yk小康哥
如下：
My name is Lu Wei. I'm 13 years old. I'm a quiet girl!
我叫路薇，13岁，我是一个文静的女孩子！
I'm in fifth grade.
我已经五年级了。
I like watching TV, so I spend most of my energy watching TV. Sometimes, I watch TV when I eat and when I read.
我这个人爱看电视，所以大部分精力都用在了看电视身上了。有时候，我吃饭也要看着电视，看书也看着电视。
At first, I thought it was to kill two birds with one stone and have the best of both worlds, but next, I still didn't do a good job.
一开始，我以为是一举两得，两全其美，可是接下来一考虑，还是一件事情也没有做好。
I have many advantages and disadvantages. I will correct these shortcomings in the future and learn from others' strengths to make up for my own weaknesses.
我有许多优点，也有许多缺点。我以后要改正这些缺点，取人之长，补己之短。
I want to change myself and be a new me.
我要改变自我，做一个新的我。
妞妞们要健康
Last Chinese New Year. I and my father, mother, grandparents, brother went to changbaishan by bus. In the morning we came down the mountain. I saw wooded mountains, wild flowers bloom. We climb up the hill along the mountain path. Come halfway up the mountain, I feel a little tired，my shoes broke. Dad said to me,“tingting， don’t do anything halfway.”at last，So I insisted reached the top, the top of the scenery so beautiful.We were flying kites, I was thirsty, my mother bought me a bottle of water, .finally we went home.finally，Since then, I've kept these shoes。i was very happydear mike,haven’t seen you for a long time. how have you been? i am missing you all the time. as the weather is splendid now, i have made a plan to go out to the countryside by bike. each of us may take food for the picnic, which we will have at the hillside. the countryside must be very lovely, with grass and trees growing flourishingly, flowers full bloom and bright sunshine. we can enjoy the scenery to our hearts content, at the same time and take some pictures as a memory. it is possible for us to meet at the bus stop 8 a. m. i am sure we will have a good time. do come and join us.yours always,Beijing, the capital of People's Republic of China, the central municipality, National Center City China, Chinese politics, culture, education and international exchange center, while the decision-making centers and management centers in China's economy and finance. Beijing is located in the northern end of the North China Plain, southeast connected with Tianjin, the rest is surrounded by Hebei Province. Beijing has built more than 3000 years of history of the capital city and the history of 850 years, is one of "China's four ancient capitals", with some international influence, which first appeared in the literature of the name "thistle." Beijing since the Yuan, Ming blend of Chinese culture, has many historical sites and cultural landscapes, is the world's largest city has the world's c
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The west moon sets in the East, the sky is slightly bright, and half a bottle of sake is carefree. When the horse is in white clothes, she looks back and smiles
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写作思路：根据题目要求，介绍六一的活动内容，以及自己的感受。
Finally looking forward to the arrival of June 1, how happy I am.
终于盼到了六一的到来，我是多么的开心呀。
In order to celebrate June 1, our school held the activities in advance.
为了庆六一，我校提前举行了庆六一的活动。
On that sunny day, I came to school with great interest.
那一天阳光明媚，我兴致勃勃地来到学校。
The campus is full of happiness, and every class is well dressed.
校园里一片喜气洋洋，个个班级打扮得漂漂亮亮的。
Classroom clean, desks are surrounded by a circle, students sitting on the seats chatting, noisy in the classroom.
教室里打扫得干干净净，课桌都围成了一圈，同学们坐在座位上聊着，在教室里闹着。
Around 1:00, we came to the playground with stools.
1点左右，我们搬着凳子来到了操场上。
After the president delivered a speech on the rostrum, he began to celebrate the sixth anniversary. There are dancing, martial arts and singing.
校长在主席台上致词后，开始庆祝六。有舞蹈、有武术、有唱歌。
After the celebration, we went back to the classroom orderly.
欢庆六一结束后，我们有序地回到了教室。
Today is my happiest day, I like June day!
今天是我最快乐的一天，我喜欢六一！
小泥格格
短文：
Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six.
昨天是我生日，所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。
技巧：
1、 文字要连贯。 除了要用 however, and 等连词外,遇到并列的事情时,要用“in the first place?? in the second place?? the last but not least important??”这样的连接词。否则 不得分!用“in the first place”代替“firstly”可增加很多字数。
2、 采用高级的句式。 如主语+插入语+谓语+宾语:Nanning, my hometown, is??. Native to China, Panda is lovely. 又如:Can I send you the money via web? Since my university, which is located in Nanning, is far away from the down town area, and I’m fully occupied by studies.
3、 重要的事情先说,开门见山。
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