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Literature as Text-messageIt is hard to find anyone with a novel in their hand anymore nowadays. Why is it so? Does it mean literatuer is irrelevant to our life? Yes, it is not bread or butter, but it is the nourishment for our soul.Teachers don't encourage us to read literature, neither do our parents. In their view, literary works like TV series or any other artistic products are impractical, especially to finding an employment. However, one important aspect has gone neglected by most people. To live a full life, one has to be a complete being, body and mind. Doing physical exercise is as important as doing mental training by reading a poem. To live materially is to live incompletely. One has to fulfill himself spitually and mentally by undertaking something as "impractical" as a novel or a poem collection.It is a novel but very feasible idea to suggest that reading a literary work can be as fun and informative as reading a text-message. This idea should be instilled in teenagers' mind so that they might cultivate an interest in literature in an early age, which can be benificial both to their mental and spiritual development and their study.
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十面霾伏三年级 | 写景 | 345字早上醒来，外面是天昏地暗，灰蒙蒙的。一看表，是六点零两分，我有点纳闷。都六点多了，外面怎么还那么黑。对了，昨天天气预报说今天有雾霾。我从小到大还没见过雾霾呢，真想见识见识！我和妈妈吃过早饭，整理好东西后，出发了。我和妈妈都小心翼翼的靠着路边走，大约近两米处的地方都看不清事物。这如烟笼罩的世界使车辆难行，使人举步维艰，不辨南北。 据妈妈所说这是因为汽车尾气排放，工业制造污染等对大自然的破坏。我似懂非懂的点了点头，妈妈又告诉我雾霾天影响交通，容易出事故，它是一种灾害天气，对农作物的生长有害，同时也对人类的身体健康构成了威胁。 我们通过这烟雾缭绕的世界，终于到达了目的地—学校。下课后我们都认为雾霾天气很好玩儿，可谁又知道他的坏处？动手保护大自然，尽量少出现雾腾腾的雾霾天气，让我们一起行动吧！4258名师点评本文小作者向我们描述了雾霾的天气，文章的语句通顺，句意流畅，叙写较为生动，文章的语言的表达能力较好。文章的不足之处在于虽有中心主题，但表达不够充分有力，言而不实，空而无力。
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第一段：描述图画1、 As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) above, 图画的内容。The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures，也可以用drawing，同样的如果两个的话用drawings，如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) tells ( 注意，如果是前面的图画是复数，则用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。2、 Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述图片里的现象， And it is very common/usual to see that in recent years.第二段：解释，说明和分析图片1、 The implied meaning of the picture(注意，同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1，Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。 Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个) factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。 First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason，I think, is that原因3。第三段：给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。1、 In my view/point of view (或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to /must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。2、It is true that these unique/social points can/could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it. 采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we实现的目标!
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