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喜欢一首歌，也许是因为它的旋律动听；喜欢一件衣服，也许是因为它的款式新颖；喜欢一篇文章，也许说是因为它的内容生动感人。我喜欢大树却是因为它是人类优秀的义务工作者。春天来了，校园里的花朵争奇斗艳。风姑娘也来到我们的校园，和我们一起嬉戏，玩耍，操场上满是同学们嬉戏的背影。这时，只有那大树在一心一意地工作着。它不断地吸入二氧化碳，释放出氧气，让我们呼吸着清新的空气茁壮成长。夏天时，阳光尽情地普照着大地，挥洒这它的光彩，显示着它的威力。太阳公公毫不吝啬地把它的热量放出。这时，大树又开始了它新的工作。它那茂密的树枝如同一把保护伞，给我们挡住那强烈的阳光，让我们在树荫下尽情地玩耍。秋天来了，大树脱下了那翠绿的衣裳，枯黄的树叶随风飘落，最后化为春泥，使它脚下的小草长得更加茂盛。冬天里，它那干枯的树枝又会化成跳跃的火苗，给人们带来温暖。我爱大树，爱它给我们带来清新的空气，爱它给我们挡住强烈的阳光，还爱给为我们带来温暖，更爱它那无私奉献，不求回报的精神。大树就是这样一位优秀的工作者。我爱大树，更爱那些像大树一样为人类无私奉献的义务工作者。
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can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs pared to the car.
In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.
Score: 14
Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has o or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.
注：1. 第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。
2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。
3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。
Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more fortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.
注：1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。
2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于
3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词
4. cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive
5. be good for health 对健康有好处（万能理由）
6. Moreover 表示递进
In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.
注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man
Score: 11
There millions of bicycles in today’s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a *** all room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.
注：第一句应该用there be结构
Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.
I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improvedI、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为……； 2.另外一些人认为……； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。（最好写成4段）
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