英语作文纠错

Since we came to the world,the importance of the family had appeared.With our parents' help,we gradually grow up.In the family,we can get a lot of suggestions from our parents.They tell us not to play on the streets,or how to get well along with others.Sometimes their advice is great,but there're some times they give us a bad advice.However,whatever they say,we can feel their love from their actions and behaviors.We always feel happy because parents are around us all the time. Family is a place where we get care.Family is really important to us all.

Do you like learning English ? Can you study English very well? If your answer is "no",let me tell you how to learn English.I often listen to English songs every morning, they are very great and it is good for study English.I also like taking notes in English classes and speaking English at home. As for reading,I think we need read as much english newspaper as possible.It can help us remember English words, and I do exercises once or twice a week.Now,do you know how to learn english? I hope you can study it very well

第一句应改为 Do you like learning/to learn English?然后 i often listen to english songs every morning 这句有逻辑错误 既然是often 那就不应该再用every morning了 因为often是经常而不是每天都这样 最好改成 I often listen to English songs in the morning.i also like take notes in English classes 改为i also like taking notes in English classes many english newspaper 改为 much English newspapers.

题目不对，seaside是海边海滨，是土~~要么直接用sea 或者用shallow sea也行错误是有点多 太长了

错误多，分值有点少哟！①题目错：First Swimming in the Sea（注意什么词该大小写）②Summer holidays has been arriving at改为：Summer holiday has began ，I had been expecting that day for a long time.不好意思，后面看不大懂