顺宏冷暖-MISS冯
It was 7: 15in (改成on) the morning of february 8, 2011. I was walking along park road towards the east while (改成when) an old man came out of the park on the other sides (改成side) of the street . Then i saw (添加a)yellow car drive(改成driving) up third street and made a right turn into park road . The next moment the car hit the man while she(改成he) was crossing the road . He fell with a cry . The car did not stop and drive（改成drove） off at full speed heading west . I have noticed the driver was (添加a) young woman wore(改成wearing) a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864 after(去掉) two minutes later , I stopped a passed (改成passing) car and took the old man to the nearest hospital . （注：所有改错都应是下划线，否则扣分。）
gell墨脱
it--its Much---Many have--have +been ever---even reason---reasons gather---gathered the---a of去掉 that---them like--as
摇滚喵喵
it was(at) 7: 15in the morning of february 8, 2011. i was walking along(a) park road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street . then i saw (a) yellow car drive(driving) up(the) third street and made(making) a right turn into(the) park road . the next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road . he fell with a cry . the car did not stop and drive off at full speed heading west . i noticed the driver was(a) young woman wore(wearing) a pair of glasses and the plate number was(is) AC864 after two minutes later , i stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital . 1、(at) 7: 15in the morning 时间点前用介词at2、 i was walking along(a) park road 首次出现的可数名词前用不定冠词a3、saw (a) yellow car 同2、4、drive(driving) 动名词 5、 up(the) third street 序数词前用定冠词the6、 made(making) a right turn 和上面的driving同理7、 into(the) park road 上面已出现的名词前加the，表强调。8、was(a) young woman 首次出现用a9、wore(wearing) a pair of glasses 状态10 i stopped a passed car passing 正经过的
sjloveyuliqin
担心别人给你的答案不完全正确，心里多少还是没底对不对？我给你找到题目的原文了，保证100%正确，o(∩_∩)o...哈哈。这道题目来自一篇阅读材料：The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in the early 1940s after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazis Party ruled Germany from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policies was to kill all the Jews in Europe. If any persons known to be Jews were found, they would be sent to concentration camps farther east, mostly in Poland. Families were separated and transported in trains. For many days, they went without food, water, sanitation or fresh air. To avoid this terrible fate, some Jewish families went into hiding, often with the help of non-Jewish friends.（后面的权作参考吧，你的题目里面没有出现）This diary was written during the time when Anne and her family moved to escape from being killed by Nazis.我就不详细解释了，慢慢品味吧，^_^。
华师小超
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食尚峰汇
1.it 改为its2.Much 改为Many3.have后加been4.when改为before5.√6.times改为time7.celebrated后加for8.去掉of9.include改为includes10.第一个or改为and
1点点葵
it was 7: 15in (改成on) the morning of february 8, 2011. i was walking along park road towards the east while (改成when) an old man came out of the park on the other sides (改成side) of the street . then i saw (添加a)yellow car drive(改成driving) up third street and made a right turn into park road . the next moment the car hit the man while she(改成he) was crossing the road . he fell with a cry . the car did not stop and drive（改成drove） off at full speed heading west . i noticed the driver was (添加a) young woman wore(改成wearing) a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864 after(去掉) two minutes later , i stopped a passed (改成passing) car and took the old man to the nearest hospjtal .
彷徨爱情
仅供参考1.are改成is. 2.bad改成worse. 3.middle后加the. 4.actual改成actually. 5.a去掉. 6.student's改成students'. 7.grade改成grades. 8.so改成but. 9.touch后加with. 10.banning改成ban...
