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高二寒假英语作文:My Favorite Sport

I like to do all kinds of sports, in the morning, I will do some jogging and in the evening, sometime I will go to the gym with my friends. My favorite sport is playing tennis, tennis brings my life so much happiness, I can watch the match while talking to my friends happily. To do the sport will improve my health and make me catch up with the time.

When I was *** all, one day, when I went home after school, I felt bored and opened the TV, then I saw the tennis match. Two beautiful girls were playing intensively, the game was so excellent, I couldn't move my eye away from the match. From then on, I started to fall in love with tennis, I watched many matches and got to know more about the game.

Tennis sport is the bination of power and asthetics. The tennis players dress the beautiful clothes and their power make the ball fly quickly. The other tennis players will return the tennis ball with their rightly power. The game is so wonderful, if we watch the match alive.

There is no doubt that I am a big fan of the tennis sport. I find so much fun from it, it enriches my life.

MY BIRTHDAY 我的生日Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my clas *** ates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to e and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happiest men in the world.Time passed quickly. In a inkling, the clock on the wall struck nine. We could not but say “Good-bye” to one another.。

I'm going to be a good doctor after I graduate from the university。

I believeI'll bring my parents health and happiness。 In my spare time,I'll stay with myfamily。

We'll travel a lot and do lots of sports。I'll also read as many books asI can for I want to improve myself。

Even if I work,I will never give up studing。 I'm sure my dream will e true because of my hard work and the life inthe future will get better and better。

自从那个小偷盗铃失败后,他一直耿耿于怀,想:“有什么好办法顺利地把铃弄到手?”一天,他突然有了个绝妙的注意:如果先把铃的电池拿掉,电铃不就不会叫了吗?他为他这一高招高兴地在家里蹦来蹦去,心飘飘然,想:“这一回我肯定能成功了!” 当天夜里12点,他准备好起子,锤子等工具,悄悄来到富翁家门口,左瞧瞧,右看看,四周寂静无声,只听得见心怦怦直跳,他默默对自己说:“我一定要小心,不能向上次那样!我今天一定要得到这个金铃!”他轻手轻脚地来到门厅的金铃旁。

突然屋里传出一阵说话的声音,他吓得一下子摔到在地,头上,身上冒出了一层密密的汗珠,他颤兢兢的爬起来。“我就这样半途而废?不,我一定要偷到!” 他强撑着抖抖缩缩地把电铃后盖打开,取下电池,长长的松了口气,心想:“这下可成功了!这可是只金铃呀,我又可好好逍遥几天了。”

接着他放心大胆的取下铃,大摇大摆地回家去,蒙头大睡,正想着第二天怎样潇洒呢! 第二天,天气很好,太阳从窗户洒瞒了一屋,小偷懒洋洋地在被窝了作着好梦。 “嘭,嘭-” 一阵敲门声把他叫醒,打开门一看,把他给楞住了,警察带着110正在门口等着他呢! 原来,富翁家安装了高科技的针孔式探头,昨天他的一举一动全被录下来了。

Since the little bell theft failed, he has been brooding, thinking: "What is a good way to *** ooth the bell to get their hands?" One day, he suddenly had a wonderful Note: If the battery removed first bell, bells no it will not call it? He happily jumping up and down at home for him this brilliant idea, heart *** ug, thinking: "! This time I'll be successful." 0:00 that day, he was ready screwdrivers, hammers and other tools, quietly came to the millionaire door, look left, look right, surrounded by silent, only to hear the heart pounding, he quietly said to himself: "I must be careful not to last, as I have to get this bell today!! "He came softly beside the hall bell. Suddenly the room came a burst of voices, he scared all of a sudden fell to the ground, head, body emitted a thick layer of sweat, his trembling Jingjing get up. "?! I do not give up halfway so I must steal" He shook shrink shrink struggling to put the bell to open the back cover, remove the battery, a long sigh of relief, thinking: "Oh, great success ! This is only the bell Yeah, I can be a good Happy days. "Then he boldly removed the bell, blatantly go home Mengtoutaishui, is thinking about how cool it the next day! The next day, the weather was good, the sun spilled from the windows conceal a house, the thief lazily in bed for a sleep. "Bang, bang -" a knock to wake him up, opened the door, he was astonished to police with 110 at the door waiting for him! Originally, the installation of high-tech millionaire pinhole probe, yesterday all been recorded his every move down.。

