挑剔的嘴
Vae, (we will) support you forever!Last year，I heard about a online(internet) singer named Vae。I have listened to a song called 《The Burial of the Rose》in the streets, but I did not know that he wrote it。And now I really admire him ..and I began to listen to his songs such as 飞蛾(Moth) 有何不可(Why not(?)) 。。and so on 。 I like every song very much 。Every song he wrote was stunning to the heart and empathize with people. Vae is a handsome boy , but he is also a scholar who writes beautifully. His writings make me sad and happy. I like his rap. I like his modest sarcastic remarks. I like his humor. I like how he can play piano. I like how he can play guitar. I like his pretty and organized writings. He is quiet,staid, and generous. Isn't he cute enough for you to pinch? I think every one of his fans must support him forever! 谢咯！Thank you!
非飞卖品
Vae bump you as I live last year，I heard about a singer on internet named Vae。I have ever listened a song called "Rouses' funeral"in the street .I did not know it's from his hands.And now(最好改成since then) I really admire(最好用adore) him .I began to listen to his songs such as "moth" "whatever but nothing" and so on .Every song I like very much .Every song from him could touch my true emotion & mood string. Vae is a handsome boy ,But compared with it ，smart mind,elegant moving art-hue pen-orientation is more attracting & favorable. 文笔优美 感人有时让人欢喜。喜欢他的rap .喜欢他自嘲的谦虚 ，喜欢他的幽默，喜欢他会弹钢琴 ，喜欢他会弹吉他 ， 喜欢他漂亮工整的字。As his rap,his self-kidding modesty,his humor,his gift of playing the piano & guitar,and also favor his delicate handwritings.他文静 稳重 大度 是不是可爱到让人想捏捏 I thought that every his fans must 永远支持他！Moreover(表示连接)his serenity honest & generosity is lovely enough to squeeze him which making all his fans suppoting him for their lives.文中除了，我指出的点，其它没有语法错误，放心的发表吧！！希望有些帮助！！
