doublel0814
依式行文,文笔素朴,结构严谨. Formational style of writing and strict in structure. 内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深 rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning, 简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松 Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
silvia147852
写作评价是学生写作教学的重要环节,旨在促进每位学生综合语言应用能力的'发展,教师通过评价,指导学生检查和反思学习过程.下面是我为您整理的英语作文评语大全，希望您会喜欢。
简单交待时间,地点和结果…
a brief introduction of the time, place and results ...
语言简练,规范,开篇吸引人.
Concise language, norms, begins to attract people.
…以…开头,较有新意.前因后果娓娓道来.
... In order to ... First, a new, Weiweidaolai antecedents and consequences.
开篇简明扼要,精炼有序;重点描述…给人留下深刻印象.
The opening be concise and to the point, refining orderly; key description ... Very impressive.
以景喻情,开头颇有新意;倒叙开头,渲染意境.
To view the metaphor, beginning quite new; flashback beginning, rendering the mood.
开头直奔主题,也是一种写法.
At the beginning of straight to the subject, is also a kind of way.
开头很活泼.拟人化手法的运用使开头显得活泼,
Beginning very lively. Personification makes beginning is lively,
反问句开头,吸引读者.
Asked at the beginning of a sentence, to attract readers.
开头直奔主题,让人一目了然.
At the beginning of straight to the subject, let people stick out a mile.
开头点题,用词很吸引人.
At the beginning of the theme, with the word is very attractive.
场面和气氛描写为文章增色不少;
scene and the atmosphere for the description of grace;
将…改成…更合适些,
Will be ... Change into ... Some more appropriate,
自然承上启下,细节描写突出人物品质,令人感动.
Natural bridge, details of outstanding character, moving.
叙事中夹写景,以已度人,将心比心.
In his narration clip, Yiyiduren, feel for others.
拟人化语言使文章更显得生动活泼.
Anthropomorphic language make the article more appear to be lively and vivid.
外形描写十分有趣,突出了…的可爱.介绍中融入了自己的思想,有感染力.
…对精彩地方进行简单描述;点面结合
... On the exciting place for a simple description; Dianmianjiege
简单介绍情况,自然过渡到下一段;
Brief introduction of situation, natural transition to the next paragraph;
情境描写调动起悬念;
Situation description arouse suspense;
充分运用语言,动作,心理描写,使事情具体,生动.
Make full use of the language, action, psychological description, make something specific, vivid.
简要叙述前因,进行铺垫.
Brief description of antecedents, to pave the way.
1、You are an honest and hardworking girl. You leave me a very deep impression. No pains, no gains. I hope you will make more progress in English study in the future.
2、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.
3、You are a handsome boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you a glorious future.
4、You are an earnest girl and dutiful on your job. Thank you very much for your assistance on my teaching. I hope you can make more progress in your handwriting. Wish you a splendid future.
5、You are an active and passionate girl. I appreciate your participance in class activities. Wish you a happy life.
6、You are a very careful girl. Your handwriting is a marvel of neatness and order. I am sure there is nothing difficult for you to overcome.
7、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.
8、You are a humorous boy. You may have some difficults on English, I hope you will make more progress in later day.
9、You are a sunny boy. You are very active on class. Pay more attention on English grammar. Work harder and you will make more progress.
10、You are an open-minded boy. I enjoy your activeness on class. Wish you make more improvement on English study.
11、You are a hardworking girl. You have a gift for English study. Where there is a will, there is a way. Wish you a fantastic future.
12、You are a straight-forward boy. I appreciate your creativeness on class. I hope you can make more improvement on your handwriting in later day.
13、You are an earnest and hardworking girl. Your English is very good. I hope you can take part in more class activities. Wish you a terrific future.
14、You are a shy but hardworking girl. Try to be more active on class. Be confident, you are the best.
15、You are an honest boy. You are good at running and jumping. Wish you be a superstar in the near future on Olympics.
孤星泪新民
教师在布置了作业之后，还需要批改，那么英语作文怎么样批改评语呢？下面是我收集整理的英语作文批改评语，欢迎阅读参考~
字迹
A、本子清秀、整洁，犹如海滨小城的街道一样，找不到一点脏……端端正正的字迹，让人看了真舒服……你的字像印的一样漂亮……很惭愧，我字没有你写的好看……
B、随随便便，字哪能不像猫掏的似的……字不在格子中间，当然看起来不顺眼……你的字东倒西歪，是不是今天风太大，才刮成这样的……我不相信你的字写不好，永远就这么潦草……认真耐心地写，你会写的比我还要棒……
内容
A、这般丰富的内容，简直和作家写出来的差不多呀……你的习作有血有肉，读起来真是一大享受……你的作文内容具体，我读的十分过瘾……你平时肯定爱看作文书，才写出这么多字……
B、干巴巴的内容如同白开水，一点味道也没有，多加些优美的词句就好喝了……不如刘维维字数多（或者举其他差生名字），你不觉得有点难为情吗……你的作文像90岁老太太的嘴，干瘪空洞，讲话直漏风……
语句
A、这篇文章流畅生动的语句，好似庐山瀑布，飞流直下，通顺极了……比喻得十分贴切，说明你一向观察细心……你怎么想出这么巧妙的拟人句的……反问句运用在这里多么合适……这个感叹句表达了你当时真实的感情……古诗引用恰到好处，我以后也要把学过的诗用到作文中去……歇后语用的妙啊妙啊，把我肚子都笑疼了……
B、作文疙疙瘩瘩，读起来很难受，如同走在乡下凹凸不平的小路上，不小心就容易跌一跤……句子像被谁切断了，不完整……写好后仔细读一读，就会发现不通的地方……不要怕麻烦，好文章都是改出来的……不能老指望别人替你改，要学会自己修改每句话……
层次
A、小节分的清清楚楚……小节划分合适……一个小节讲一层意思，段落分明……
B、这篇文章层次混乱，一节包含那么多内容，读着有喘不过气来的'感觉……小节分的太少，你舍不得多分吗……中间一节还能再分几个小节……一、二小节不该分，要合并……这一节与上面小节内容联系不上……
详略
A、这篇文章重点突出……重点部分写的详细，不错……事情的经过一五一十都叙述清楚了……按游览的顺序记叙了各个风景点，重点描写了……
B、第X节写的过于罗嗦……看不出这篇作文重点是什么……不是重点的内容应该简单写一写……
题目
A、这篇文章的题目新鲜，像春天的竹笋，又嫩又脆……题目很有意思，让人忍不住想看下去……告诉我，你从哪想出这么绝妙的题目……题目加标点符号（省略号、问号、感叹号、破折号），与众不同……我很喜欢你这个有趣的题目……
B、题目老一套，人家就没多大兴趣看你的作文了……这样的题目人人都会起，太一般……内容写的似乎和题目对不上号……动动脑筋，换个啥题目更合适……我看题目不如叫《……》更恰当一些……
标点
A、这篇文章标点打得规规矩矩，看出来你是个做事顶真的人……标点用得十分准确……
B、内容再精彩，标点马马虎虎乱打，大家也不愿意读你的作文……丢了许多标点，你想让我一口气不停地读下去，憋死我呀……标点可不好吃啊……标点打的太多，读起来一跳一跳的，仿佛瘸子走路……希望你认真打好每个标点……一句话意思说完了应该打句号……省略号占两格，不能打在一个格子里……
