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Since we came to the world,the importance of the family had appeared.With our parents' help,we gradually grow up.In the family,we can get a lot of suggestions from our parents.They tell us not to play on the streets,or how to get well along with others.Sometimes their advice is great,but there're some times they give us a bad advice.However,whatever they say,we can feel their love from their actions and behaviors.We always feel happy because parents are around us all the time. Family is a place where we get care.Family is really important to us all.

Early in the morning I took my backpack and walked out in the sunlight, with excitement to the school bus which went to the Strathcona.On the bus I was wonering about the Strathcona".Is it poor? Is it beautiful?" I cherished a complex mood. After five hours' ride ,we arrived. coming into view were the mountains with clouds around.,Just like coming to a fairyland ,It was so beautiful! We came to our room ,had a break,and then began other activities of ours.At night we had a big party. Everybody came to the big house.We danceD siANG ,and shared stories.Everybody enjoyed this evening party.The most interesting thing in camping of ,course, was swimming .We spent an hour on our ship crossing to the island. On the way I was planing about swimming in the lake.When we arrived, I COULDN'T wait to change into my swimming suit .After we put up a tent,I ran to the beach as fast as I could ,and wore PFD and went into the water.The lake in October was as cold as ice in the Arctic.I walked into the water slowly.suddenly, I could feel my legs .It jwas ust mechanical to move my legs.The teacher on the beach shouted to me"It's now or never!put your body in the water!" After a moment I put my body in the water suddenly.I will never forget this felling forever,although there were only three seconds. At that moment my heart just stopped.I felt my body blasting.Then I ran to the beach as fast as I could ,and put on my clothes.After a moment I still couldn't stop trembling,but I still wanted to try it again.So,I ran to the lake,and jumped into the water and started to swim ,It was better than before because I could feel my blood burning,I enjoyed it so much. One hundred meters I had COVERED before I knew it.When I turned round to SEE the teacherS they WERE so small. I was so proud of myself. Happy time always seems to be short.Three days' foundation camping was over,but I still remember that as if it had happened yesterday. I'd love to there again It's the best time in my life.

sorry about that night.i know i hurt you.i can't leave you .i've tried to forget you .but i failed .nobody can tell me why .i think it's just beause i really love you and care about you .after last night.i begin to miss you .miss you everytime when i was working and walking.i don't know what to say .but sorry .sometimes i feel i'm really a fool.the poor English.and i really want to slap my face .that make you so sad.i still love you so much.that time .you said i made you cry.my heart is so painful.i just can't speak it out.so soryy.i love you .i'm always waiting for you to come back.come back to me again.i want you stay at my side all time.i swear.i would like to embrace you tightly.console you when you sad .and smile when you happy.i have pain in my heart.when i tryp this message.please.ing.forgive me .i never do that again.Ing.i miss you .

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