我的家乡英语山西

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Introduction of my hometown

--Yuncheng

Yuncheng is seat in the south of Shanxi province, which is skirted on three sides by Lvliang Mountains and Taihang Mountains, with one side opening onto Yellow River, having the total area about 24,000 square kilometers. Yuncheng is the most famous place and local people believe that it was called China earliest in story.

This ancient city has a approximately 5000 years history. From Chinese myth of Nvwa to Guanyu, archaeologists find many valuable sites here.

This wide piece of land reserves antiquity records of human’s using fire, making salt, growing crops, feeding silkworms and est. unexaggratingly speaking, Yuncheng, also named Hedong, which means in the east of river, is the cradle of Chinese civilization.

Compared with other cities, Yuncheng is the most richly endowed with some major natural resources for industry, especially energy resources such as iron, coal, and magnesium. Because of the abundance of sunshine and mild climate, Yuncheng has an ideal environment for many kinds of north fruits, like apple, to grow.

Never showing his long life from the date of human’s birth, tourist industry benefiting from the well development of transportation system, becomes an important part in Yuncheng’s economy.

You would find Buddhism in Wutai Mountain, enjoy your fantabulous view on Yellow River Bridge, touch those age-old compounds, and would also taste various kinds of delicious food made of flour.

Not only is it a historical city, but a modern city as well. Yon may like to find its beauty by your own.

Welcome to Yuncheng.

英语作文评分标准：

一档13-15分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。

二档10-12 分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。

三档7-9分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。

四档4-6分 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。

五档1-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。

六档0分 空白。

我的家乡——山西临汾:

My hometown, Linfen, is known as the "flower and fruit city". It also has the nickname "Snail City" and "Pingyang mansion". Linfen is the first emperor of China, the hometown of Yao, and one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization.

I love this beautiful city affectionately. There are many scenic spots and parks in my hometown, such as: the first gate, the Yao temple, the drum tower, the waterlogged River Park and so on. What I like most is the waterlogging River Park. Every season, it has its own unique style. Spring is coming. Large tulips are blooming, pink, red, yellow and purple. They are full of flowers and gorgeous. From afar, the sea of flowers is like a fairyland in the world. Children roll in flowers, butterflies and bees play in flowers. In summer, the lotus opened, rented a yacht, passed through the dense lotus clusters, picked up a piece of lotus leaf, cleaned it in the river, and wore it on the head for fun.

The arrival of autumn brought colorful chrysanthemums to the park, and colorful flowers brought visitors away, afraid that they would not see the beautiful scenery when they left. The winter was accompanied by goose snow and heavy snow, and changed into silver in the park.

In the early morning, the river was covered with mist, and the tourists sat in the boat enjoying the beautiful scenery. At noon, the sun evaporated the fog, and the sun came out. Some people were enjoying the cool under the shade of trees, fishing by some banks, and watching beautiful scenery. In the evening, the waterfalls in the river opened, and there was a cave behind the water. There was always a sense of Monkey King's appendage from behind.

Linfen is not only beautiful, but also has many specialties, such as the crisp meat noodles of Hongdong, the cut noodles of Fushan, the walnut of ancient county, the pear of Xi county, etc. But my favorite is the meatball noodles. The beef balls are spicy and refreshing, often sweating after eating. A large bowl full of red hot oil. Simple and simple delicious, heartily and thoroughly.

In summer, a bowl of hot noodles makes people forget the hot summer. In winter, a bowl of hot noodles can withstand cold and cold. It is better to use bowl noodles than any panacea.

Linfen welcomes the arrival of you! My friends, please believe me, you will be attracted to the beautiful scenery here and be conquered by the delicious food here.

拓展资料：

我的家乡——临汾被称为“花果城”，也有别称“蜗牛城”、“平阳府”。临汾是中国第一代皇帝——尧的故乡，也是中华文明的发祥地之一。

我深情的热爱这个美丽的城市。 我的家乡风景优美，有许多景区和公园，如：天下第一门华门、尧庙、鼓楼、涝洰河公园等。可我最喜欢的就是涝洰河公园了。每个季节，它都有自己独特的风采。春天来了，大片的郁金香盛开了，有粉的，有红的；有黄的，还有紫的，它们缤纷盛开，十分艳丽。远远望去，花海一片，就仿佛身临人间仙境一般，小孩子在花海中打滚、蝴蝶、蜜蜂在花丛中嬉戏。夏天，荷花开了，租上游艇，在茂密的荷花丛中穿过，顺手摘上一片荷叶，在河中清洗干净，戴在头上遮阳真是好玩极了。

秋的到来，为公园送来了五颜六色的菊花，五彩缤纷的花朵引得游人流连忘返，生怕走了就看不到美景了。冬伴随着鹅毛大雪，给公园换上了银装，梅花开了寒风中飘着阵阵香气。

清晨，河面上弥漫着薄雾，游人们坐着船，欣赏着朦胧中的美景。中午，太阳蒸融了雾气，太阳出来了人们，有的在树阴下乘凉，有的河滩旁钓鱼，还有的在观赏美景。傍晚，河中的瀑布开了，水流后有个山洞，从后面过总有美猴王附体的感觉。

临汾不仅风光美，还有许多特产，如：洪洞的酥肉面、浮山的刀削面、古县核桃、隰县的梨等。可我的最爱是牛肉丸子面了。牛肉丸子面鲜辣爽口，吃完后往往大汗淋漓。满满的一大碗面上，飘着鲜红的辣油。淳朴简单的美味，令人酣畅淋漓。

夏天，一碗热辣辣的面，让人忘记酷暑。冬天，一碗热辣辣的面能抵挡彻骨严寒，感冒了，来碗面比任何灵丹妙药都好用。

临汾欢迎你们的到来！朋友请相信我，你们来到这里定会被这里的美景所吸引，被这里的美食所征服。