勤添Jacky
楼主你写的好Chinglish哦。偶帮你全修改过了，希望能帮助你。WelcometoPutian.ItislocatedatthecenteroftheFujianprovincewhichisabeautifulcitywithoverthreemillionpeople.IhaveheardfromSamthatitspopulationismorethantheDallas`inUS.However,PutiancanonlybecalledasmallcityinChinabecausetherearemanycitieswhicharemuchbiggerthanit.PutianissimilartoanyothercitiesinChinabecausemoreandmorelargemodernbuildingsarebeingbuilt.Also,ithasmanynaturalandculturalsceneries.Firstly,allthenewcomersshouldvisittheMeizhouislandwhichisthehometownoftheseagoddessMazu.TherearealsomanybeautifultemplesforMazu.ThisisthestatueofMazuanditis14matterstall.Thatisanendlessexpenseofgoldenbeaches.Lastterm,allofourclassmateswentthere.Wechasedeachotheronthebeachandplayedwiththeseawater.Wehadagoodtime.
