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写作思路:可以写和父母之间的故事回忆,也可以写和老师或者同学之间的故事的回忆,中心要突出且明确,语句要连贯,条理要清晰。

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There are many beautiful memories in my "memory record". Whenever I open it, the past is vividly in my mind.

在我的“记忆录”里珍藏着许多美好的回忆,每当我翻开它,往事历历在目。

Last autumn, it was clear and crisp, and it was the fruit ripening season. "Gee, gee, gee," the crisp bird calls welcome my mother and I to the countryside. It happened that grandma was going to pick fruit, so she gave us a bamboo basket, and we took the basket on the road.

去年秋天,秋高气爽,正是水果成熟的季节。“叽叽叽叽”,清脆的鸟叫声欢迎我和妈妈来到乡下。正巧奶奶要去摘水果,便分给我们一个竹篮,我们拿着竹篮上路了。

Walking on the golden paddy path, the breeze blowing, caressing my face, straw swaying with the wind, we three people like swimming in the rolling rice waves. "Baa ~, baa ~" we went to the sheepfold, and the owner of the sheepfold said hello to us warmly. Look! These lovely sheep are eating the spare grass grain; the walking sheep are like white clouds floating in the sheepfold.

走在金黄的稻田小路上,微风吹过,轻抚着我的脸庞,稻草随风摆动,我们三人就像在滚滚的稻浪中游泳。“咩~,咩~”循声走去,我们来到了羊圈,羊圈的主人向我们热情地问好。瞧啊!这几只可爱的绵羊,吃着备用的草粮;那几只散步的绵羊像朵朵白云在羊圈飘动。

Finally, we came to the orchard, a smell of fruit penetrated my nose, I rushed in. At the foot of the brown red leaves, to the earth paved with a layer of luxurious carpet, walk on the soft, can be comfortable!

终于,我们来到了果园,一股水果的清香钻进了我的鼻子,我直冲了进去。脚下棕红色的落叶,给大地铺上了一层华贵的地毯,走在上面软绵绵的,可舒服了!

I saw that the trees with sparse leaves were covered with red and bright persimmons like small lanterns. Several adults stepped on high ladders and climbed onto the fruit trees and picked several at once. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I decided to climb up and have a look.

只见叶子已经稀稀拉拉的树上挂满了小灯笼似的又红又亮的大柿子,几位大人踩着高高的梯子,爬上了果树,一下子采了好几个。我再也按耐不住,决定也爬上去看一看。

Grandma stopped me and said, "you'd better hit with a branch." I decided to climb up and have a try. "Miso" I climbed up the long ladder, but after only five or six steps, my legs became weak and my feet were empty. It was terrible. I quickly stepped back down.

奶奶忙拦住我说:“你还是用树枝打吧!”我哪甘心,毅然决定爬上去试一试。“噌噌噌”我爬上了长梯,可是只爬了五、六步,我的腿就发软了,脚下空荡荡的,太可怕了,我赶紧退了下来。

"Ah With a deep sigh, I willingly picked up the long and thick branches on one side and hit the trees with one stroke of my hand. My mother came up and took my hand and said, "look, take it like this. To choose the right target, slowly close the branch to the fruit, and then tap gently.

“哎!”我深深地叹了口气,心甘情愿地捡起一旁长而粗的树枝,一举手便直接往树上瞎打。妈妈走过来把着我的手说:“看好,这样拿。要选准目标,把树枝慢慢地靠近果子,再轻轻地一敲。”

The voice just fell, mother fierce a force, a persimmon obediently fell into the embrace of the earth. It's a little bit like that when Monkey King picked ginseng fruit. But this persimmon must be put on for a few days, and it will be delicious when it is soft. Otherwise, I must try one first!

话音刚落,妈妈猛一用力,一个柿子乖乖地落进了大地的怀抱。还真有点当年孙悟空采人参果的感觉。可是这柿子得要放上几天,等它软了才好吃,不然,我肯定先要尝上一个!

Now I often recall this matter, my mouth is still full of persimmon sweet!

现在每每回忆起这件事,我的嘴里还满是柿子的香甜哩!