好怀念的英语书。

Now Li Fang found his girl friend Hujin was waiting for him, he suddently realized that he had mistaken the appointment's place. He felt so sorry but he didn't how to do for he both had thrown the gifts away and been lated for the appointment. At the same time, Hujin found that LiFang was besides the window. She looked at Li's ambassrassing face and might know something. She called LiFang and let him ing. LiFang was shocked and hesitated from a moment, but he finally ing.

"I am sorry, but。"LiFang said.

"But itis unnecessary to try to explain to me, because I believe you."Hujin said.

"You mean you five me,Hu. I am so sorry."LiFang said.

"Don't say sorry,my dairly.You never fet any appointment,maybe you have met something troublesome."Hujin replied and gave him a watch,"Look,this is the watch I have prepare for you,do you like it?"

"Oh,I like it very much.I should have deliver you some flowers but 。"LiFang said with the red face,"but I mistook the place,you know,I am always stupid, and I had a narrow-minded to you for I thought you didn't love me.So I thrown the gifts with anger."

"I am happy you care about me. I don't mind any gift,just becacuse your love and you sincere apology. This means be the best gift I have ever gotten.I love you,Li" Hujin relied.

"I love you too"said by LiFang.

纯手打,采纳(⊙o⊙)哦

Body languageBody language is used by people for sending messages to one another. It is very useful because it can help you make yourself easily understood. When you are talking with others,you are not just using words, but also using expressions and gestures. For example, waving one's hand is to say "Good-bye." A *** ile and handshake show wele, and clapping hands means congratulations. Nodding the head means agreement, but shaking the head means disagreement. The gestures are accepted both by Chinese and foreigners as having the same meanings.Different countries have different body language. For example, men in Russia, France and Arab countries kiss each other when they meet, but men in China or Australia shake hands instead of kissing. People in Puerto Rio like touching each other, but people from English speaking countries do not touth each other. If you touch an English person, you should say "Sorry.' People in Arab countries like standing close to one another when they are talking, but English people must keep a distance away when they are talking. In some Asian countries, you must not touch the head of another person. In Arab countries, you eat using the fingers of your right land;the left hand is not used at all. In parts of Asia you must not sit with your feet pointing at another person.When you use a foreign language, it is very important to know the meanings of gestures and movements in the foreign country. Following the customs will help you municate with people and make your stay there much more pleasant and fortable. 身势语身势语是用来帮人们传递信息的,身势语非常有用,因为它可以使对方很容易地明白你自己的意思。

我们同别人谈话时,并不仅限于用言语来表达,我们还用表情和身体的动作来向对方表达要传递的信息。例如:挥手表示“再见”,微笑和握手表示欢迎,拍手表示祝贺,点头表示同意,摇头表示不同意。

这些手势对说汉语的人和说英语的人来说,都具有相同的意思。对于不同的国家来说,身势语也不同。

例如,在俄罗斯、法国、阿拉伯国家里,男人们会晤时彼此亲吻。然而,在中国或澳大利亚男人不是亲吻而是握手。

在波多黎哥,人们喜欢彼此触碰,而英语国家的人不大这么做。如果你碰了一下英国人,你应该说声“对不起”。

阿拉伯人喜欢在交谈时彼此站得很近,而英语国家的人则乐意保持一定的距离。在有些亚洲国家里,你不可以触摸别人的头。

在阿拉伯国家,吃饭用右手的手指,根本不用左手。在亚洲的某些地方,你不可以坐着把脚跷起对着别人。

当你学一门外语时,了解这个国家的身势语很重要。遵守他们国家的习俗会助你与人交流,也会使你在此很愉快舒适。

根据需要选取!~望采纳。

写作英式英语和美式英语的差别

written English, there is not much difference in British and American English except that the Americans have improvised it whereever they could to look different. Ex. If in British English u hire a Taxi, u hire a cab in USA. I shall give u a few more examples.

