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Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him. First, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

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datang1201

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垂杨紫陌

I have to warn you if you don't care about using internet, because you are staying in the websites average 20 hours a day. No matter you use mobile phone or computer, it will kill you by loosing health and death in the minute.

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执念梦浮生

Theory good studentGood students are always loved by the teacher. And be a good student and each child hope, then, what is the good student? Don't only performance is good, it hardly is is good student?I think, the result good and is not a good student. If only depending on the results, he decided to a person's character, also rather too hasty it. Don't agree? That if a student achievement is very good, but it owes his cheating technology, do you think he is a good student? Of course, the result is also important. Every examination is in the test you this science master how? If you what all can't, that's...I have read in the paper that one thing: small strange is a school of a student. Because HouFa hours a high fever, her intelligence only one-third of ordinary people. Every time the exam, no matter how hard she tried, she scores is always 30 points, is always the last one class. Chinese teachers don't like her, thought she dragged the class and grade hind legs, and are prepared to give up her, and let her sit to class last table. Small strange oneself also very sad, and are determined to study hard, but a month later, she scores still no progress. The math teacher but secretly observed her, and to their parents know the situation, understand what happened. He urged the Chinese teacher's seat to the small adjust come back, and in all classmate in front praised the small strange, also let students learn from her. Small strange also renewed assertiveness. The following every time the exam, small strange still take an examination of 30 minutes, but different things, classmates and teachers all think that she does best.Public class, the teacher is the lecture. Monitor the memories around yesterday and students go to the park scene, a smile on his face. Allison listened carefully to the class, and made notes from time to time. "The text to the central idea what?" The teacher began to ask questions. Well? Allison looked at notes, suddenly understand what, raised his hand. And around, still intoxicated in memory. The teacher seemed to see the smile on the face around, thinking she understand, he gave a cry "JiangLinLin" around zhang two monks-confused, but can only stand up, a face of confusion at the teacher. The teacher seems a bit angry, look at the side of the hand allison, beckoned to let her answer. "I think it should be praises the ancient working people's hard work." Allison replied. The teacher nodded, let allison sat down and stared at around, continued class.Good students, not necessarily result. As long as you really hard, even if you only got 30 points, you are great students.论好学生好学生总是受老师喜爱的.而成为一个好学生也是每一个孩子所希望的,那么,什么才是好学生呢?难道只有成绩好,才算得上是好学生吗?我认为,成绩好的并不是好学生.如果单靠成绩,就决定一个人的品行,也未免太草率了吧.不认同吗?那如果一个学生成绩很好,但这都得归功于他的作弊技术,你还认为他是好学生吗?当然,成绩也十分重要.每一次考试都是在检测你这门知识掌握得如何?如果你什么都不会,那就太……我曾在报纸上看到过这么一件事:小奇是某学校的一名学生.由于小时侯发了一次高烧,她的智力只有常人的1/3.每次考试,无论她怎么努力,她的成绩永远是30多分,永远都是班级的最后一名.语文老师不喜欢她,认为她拖了班级的后腿,便准备放弃她,并且让她坐到了班级的最后一桌.小奇自己也很伤心,并下定决心要努力读书,但是一个月过去了,她的成绩仍然没有进步.数学老师却暗中观察她,并向其父母了解情况,才明白了事情的原委.他劝说语文老师把小奇的位子调回来,并且在全般同学面前表扬了小奇,还让同学们向她学习.小奇也重拾了自信.以后的每一次考试,小奇仍然考30分,但不同的事,同学们和老师们都认为她考得最好.公开课上,老师正在讲课.班长琳琳回忆着昨天和同学一起去游乐园玩时的情景,脸上露出一丝笑意.佳佳认真地听着课,并时不时地做着笔记.“这篇课文的中心思想是什么呢?”老师开始提问.这个嘛?佳佳看着笔记,忽然明白什么,举起了手.而琳琳,仍陶醉在回忆之中.老师似乎看到了琳琳脸上的笑意,以为她懂,就叫了一声“江琳琳”琳琳丈二和尚——摸不着头脑,但只能站起来,一脸迷茫地看着老师.老师似乎有些生气,看看身边举手的佳佳,示意让她回答.“我认为应该是赞颂了古代劳动人民的辛勤.”佳佳回答道.老师点点头,让佳佳坐下,又瞪了一眼琳琳,继续讲着课……好学生,不一定要成绩好.只要你真正努力了,哪怕你只考了30分,你也是好学生.

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古董的杂货铺

Dear Friends,

I advise you aren't addicted to net surfing,because you will lose yourself in it .besides,spending too much time and energy online is harmful to your physical and mentalhealth.Now I would like to give  you some suggestion,I think you must try to control the time of net surfing and adjust your life .for example,you can play basketball or other sports with your friends,which can not only help you keep healthy,but strengthen your friendship; you can communicate with your parents and friends,sharing your happiness and sorrow with them; you can read some interesting books to expand your knowledge .

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百度.百度知道[引用时间2017-12-21]

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写作思路:从各个方面来阐述沉迷网络的害处,表达出沉迷网络的后果。

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Addicted to the Internet, it is inevitable that I will not work and study. The game is only a moment, life is permanent.

沉迷网络,必然无心工作和学习。游戏只是一时的,生活却是永久的。

Persuasion from the perspective of money. Most online games are very expensive. A lot of money is consumed in online games, which will inevitably lead to the decline of the quality of real life. If you can't eat well or dress well every day, just for playing games, isn't it worth the loss?

从金钱角度去劝说。网游大部分都是很烧钱的。大量的钱被消耗在网游上,必然造成现实生活质量的下降。每天吃不好穿不好,只为玩游戏,不是得不偿失吗?

Persuasion from the perspective of family affection. Addicted to online games, the family are very worried, they have a big, but also let their parents worry, and can not give them a better life, is not it very unfilial? Filial piety is the first of all good things, and animals are filial to their parents, not to mention us.

从家人亲情角度劝说。沉迷网游,家人都很担心,自己已经很大了,还要让父母操心,又不能给他们更好的生活,不是很不孝吗?百善孝为先,禽兽尚知孝敬父母,更何况我们人呢。

Persuasion from the perspective of friendship. People are social animals, we all have friends, we all rely on the care and help of friends in order to have a happy life. It's not putting the cart before the horse to abandon reality, to enter the virtual world, and to forget the care and help of friends in reality.

从友情角度劝说。人是社会性动物,大家都有朋友,大家都是要靠朋友的关心和帮助才能有快乐的生活。抛弃现实,投入虚拟世界,忘记了现实里朋友的关心帮助,不是本末倒置吗。

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