (score) than them. For protecting the fairness between cheaters and non-cheaters, they begin to cheat too. That is because schools pay more attention to the result (than) process. In my opinion, cheating absolutely should be forbidden all the time. Supervisors must strictly punish the cheaters. At the same time, school should judge the students all-rounds but (only the scores). In this way, I think the fairness will come again in the near future.
努力中的女人
高考英语短文改错在答题卡上的标准写法:
1.漏词需要增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
2.多余需要删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
3.错词需要修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。
特别提醒：
1.改正的答案必须写在横线下面,否则,即使答案正确也不能得分.
2.注意大小写及单词拼写一定要完整正确,即使单词正确,但大小写错了,或哪怕词尾错或少一个字母,都不能得分。
3.每句一般不超过两个错误；如果你改多了,那肯定至少有一个改错了。
4.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。也就是说,需要你改正的以及你改正后的答案只能是一个单词。
5.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
下面给一个范例让你参考:
Banyantree212
Last Sunday,my parent and i went to the park by bike.i was very excited,because it was my first time to enjoy the park on bike.i rode slowly.Sometimes i got off the bike and took a few pictures.my parent smiled at me.we were very happy!In the park,there were a lot of beautiful flowers. I was running ahead of my parent,but soon i had to slow down,because i was tired.i sat down by the big tree.This park attracts mang visitors,among whom was a little girl,my friend.i was very surprised.i gave her some fuits and asked her to sat down.we talked about the holidays.How time flies,we went home.i had a good time in the park.错误较多都改过来了。注意一个句子中只有有一个动词要是没有连词的话。而且句首字母大写！
babycarolyn
Last Sunday,my parent and i went to the park by bike.i was very excited.because it was my first time riding bike.on the park way.i rode slowly,sometimes i got off the bike and took a few pictures.my parent smiled at me.we were very happy!in the park,there were a lot of flowers here,the flowers are very beatiful,i was running away ahead of my parent,but soon later i had to slow down,because i was tired,i sat down by a big tree.this park attracts many visitors.among these visitors, there was a little girl,she is my friends , which surprised me,i gave her some fruits and invited her to sit down , then we talked about the holidays. As tIme flies,i went home.that's the good time i had in the park . 或者Last Sunday,my parents and i went to the park by bike.I was very excited,because it was my first time take a bike.On the park way,i rode slowly.Sometimes i got off the bike and took a few pictures.My parents smiled at me.We were very happy!There were a lot of flowers in the park,and the flowers were very beautiful.I was running away and ahead of my parents,but soon i had to slow down because i was tired.Then i sat down under the big tree.This park attracts mang visitors.Among these visitors,there was a little girl,who is my friend.
猫19820728
that is a great bandi love the group which playplay music which is loud andbut other timeswhich is quiet and gentlethe fantastic voice and fair-sounding rhythm attract me so muchmake us full of energy and full of hope for the future
lilyran0910
Last Sunday,my parents and i went to the park by bike.I was very excited,because it was my first time take a bike.On the park way,i rode slowly.Sometimes i got off the bike and took a few pictures.My parents smiled at me.We were very happy!There were a lot of flowers in the park,and the flowers were very beautiful.I was running away and ahead of my parents,but soon i had to slow down because i was tired.Then i sat down under the big tree.This park attracts mang visitors.Among these visitors,there was a little girl,who is my friend.整篇有小小改动.自己看一下.不满意请忽略.
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