British English:( See the difference in the use of tense)Riya is not at home. She has gone shopping.

American English: Riya isn't at home; she went for shopping.

In British English, the correct present perfect tense has been used but the Americans have improvised to their convenience and made it past indefinite tense. Here r some more examples for u to study in vocabulary especially.

British English American English

at the weekend on the weekend

live in X street live on X street

a player in the team a player on the team

Monday to Thursday Monday through Thursday

ten minutes past six ten minutes after six

five minutes to ten five minutes of ten

*** yse *** yze

cheque check (money)

centre center

colour color

defence defense

dialogue dialog

honour honor

jeweller jeweler

programme programe

metre meter

realise realize

skilful skilfull

theatre theater

traveller traveler

Aeroplane Airplane

angry mad

anywhere anyplace

biscuit cookie/cracker

There r numerous examples with me which distinguish beeen British English and American Emglish. In accent, the use of the vowel a is made 90% as in ash, bash. In British English there are enty vowels(speech sounds) but in American English there r only five speech sounds. This is how they have made English more easy, useful and practical. U may post ur specific queries and I shall try to give u the best answer to the best of my ability.

唉。。。实在是找不到了,给你找半个小时了,这个是最靠谱的了!!!!

你等一等,我已经完成了3篇了,剩下的缓一缓,2天内给你。

You are really a naughty student .Well ,I hope this is the last time you do like this . Dear Michael ,I am glad to meet you and make friend with you on the inter .In the half year We always had a good time every day when we chatted in English online .And my English is much better than before .Today I sincerely appreciate your selfless help to my English study .By the way ,It is nearly a month since we chatted online together ,and I am worrying about you .Is there something difficult with you which led your appearance ?If ,please tell me ,and I will spare no efforts to help you .I'm looking forward your reply . yours sincerely ,Wind Organic Food ,or Normal Food ? Recently izens have been discussing which food we should choose .And the answers are mainly divided in o parts ---anic food and normal food .For my own part ,I advocate anic food .The reason is following .On one hand ,anic food is grown up pletely naturally which means no pollution and fertilizers .That is one of reasons why normal food can not pare with it .On the other hand ,grown up with no pollution and fertilizers anic food is safer than what is grown up unnaturally .Some people says anic food has less kinds and the price is much higher ,which are quite obstacles for us to choose anic food .However our society is advancing and so is the technologies .In the not too distant future every ordinary people can enjoy anic food as well as a healthy and happy life . These days,Wang Jing, who is my best friend in my class, isn't talking to me.This is because of what happened last Wednesday .It was a cloudy day .I was playing football on the ground while Wang was cleaning the house .When I was going back to classroom to ask Wang to go home with me ,I heard someone was speaking ill words about me .He said that Wang Jing thought me dishonest ,for I didn't return the dictionaries on time which leading his homeword unfinished on time .In fact I was not dishonest ,I just fot it .But on that moment I was so rude that I rush into classroom and shouted at Wang ,for those words made me quite sick .After a short astonishment Wang shouted to me and rushed out angrily .I know we both have fault to the brake-up .And we both feel sorry to the other .Maybe I should take the first step .Then we will rebuild a firmer friendship ,I believe .。

row pu happily and healthily is the theme of people pursuring all the time.For children,it means playing games happily and do not e into contact with the danger,studying hard and have a health body.For *** s,it means facing and dispoing of the difficulties positively.Everything has the other side.It is valuable to held the optimistic attithde to the life.Then how can we do this?

Keep studying and improving yourself continuously.Not only the rigid contents in the books,but also the great people or things around you.It is necessary go outside to exercise.As the saying gose,a health body is the basic of everything.For example,taking part in the minity aactivities,fostering the interests.健康快乐的成长一直是人们追求的目标。对孩子来说,那就是快乐的玩耍,不接触危险的东西,好好学习和有一个好的身体。对大人来说,意味着积极地面对和处理问题。任何事都有另一面。对生活持积极的态度是很重要的。那如何做呢?

