改正错误英语作文

calling改为called. deep改为deeply. around去掉。 because of 后的of去掉。（going into a store前面，你应该少打或打错了，题目应该不会这么出）salesman和show中间加to. （replied后面一句你应该少打了字，或打错了）

There was a man 1.called Ted who loved his wife 2.deeply. He wanted to buy a present for his wife.So he went to the town and looked around 3.in some jewellery store.Because of his wife had always wanted a diamond necklace，he decided to buy her it this time.4.went into a store，he asked the saleswoman 5.to show him a diamond necklace."How much is it？"he asked."Two thousand dollars，" replied the one what cost one thousand dollars."Anything cheaper？"6. asked the man.So he was shown one 7.costed five hundred dollars.But it was still too expensive for him."Anything really cheaper？"asked the man.The saleswoman gave him the mirror."It's ten dollars.I guess it's 8.cheaper enough."said the saleswoman.

that is a great bandi love the group which playplay music which is loud andbut other timeswhich is quiet and gentlethe fantastic voice and fair-sounding rhythm attract me so muchmake us full of energy and full of hope for the future

改正后：My favorite band is The Cranberries， they are a great band from Ireland. I love groups that play different kinds of music. Sometimes, they play music that's loud and energetic and sometimes, they play music that is quiet and gentle.Their songs are very amazing,the unique voices and the beautiful melody deeply interested me. I think their songs make us feel happy and relaxed,makes us full of energy and full of hope about the future. 注：我用的是美式语法