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你写得不错, 我稍稍改了一下, 你看看。Dear Sir/Madam, Thank you for your precious time spent in reading this email. I am a Chinese self-study examination student majored in Business Administration. I am an Undergraduate student and I want to (这儿怎么断了?) With a plan for further education and study in this field，and great respect for your university，would you please help me to clarify the following questions? 1、 Does your university accept self-study examination student? 2、 If you can, what are the conditions and what should I prepare for? Thank you very much for your time and patience again. Sincerely, Albee Jiang
异次元2015
我纯粹是路过，随便说两句。作为申请美国大学的过来人，建议你1，不要用一封咨询信去发各个邮箱，没有必要，弄不好会弄巧成拙，起不到impress人家的作用。2，就算你要联系人家，提问提一点稍微显示你做过“功课”的问题。你说的什么入学专业要求，研究生专业分类，费用，我敢保证这些信息都在大学官方网站的某个角落，你就应该去自己查，而非这样去问。做好功课是对申请的最好准备。
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