持续不断地学习和提高自己。不仅是书本上死板的内容,更要向你周围的优秀的人和事学习。去外面锻炼也是很重要的。俗话说,身体是一切的基础。例如,可以参加社区活动,培养兴趣爱好。

英语续写优秀作文

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悦悦哥哥

with the development of customer consumption concept, more and more customer choose to purchase high price luxury mooncake for gift. it is popular that the mooncake be transferred beeen different panies, anization, and individuals. at this time, people always tend to choose mooncake with luxury package.

as for mooncake itself, there is little difference, the most differences are demonstrated in package, for high price mooncake, there is always a plex package. but why not the simple one.

it is the manufacturers' market strategy to determine it. by this way, the gift market of mooncake may be prompted , and producer may achieve more benefits from the market, furthermore, this market may contribute to internal consumption and GDP growth, to provide more positon for employees.

the disadvantage is that it waste too much recources not for value-added subject. the producer share more risk to enter such market. if the mooncake is stagnant in market, it means high inventory level, the investment may not be refunded in time.

long time ago , There was a king , Name laison . He had three sons , But one day , he lost them..,He was very worried and sad so he went everywhere to look for them. One day he was passing a mountain,he saw some tigers playing in it .He came up to ask if they had seen his sons but got no answer. He went on to a field where some ducks were resting on it .He came up to ask about his lost sons but they also hadn't seen them. Finally he asked his friends in the woods to help him look for his sons .All the animals were very glad to help him because he was always to help others in the usual days .With the help of the animals in the forest his sons were found at the foot of a mountain.Laison thanked them again and again.。

dear sally

I'm sorry to hear that you're not feeling well i think you should consult the doctor as soon as possible. Nowadays, the weather changes rapidly and uncertainly, sometimes cold and sometimes hot. It is easier to get disease.

Don't eat the unhealthful or cold food, otherwise you may get ill by the month.

I know there is a good and famous doctor near my home. Normally I get well from illness within a week after consulted him. Maybe I can acpany you to see him tomorrow. Please call me by the evening today in need.

Please take rest and

Look,Mike is playing football with his friends.It is really exciting to watch Mike playing football because he plays very well.

And at the other side of the playground,Ja乏长催短诎的挫痊旦花ne is playing badminton with her best friend,Jane.I get really lost in the game.

I really like our sports day.

额,因为是小学五年级,所以我也不用什么定语从句什么的了,语法没有什么错误了

纯手工,所以剧情没什么看头

Hey dear, i am so sorry that it is not here any more. I like the bird so much. She is so lovely. I really want to keep and take care of it forever. But she is a bird, she needs the sky not the cage. So I let her go. My mom tells me, if you love someone, you should know what he needs and wants. Please five me. It is my way to love your gift.。

如何写好续写作文谈到“续写”,首先要明确什么是“续写”。

续写就是根据原文的内容,把故事继续编下去。有的时候,有了故事的起因,顺着这个故事的思路通过想象继续写它的经过和结果。

有的时候,告诉你故事的结尾,倒叙故事的起因和经过。有的时候,给你一个故事,要求续写的文章与原文成转折关系,这叫逆向续写。

还有一种续写,只告诉我们一个场景,给出时间、地点、人物,由此续写下去,想象的范围更广。总之,续写要根据原材料提供的线索、范围、人物性格以及作者的思路等等,续写故事情节的发展和人物的活动、心理、语言、表情等,使原文的情节能够合理地发展,构成完整的故事。

续写重要的一点是要紧扣中心来写,避免漫无边际。那么,续写时要注意什么呢?1.认真读懂给你提供的材料,想一想续写后整篇文章中心是什么,要根据这个中心,展开想象的翅膀,补续事情的发展和故事的结局。

展开想象要注意以下几点:①想象要符合原文的发展,人物和事物要与原文保持连续性和一致性。②想象要符合生活实际。

即使虚构,其内容也应该是现实生活中可能发生的,不能为了追求故事的离奇曲折,编得天花乱坠,使人难以相信。③想象成的作文,要与提供的材料融为一体,要有明确的中心,重点要突出,有详有略地把事情写清楚。

2.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上,并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致。故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。

3.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。读故事,续写作文续写就是围绕文章中心,联系生活实际、课外阅读或电影故事,给课文补充一个适当的段落,或 *** 一个合理的情节。

