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西角阿希

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整体来说不错,就是最后一段似乎结尾过于笼统,可以考虑多写点“废话”(套话)上去,祝你成功

12年英语2大作文

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VII. Writing (作文): (共20分) 99. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信) Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares toomuch about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. (假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信,谈谈你的看法,并给她一些建议。)(注意:文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。)这是2012上海中考英语作文题目附上范文1篇Dear Betty, Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried about you. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful way. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “The journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation. Yours, Joe

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