英语改错100

错句①every summer from around the world in thousands of people come here,walking,swimming,shoping.我的原意是：每个夏天来自世界各地数以千计的人来到这里，散步，游泳，在街上购物。around the world 就可以表达来自世界各地的意思了，最好放在people后面修饰性强一点， 来这里做什么事一般表达是 come here to do改：every summer, thousands of people around the world come here to walk,swim and shop.错句②I like music,reading and foreign culture. I excel at the sports and made friends.I can speak English.我的原意是：我喜欢音乐，读书和外国文化。我擅长体育和结交朋友，我会讲英语。at 是介词，所以动词make不是用过去式，而是现在分词making。I like music,reading and foreign culture. I excel at the sports and making friends.I can speak English.错句③not far from the university of Birmingham.我的原意是：离伯明翰大学不远的地方如果是原句的话应该是‘离伯明翰大学不远’，如果要完整表达‘离伯明翰大学不远的地方’这个意思的话是：place that is not far from the university of Birmingham.错句④The new energy is developed,new energy has replaced petroleum in energy.我的原意是：新能源被开发利用、 新能源已取代石油等能源。如果用 is developed 的话是表达已经完全开发好了的意思，但是一般来说新能源都是逐步慢慢开发的吧，所以我觉得还是用现在进行时表示正在开发的好,或者直接用完成时也感觉好点改： the new energy is being developed and it has replaced petroleum.(注意两个句子的连接要用连词and。)错句⑤the more convenient quick transportation vehicle appeared.people can go to space travel and vacations in tourism.我的原意是：更方便更快捷的交通工具出现。人类可去太空旅行和度假。两个同一性质的形容词一起的时候最好用and连接，即‘convenient and quick’，这里的快用fast比较适合；这里最好还是用完成时，因为后面也有说到对人类产生有比较大的影响。第二句一句话中游两个实意动词go 和 travel 是不可以的，vocation对应的动词也没有。可以直接说travel to space 就可以表达去太空旅游的意思了改：the more convenient and faster transportation vehicles have appeared.people can travel to space and have vacations there错句⑥The robot enters the commoon people's family我的原意是：机器人进入百姓家庭。注意拼写哈 是 common。 这句表达应该OK的吧，enter用的稍微生硬了点，但应该不算错误有什么问题直说哈~

说实话，我觉得……不是很实用，个人观点。我买了一本，写到现在也才写了一半左右吧，错误率依旧高得很。可我正常考试却没有那么多的错误。我是全国卷一，短文改错你需要记住的是它一般错的是什么类别，例如单复数，形容词副词，时态，语态（主动语态、被动语态）之类的，它一般错误是有规律的，记住这个规律加上学校的练习，高三的时候你自然而然就会做得好了。小甘图书短文改错100篇有些错误不是很符合考试设定，例如多了一个删除的或者添加什么的。你可以在网上搜搜历年来高考题。我感觉这个更有用。

2. I like music,reading and foreign culture. I excel at the sports and making friends.I can speak English.3. not far from the Birmingham University

1.Thousands of people around the world come here every summer,walking, swimming and shopping.2.I like listening to music,reading and learning foreign cultures.I`m good at doing sports.I enjoy making friends and I can speak English.3.你的句子可以4.New energy has been developed and used.It has already replaced the source such as petroleum and so on.5.The appearance of more convenient and quicker vehicle can make people travel or on holidays in the space.6.The robot has already come into people`s family.自己认真翻译出来的，有什么问题可以再交流~

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