续写还可以结合我们的生活实际,根据老师提供的文章开头,续写成文;也可以根据文章的结尾,写出故事的延续和可能的结局。 续写文章时要注意: 一是要根据所提供的文章开头、结尾或其他线索,明确续写的方向和路子。

二是续写时,情节的发展要合乎逻辑,人物的思想要前后一致,叙述的语气上下也要一致。下面以《猪八戒吃西瓜》为例谈谈如何进行续写。

故事梗概:《猪八戒吃西瓜》是一篇略读课文,讲述了唐僧师徒四人在西天取经的路上,猪八戒偷懒、嘴馋,偷吃西瓜的事。表现了他可笑、可爱、笨拙憨厚的人物性格,也批评了这种自私嘴馋、好吃懒做的行为。

(原文详见人教版五年制小学语文第六册35课) 读了《猪八戒吃西瓜》的故事,同学们肯定会觉得猪八戒很可笑。可笑过之后,想不想对八戒说点儿什么,或者推测一下八戒吃完西瓜后将会发生的故事。

要写这次作文应注意以下几点: 1、承接上文,自然过渡 为了使续写的故事或要对八戒说的话写得生动有趣,而且要保持文章结构的完整性,应简要叙述一下猪八戒吃西瓜时的情景及当时的矛盾心理,但为了突出重点,这部分内容要写得简略些,自然过渡到下一段内容。 2、合理想象,生动有趣 八戒尽情享用甘甜可口的大西瓜后,将会发生什么事呢?或见此情景,你会对八戒说些什么呢?同学们可以结合自己的生活阅历大胆地展开想象,尽可能做到合理周密。

可能会想是由于猪八戒吃西瓜时狼吞虎咽,只顾自己,忘了师父、师兄,惹恼了悟空遭到了捉弄。在回去拜见师父的路上八戒突然肚子疼,搞得八戒满地打滚,痛恨自己不该贪吃,你可能会说八戒自作自受,不讲情理;或许想到八戒为了惩罚自己,承担了去西天取经之行化斋的一切任务,进而展示一下自己的真本领,你或许会说这是徒弟孝敬师父应该做的;或许想到八戒当着师父的面讲述了事情的来龙去脉负荆请罪,以后的日子变得善良仁慈不贪吃,你可能会说要是真的改掉偷懒贪吃的恶习该多好啊……同学们可能还有许多金点子,写出来比试一下,看谁写得更新奇、合理、有趣。

3、设置悬念,引人回味 八戒经历此次磨难之后,依然是自私嘴馋、好吃懒做,还是事事为他人着想呢?你希望自己心中的八戒是什么样的形象呢?希望同学们大胆地想象,给读者塑造出一个崭新的八戒形象,赢得读者的青睐。【 学生例文1 】 《猪八戒吃西瓜》续编唐僧师徒西去取经路过一座庙时准备讨点吃的,可里面没有人。

师父只好派孙悟空去找些野果子充机。站在一旁的八戒等不及了,也要跟着去。

可走到半路,八戒假装肚子疼,悟空早就看穿了八戒的诡计,但没有说出口,便一个跟头飞走了。这时,躺在树下的八戒发现了个西瓜,因为嘴馋把西瓜全吃了,而且找了四个充分的理由对付师父、悟空和沙僧。

可万万没有想到的是:采野果归来的悟空早已看得一清二楚了。悟空突然叫了一声,趁八戒愣神的工夫变成一只小飞虫钻进了八戒的肚子里。

八戒吃完最后一块西瓜后,怕被猴哥发现,把西瓜皮扔得远远的。这时,悟空来到八戒面前,拉着他去面见师父。

在回去的路上,八戒连续摔了四个跟头。悟空心想:这叫自作自受。

来到师父面前,八戒只好红着脸把事情的真相一五一十地告诉了师父,大家一听都哈哈大笑了。孙悟空便把采来的野果子分给大家吃,吃完后便继续赶路。

西行的路上,八戒直喊肚子疼。悟空风趣地说:“别耍花招了,又想吃‘西瓜’?”“不,俺老猪没骗你。”

