高考英语作文讲解

一、几点重要原则

1.智者利用押题，傻子依赖押题!

2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达，并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要!

3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强，尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。

4.文似看山不喜平，起承转合一定要有!

5.“见微知著，一叶知秋”，几个亮点足矣：有道是：浓妆淡抹总相宜，作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。

6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。

二、善用万能句以不变应万变

历届高考，书面表达考得最多是提示作文，即提供一定的情景内容，要求考生完成100词左右的短文。

从命题方式看，有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等;体裁以应用文为主，记叙文为辅：题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看，历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文，采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。

备考时，同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下，从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳)，把它们重新记忆，一定记牢。这样，高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。

最后阶段，还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式，比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等，牢记英语的五个基本句式，背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。

考场答题前，应仔细审题，研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点，理顺要点，确立基本的写作思路，不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏，构思好写几个方面，缺一不可。

写作时，尽量用学过的英语句型和词组。少写长句和复杂句以免弄巧成拙、漏洞百出。但目前高考有关书面表达的评分标准要求作文中应有“较多的语法结构和词汇”，因此同学们在书面表达中不能都写小句、短句和单句，还要正确运用高级词汇和复杂结构。恰当运用过渡词，使写出来的文章含金量更高，更具可读性。

三、高分作文六大特性

1.条理性。指的是合理安排文章结构。首先，在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次。根据需要，安排好段落，各段之间要层次分明，也要重视每一段的开头和结尾，开头语往往是总起句，结尾语往往是总结句。

2.准确性。指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达，避免中式英语，在实践中不断总结中英用法的差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。

3.流畅性。指根据整篇文章思想的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。

4.简洁多样性。简洁性就是语言简洁，不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。这也是新课程标准对写作的评价标准。

5.思想性。新标准对写作的要求，增加了情感因素，在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时，适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。

6.美观性。指的是卷面书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。

四、怎样才能有‘拽”的感觉

1.高考写作的实质——变相考查句型与词汇的灵活应用

英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是不要老去给这个不变的内容穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让阅卷老师能看到不同，而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。

2.写作的评分标准——怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口

我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右，写作满分25分，15分也就是个及格分，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是简单句子的堆砌，没有任何亮点。而20多分的作文在句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子穿的'衣服已经不是校服，而是李宁、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉。

3.写作提分的三要素——句型。连词。高级词汇

句子是我们写作文最大的单位。有了漂亮的句子。用好的连词将其连句成段，再加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就诞生了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子，最难的是高级词汇，限于大家的词汇还比较有限。一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上，因为这个最容易把握。

但是大家又有这样的困惑，学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊，动辄成五十上百句的，大家背得挺多，但是面对考试的时候，发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用，而是它们太干了，就好比一根干骨头，大家嚼起来很没有味。也不知道该把它们往哪里放。

在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行、迅速提高的练习方法，在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来，就一定会有收获。

找出历年真题，一周只需要写两篇。但是要这么来写。

1.把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。

2.逐一地进行翻译，不是用简单句。而是要刻意地去想：

(1)可以用什么样的复杂句;

(2)怎样去避开不会的表达，转义。

例如：

这本书是如此的有趣，以至于我读了一遍又一遍。

1.This book was so interest，ing that l read it again and again，

2.This was such an interest，ing book that l read it again andagain，

3.This was s0 jnteresting abook that l read it again and a—gain

4.So interesting was thisbook that l read it again and a—gain

这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句，因为它用了倒装。

4.如何备考

其实这种思维大家都有。但是没有成为一种思路，让它能在考试中起到作用，那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地，一方面大家要分数。但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说，有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文，所以练习是很重要的，要是现在不练而把高考当练习。那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平，而应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇。时间都是挤出来的，希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。

