肖小月半仔
Great Changes in My Hometown I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There was no tall building and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town， there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life.
夜很*^*安静
The Changes in My Hometown In the past my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious and there was rubbish everywhere. The transportation was not convenient so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become much better. The mountains have turned greener. The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. There are trees flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future. 分 析： 这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，可按照时间顺序来写，注意要点的齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有许多实用的表达方式Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.现在，家乡发生了巨大的改变。Take place发生； more and more beautiful越来越漂亮； thousands of成千上万； all over the world世界各地；better and better越来越好；in the future 在将来；等等。 考点： 提纲类作文。
