Cathy傻丫头
1.trying 改成 try（and为并列连词，read和try应为同一词性） 2.in 改成 by（用心用by heart记住就行） 3.form（打错了，养成） 后加a（一个好习惯，可数） 4.listening改为listen，此处缺谓语5.去掉with后的the（此处没有特指其余全部）6.I 后加have（根据上下文,这里指练习后现在的结果,而不是过去的事情,故须在I后加 have以构成现在完成时.） 7.speaking改成spoken（口语应是spoken English） 8.best 后加to（try one's best to do sth尽力做某事，固定搭配）9.me 改成 myself（express oneself意为表达思想） 10.why 改成 how（这里的表语从句应是学英语的方式,而不是学英语的原因）注：你是不是哪个地方打错了，应该是有一个是对的呀，请与原文校对。
半半童学
As my mother and father was (were) always busy working,(去掉so) I was often at home by myself.I felt boring (bored) all the time and I felt sorry for myself.One day,in (on) my way home from school,I saw a men(man) living in the park.he was wearing dirty and worn-out clothes.he gave me a big smile when he saw me .he looked as if he was(were) the happiest man in the world.looking at him, I realized how luckily(lucky) I really was. I have. enough food to eat and enough clothes to wear and I had. hardworking. parents who really cared about him(me).I realized how grateful I was to my parents for all that I had.
下雨不流泪
Last summer I went to London for my holiday. I spent just a week there. while I was staying there ，I visit(visited) many places of (and) people .I found a very intrested(interesting) thing there . One of my Chinese friends have(had) been living in London and she told us that many English families don't(didn't) like to buy new television sets. They can(could) lend(borrow) TV sets in many shops there. The shops are(were) often filled with a great many of people. There they can borrow a set very easy(easily）, and it costs them only（加a) little. Then it can(could) be taken home or used for a long time.
会逃跑的桃子
更正在括号处标明，保证准确率！总共有十一处错误，有一处肯定是楼主打字有误所致。 The teacher I loved (去掉her) most was my English teacher in my senior high school. She was one of those strict (teacher改成teachers) but she was very (patiently改成patient) with us and cared about each one of us.Thus we guys all respected (去掉for) her. She told us many stories about English history and (spend改成spent) a lot of time (teach改成teaching) us literature and how to write. She always (writes改成wrote) helpful comments and suggestions for writing, organizing and (presented改成presenting) better work. She inspired us to read and write for pleasure, (that改成which) gave us confidence. She always made us (去掉to) feel happy in her class. She made (加入a) big difference to our lives.That's why I teach now.如果你满意我的答案，敬请采纳，这是对我们答题者劳动的尊重，多谢！