老师叮咛:李辉老师说，“书面表达套路套话都背过了没？如果你的答案是Yes，那么现在才是你开始做题的时候！”想要提高作文能力,技巧是关键!下面的六个技巧都是值得同学们优先记忆学习的提分技巧!经过了全网首席高考英语名师李辉老师团队高度认真的整理校对,无错、可信!可供全国各省高中生打印、背诵！ 高考英语优秀作文的技巧特征：一、层次不乱 二、句式多变三、亮点若干 四、巧妙串联五、蠢错不犯 六、整洁卷面 一．层次不乱开头：第一个要点主体：第二个要点结尾：第三个要点二．句式多变1.长短变化 eg：时间过的真快。A long time has gone by before I realize it.It has been a long time since we last met.How time flies!Long time no see!eg：我成功了。I succeeded in doing...I am very successful in doing...I achieved my goal in doing...I fulfilled my dream.I did.... and I made it.eg：你很喜欢这里的天气，我也很喜欢这里的天气。You love the weather here and I love the weather here, too.You love the weather here and I love it too.You love the weather here and me too.2.主、被动变化eg：我每天都要完成大量的作业，很是疲劳。I have to do a lot of homework and I'm very tired. Mountains of homework every day buries me, making me exhausted.eg：我每天都坚持锻炼，这样对我的健康有好处。I take exercise every day, which is good for my health.Taking exercise is my daily routine, which, I believe, will greatly benefit my physical health. 3.同功能句型变化eg：听到这个消息后，我感到很兴奋。After I heard the news, I was very excited.On hearing the news, I was very excited.Having heard the news, I was thrilled.eg：我没有完成作业，老师很生气。I failed to finish my assignment, and the teacher was very angry.I failed to finish my homework, which made the teacher very angry.The teacher was angry with me because I failed....eg：如果我想实现梦想，只有努力学习。If I want to realize my dream, I have to work hard.Only through hard work can I fulfill my dream.eg：直到毕业了我才理解了老师所说的话。I didn't understand my teacher's words until I graduated.It was not until I graduated that I came to understand what my teacher had told us.eg：我觉得你应该学习数学。I think you should major in math.In my opinion, learning math is not a bad idea for you.If I were you, I would absolutely take math as my major.eg：抱歉，我不能参加这次野营了。I'm sorry that I can't take part in the camping.I have to apologize to you that I can't make it to the camping this time.How I wish I could put off the job interview and go camping with you guys.4.主语变化 5.同义词变化6.横向比较变化三．亮点若干英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西1. 一般学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构2. 恰到好处的名言、言语等3. 一语中的的修辞手法 1.高级句型例文：I’ve been studying American customs according to a task assigned by my teacher recently. Never in my wildest imagination can I be so crazy about American traditions that I’m desperate for more books to learn about them. However, it bothers me that books related to this subject are quite rare and limited, making it a barrier for me to do further exploration. To overcome this disadvantage, I’m desperately in need of your help. Could you please buy some relevant books for me? Any native books concerning American customs are OK. And three or four ones are fine. As for the date, could you please be kind enough to have them delivered before next Monday? Last but not least, I promise to transfer money to you immediately I receive the parcel. In sum, you are the very person who is able to provide me with a glimpse into brilliant and colorful American culture.模板：很多a lot ofa good number ofa large amount ofa great deal ofa mountain of homeworka sea of peopleabundant / adequate参加take part injoin inparticipate incompete insign up for …因此so/ thereforeas a result,as a consequence,consequently例： 这个暑假我有许多作业要做。I have a lot of homework to do in this summer holiday.学神版：My short summer holiday will be hopelessly filled up by mountains of homework, making it impossible for me to make any other plans to follow my little interests. 你的文章一定会深受同学们欢迎。Your article will be welcome to our students.学神版：The article written by a native speaker like you will undoubtedly be well received by students in our school, as they are eager to know more about the outside world. 2.恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色1.Practice makes perfect.2.God helps those who help themselves.3.Where there is a will, there is a way.4.One false step will make a great difference.5.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.6.Experience is the mother of wisdom.7. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.8. More haste, less speed.9. It‘s never too old to learn.10. All that glitters is not gold.11. Look before you leap.12. Rome was not built in a day. 3.大胆使用基本的修辞手法比喻eg：所有学生都在忙着准备考试。All the students are busy preparing for the coming exams.All the students are as busy as bees preparing for the coming exams.夸张eg：我感觉压力很大。I feel great pressure.I felt as if I were under a mountain and I can't even breathe.拟人eg：我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。I feel all my classmates laughing at me.I felt as if even the birds on the trees are laughing at me.四．巧妙串联起：first of all, to begin with, above all...承：in addition, besides...转：however, on the other hand...合：in my opinion, all in all, in a word...五．蠢错不犯赘词现象多发中学生英语写作中常见的13种语言错误：1.主谓不一致My father and I likes(like) going fishing by the lake. Large quantities of soil has been washed away.2.时态、语态混用Last night, I had(删去)enjoyed a party. The painting on the wall(添加was) damaged seriously.3.句子成分残缺I stood up and saw there(添加was) a boy. The young man(添加was) running in the street. 4.习惯搭配误用I once heard from(of) the animal like this.We passed away(by) the building. 5.名词单、复数不分I made many friend(friends) in the summer camp. We can get some informations(information) from the Internet.6.动词单、复数不分Our teacher often say(says) that success lie(lies) in hard work.Mr. Smith, together with some students, are(is) coming to our school. 7.赘词现象多发I hope you can return back to(删除) our school soon.8.基本词汇拼写错误I flied to New York directly from Beijing.This will be done immediatly(immediately).9.前后人称不一致The boy was born in a poor family but she works(work) hard.We watched a few movies and we loved it(them).10.动词原形作主语/宾语Take(Taking) a walk after dinner is very good for you.At that moment, I didn't feel like take(taking) a walk.11. 逻辑主语与主句主语不一致Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. 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高考英语作文的类型包括：书信类、看图写作文类、话题类等。

表格式书面表达是近年高考常选的命题方式之一，而且，所用体裁也相对稳定，以记叙文、应用文、说明文为主；题材多种多样，有书信、日记、介绍、通知等。

考生只需根据表格里的提示内容，确定所要表达的要点，最后运用自己所掌握的句型和词语知识，写出一篇要点全、语句通、条理清、表达明、思路活、书写正的短文。

具体的范文模板链接：

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