八戒无奈地说。

My familyMy name is Wenwen。

I am 14 years oldI like listen to music.My father is doctor .My mother is driverMy brother is studentI have a happy family!My English teacher I have a English teacher. She teaches very well. She often *** iles to us. When we are in trouble, she can always help us in time. Once I got a cold. She hurried to the office and took some medicine to me. I was better soon. I thanked her very much. I love my teacher very much. 写自己喜欢吃的食物 1 I like banana very much. banana always grows in the warm area. it's nice to eat, and it is good for our healths. like us ,monkeys also like to eat bananas. you can see this in the zoo. 2 I'm a student.I like eggs and coconut.Because eggs is very good for me .It's very healthy.The coconut is a very sweet .The HauNan's coconut is very great.I like them. My class I'm a student.There are 38 desks and chairs in my classroom. And there are 6 windows on the wall. 38 students are in my class.My chinese teacher is Miss Gu ,my English teacher is Miss Feng and my math teacher is Miss Li.I like my class very much .Wele to my class. 2 I study in class ?and I feel very happy.there are 38 students and desks in my class.my chinese teacher,Miss gu,english teacher,miss feng and maths teacher,miss li,are all very friendly.I like them very much,and I like my class. Music Many people like music. It has many sorts: soft music is graceful, rock music fast, classical music great, light music relaxing, and children, music interesting. You can pick and choose whatever you like. Now popular songs are in fashion. If you like music, you usually like singing, too. I am no exception. My brother and I like pop songs, and my parents like to listen to soft music. We are a musical family. Do you like music? Is your family full of music, too? Music is really great! I like it very much. My Good Friend My name is ***.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to mnsic. Liu Yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. Every morning , she goes to school on foot. Every evening, she reads newspaper ai home. Then she goes to bed at nine. This is my good friend Liu Yun. Cartoons There are many television programs in Taiwan today, from TV aeries, quiz shows, soap operas, movies to cartoons. Of all the programs, I like to watch cartoons the best, like Cartoon neork, Disney and many others. I like to watch cartoons because they are funny and very interesting, especially when I am sad, tired or bored. I also like cartoon characters. They are so cute and vivid. We must use our imagination when we watch cartoons. Because they are often exaggerated, so you need to have a sense of humor. My hometown(我的家乡) I am from ShenZhen. In spring ,the weather is warm and wet. I can play kite. In summer, the weather is hot and wet. I can swim in the swimming pool. In the autumn, the weather is cool and dry. I can play kite, too. In the winter, the weather is cold and dry. It never snow.How about you? My favourite fruit My favourite fruit is apples. I like apples,because they are delicious.There are many kinds of apples,and they have different colours:red and green.The red apples are sweet,but a lot of green apples are not very sweet.So,many people don't like green apples at all. A lot of apples e from North China.Some of them are bigger than pears,and some of them are *** aller than peaches.It is very interesting,isn't it?Their pulps also have different colours:light yellow and green.The apples'pulps are light yellow,of course,the green apples' pulps are green. The apples are good for your health,they can make your face red and pretty.Do you think so?You can go and try it! 够了吧。

On the other hand, the Y member, whose original reason for joining may have been solely to get himself in shape, may get caught up in the institution's baseball program and find that his skill has developed to the point where he can play the game professionally. Similarly, the student who undertakes a course of study merely because it interests him and he wants to know more about it may find that it has mercial value. He has studied a foreign language and literature in order to understand the society that produced it, and then he may find that his special knowledge enables him to get a job as a translator. Or he may find that while his knowledge of chemistry is not of professional caliber, it is still sufficient to give him preference in a particular job over someone who lacks even that modicum of knowledge of the subject. But these are accidental and incidental. In general, certain courses of study are for the service of society and other courses are for self-improvement. In the hierarchy of our educational system, the former are the function of our professional schools and the latter are the function of the college of liberal arts.。

When the aerials are down, and your spirit is covered with snows of cynici *** and the ice of pessimi *** , then you've grown old, even at 20, but as long as your aerials are up, to catch waves of optimi *** , there's hope you may die young at 80.。

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