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请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇日记。 1. 写作要点提示: 1) 汶川发生地震,李华来襄樊和叔叔住在一起,成了我们的新同学。 2) 我们对他十分友善。送他爱心卡,鼓励他坚强;与他一起做游戏;带他参观学校…… 3) 我们竭尽所能给予帮助。捐出书包、作业本、字典……;他英语学习有困难,我帮他复习功课,教他学习方法…… 4) 李华激动地说,我们不仅是他的同学,也是他的兄弟姐妹,这里就是他的家。 2. 写作要求: 日记内容应包括所提示的要点,语言要流畅,可适当增加情节,以使短文意思连贯;日记字数90词左右,日记开头已给出,但不记入总词数,也不得抄入答题卡。 Monday, May 21st Fine A terrible earthquake happened in Wenchuan. ______________________________________ 短文写作。(本题12分) 同学们很快就初中毕业了。马上要迎来快乐的暑假和精彩的2008北京奥运会,你的心中是否充满期待?请用英语写一篇90词左右的短文,和大家分享你心中的暑期计划。 内容要求: 1. 主要选择通过电视或现场观看哪(几)种比赛项目?最喜欢哪(几)位体育明星?为什么? 2. 主要安排哪(几)项体育锻炼活动?(包括时间、地点和目的意义等) 书面表达(满分20分) 假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Jack给你发来email,想在暑假到北京看奥运会期间来芜湖参观旅游。请根据下表提示,为Jack制定一份“芜湖一日游”计划,并发email给他,介绍相关内容。 上午 游鸠兹广场、镜湖公园,去步行街购物 下午 爬赭山,参观芜湖长江大桥并拍照 晚上 在美食街吃晚饭,谈论各自校园生活 注意:1. 词数80~90。开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数; 2. 参考词汇:鸠兹广场Jiuzi Square 步行街 the Walking Street 镜湖公园 the Mirror Lake Park 美食街 the Food Street 芜湖长江大桥 Wuhu Yangzi River Bridge Dear Jack, I’m so glad to learn that you will come to Wuhu during the summer vacation.________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to meeting you! Yours, Li Ming 书面表达(15分) 根据中文大意和英语提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 汶川地震(Wenchuan Earthquake)发生后,9岁学生林浩(Lin Hao)救了两名同学,然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。 请你就林浩同学的事迹,以“Learn from the Hero”为题,给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学事迹简介,你对这件事的感受,以及你要向他学习什么。 提示词语:a student, nine years old, happen, save , walk, to safety, be deeply moved, brae, give up (B)5月12日,四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震,那里的人们痛失亲人及家园。全国人民众志成城,抗震救灾。作为一句中学生,请谈谈你的做法及感受。要求:文章语言流畅,逻辑清晰,用词准备,80~100字左右。 提示:可能用到的词或短语:earthquake地震,sorrow悲痛,be deeply moved受到感动,comfort安慰,rebuild重建,volunteer(自愿)to do … 书面表达(满分20分) 假设你是李明,你的澳大利亚朋友Dick得知你校正在推行素质教育,你现在的周末生活与过去相比发生了很大变化。请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一封信告诉他发生的变化。 过 去 现 在 白天 6点起床、上课(上午4节,下午4节) 不必去上学,可以做自己喜欢的事(举例) 晚上 做家庭作业或复习功课 可以看电视、上网、读课外书等 就寝 10:30 9:30 注意:1. 词数:约100词; 2. 信的开头已写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Dick, I’m glad to hear from you again. My life at weekends has changed a lot since last year. 写作(满分15分) 2008年5月12日14时28分,四川省汶川发生了特大地震。请根据下面的图画,用英语写一篇80~100词的短文,简单描述全国人民抗震救灾的情况,可适当发挥;并谈一谈作为中学生如何帮助地震灾区的众。 (参考词汇:collapse v. 倒塌;rescue v. 营救) 山东省潍坊市 书面表达(满分15分) 好学生的标准是什么?考试成绩的高低是唯一的标准吗?大家都来说说看!请先回答下列调查表中的问题(划√),然后以What is a good student?为题,用英语写一篇短文,表述自己的观点。 Are you a good student? Questions Yes No 1. Do you often get high marks? ( ) ( ) 2. Are you hard-working? ( ) ( ) 3. Do you like reading? ( ) ( ) 4. Are you helpful to others? ( ) ( ) 5. Can you get on well with your classmates? ( ) ( ) 6. Have you got something that you are good at? ( ) ( ) 要求:1. 文中不能出现作者本人的真实信息; 2. 词数80左右。 假如你要接受一家英文报纸的采访,记者提出的问题是“How can you be a good child?”。请你根据下面所给提示及要求,准备一段应答稿。(文稿的开头已给出,不计入总词数) 提示:(1)What should you do at school? (2)What can you do to give help at home? (3)How do you show your love to your parents (or grandparents…)? 要求:(1)文稿必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。 (2)文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 (3)词数:60~80个 Well, to be a good child, I ______________________

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英语记叙文是narrative,具体释义如下:

读音:[ˈnærətɪv]

表达意思:记叙文,叙述;叙事技巧;叙述的;叙事体的。

词性:通常在句中既可以作名词,也可以作形容词。

固定搭配:narrative structure 叙事结构;narrative poem 叙事诗 ; 叙述诗 ; 叙事长诗 ; 叙事性。

例句

1、The platforms that are most effective turn employees' ordinary job tasks into part of a rich adventure narrative.

最有效的平台将员工的日常工作任务变成了丰富冒险故事的一部分。

2、Throughout American history there has almost always been at least one central economic narrative that gave the ambitious or unsatisfied reason to pack up and seek their fortune elsewhere.

纵观美国历史,几乎总是至少有一个中心经济叙事,让雄心勃勃或不满足的人有理由收拾行囊,到别处去寻找财富。

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