英语作文估分

语法一般，有些语病。词汇还不错。字写的整齐倒是挺关键的，改卷子的老师最讨厌字不工整的了。同意你的老师的意见，15-18分差不多。祝你好运！

写的不错高考时给分的标准是：1。字数够不够，控制在80-120 不可多不可少 字少了分就很低，字数一旦超过120或者140 就要扣2分2。卷面的整齐与否。3。有材料关联性是否正确。注意：不要求100%把材料列举的写上，但是 大体意思要正确。根据这几点看，你的作文相当不错，应该在23分以上。

My Father Father was my first teacher and is my dear friend. When I was a little girl, I used to sit on my father’s knees, listening to his stories. The story “Two friends and a Bear” told me “ a friend in need is a friend indeed.” I will never forget the story “Madame Curie” which tells me a truth “where there is a will, there is a way.” Father’s stories enriched my life and did a lot of good to my growth. When I was seven years old, I started primary school. I was young, so my father picked me up from school every day. On the way, I told father everything that happened at school. Father listened carefully and always smiled happily. Sometimes I sang a beautiful song. My sweet and lovely voice gave my father the greatest pride. My father is always proud of me. He hopes I will make great progress in my study. Now I have made up my mind to study harder and harder. I’m sure my father’s love will lead me to my success and I will love him forever!

通常把英语作文分七类，同学最好的办法把作文通过回忆复述出来. 给老师判断，如没有老师或不好意思读，也可以细读一下，今年作文有十二个句子，每个句子有信息，如漏了一项减两分，句型基本结构正常，如主谓不分错了，一句话有一句话的灵魂.如有纯粹性拼写错误，扣一分，结构上错了，就没有得分.所以同学把作文要和标准作文核对一下，最好给老师看一下。