需要修改英文

If there are something need corrected, please tell me at any time.

please let me know if there is anything necessary to be revised 不能直接用need，因为是动词，这儿需用形容词做定语。

please let me know if there is anything need to be revised

楼主你写的好Chinglish哦。偶帮你全修改过了，希望能帮助你。WelcometoPutian.ItislocatedatthecenteroftheFujianprovincewhichisabeautifulcitywithoverthreemillionpeople.IhaveheardfromSamthatitspopulationismorethantheDallas`inUS.However,PutiancanonlybecalledasmallcityinChinabecausetherearemanycitieswhicharemuchbiggerthanit.PutianissimilartoanyothercitiesinChinabecausemoreandmorelargemodernbuildingsarebeingbuilt.Also,ithasmanynaturalandculturalsceneries.Firstly,allthenewcomersshouldvisittheMeizhouislandwhichisthehometownoftheseagoddessMazu.TherearealsomanybeautifultemplesforMazu.ThisisthestatueofMazuanditis14matterstall.Thatisanendlessexpenseofgoldenbeaches.Lastterm,allofourclassmateswentthere.Wechasedeachotheronthebeachandplayedwiththeseawater.Wehadagoodtime.

用modify就可以了！

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Please feel free to ask me,if anything need to be re-modified.