毛头猴子
第一句可以用一个从句，如：There is an unfetful thing in my mind which occured in last winter that does much good to my futural life. （在我脑海里有一件难忘的事，它发生在去年冬天，这件事对我以后的人生帮助很大。）
结尾呢，可以用一个总结句，带有分析和启发性的句子，如：Life is hard but as long as you are in high spirit stepping on you will overe all dificulties and kiss the bright sunshine.（生活是艰难的，但是只要你振奋精神一直向前，你就会克服一切困难迎来明媚的阳光）
一般来说应该背一点精彩的句式放在开头用以吸引阅卷老师的注意力，
让他对你有一个比较好的第一印象，
在最后结分的时候把你的分数向上靠
（不要小看这一靠，有时候1分就是天壤之别！）
但总体基本以简单句为主，
不要显得太过于注重华丽的词藻，
当然如果你的水平足够随意使用复合句的话就没有这点条条框框，
主要是因为如果你的水平不到家，
容易出现语法或句式的错误更加令阅卷老师讨厌。
楼上的兄弟说的完全不正确！
英语的作文也是和语文一样按评分标准打分的，
不是只要语法对就好，
举一个高考评分标准为例：
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次
的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档（很好）；（21-25分）
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（好）：（16-20分）
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（适当）：（11-15分）
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（较差）：（6-10分）
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档（差）：（1-5分）
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：（0分）
未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
可能是你用的开头是已经用烂的那种啦，
网上找找很多很好的开头的。
How do yo learn english?Learning english can be a very difficult task for most people,this is because we dont live in a environment where we are forced to speak or write english.so i think the best way to learn english is by municating with others using the lagnguage itself and not just learn from the book.Im sure if you live in an environment such as a foreign country and were forced to speak and write english everyday then your english will imprve dramatically.Although we must agree that we need to read and write english from the book in order to get the foundations that we need for basic munication,this is essential but as i said,this is only a foundation,what you develop afterwards all depends on your ability to adapt to an environment and your courage.中文翻译：学习英语可以是一个非常艰巨的任务对大多数人来说，这是因为我们没有生活在一个环境下我们不得不说或写英文.所以，我认为最好的方式学习英语是沟通与他人使用语言本身，而不仅仅是学习这本书.进出口确保如果您的环境中生活，如国外，被迫说，写英语日常然后你的英语将成绩显着.虽然我们必须同意，我们需要阅读和书写英语的书籍，以便让基础，我们需要基本通信，这是必要的，但正如我所说，这只是一个基础，你的开发后，一切都取决于您的能够适应环境和你的勇气.你参考一下~。
英语作文（书面表达）是英语综合能力的集中体现，是词汇语法阅读遣词造句篇章结构逻辑思维等的综合考查.一般有经验的老师只要看一下一个人写几句英语，就能大致判断其英语水平.要想 真正提高英语书面表达能力，非在词汇惯用法搭配和基本语法上下苦功夫.同时通过阅读来积累素材.从汉语作文就可知英语作文有多难.也可得到启示该怎么训练.小学到初中在到高中10 多年，有多少学生能够写出象样的汉语作文？ 英语作文怎么写？好在知要求根据某个 情景话题写10 多句话，120词左右，同常要看懂提示，认真审题，1）.审文体，要求 写成什么文体？如何开头结尾？是书信？是看图作文？还是根据图表写议论文？各种文体 有大致固定的结构. 2））审要点，特别是动词用哪个？评分 时，是按要点是否全部涉及，表达是否清楚来定 档次的. 要点确定后，重要的是用好 动词，可以在原文旁边或图上标出拟用的动词，最好一步到位，将时态 也带进去，确定全文基本时态 是现在时 还是过去时？直接将该词的形式表出来，省略打 草稿的步骤； 3），将要点扩充成句子，注意前后问的连贯和一致. 4），加 必要的连词，是全文连贯和文理通顺，有的句子前后再 调整合并，写成从句或使用非谓语等其他手段. 5）.通读全文，检查是否有错.改正拼写和标点错误.写作文 是一个复杂 的思维过程.一篇 号作文需 反复修改，和进行周密的思维活动，没有必要的词汇，素材积累是无从下手的，多读范文，多练习，才有望 提高，正如游泳骑车等技能只有通过不断练习游 和骑 ，而不是纯理论能奏效的. 首先要搞好阅读。
阅读是写作的基础，在阅读方面下的功夫越深，驾驭语言的能力也就越强。所以要写好英语先要读好英语，在语言学习方面狠下苦功，教科书要读透，因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文笔流畅，语言规范，精彩的一些课文段落要背诵。
再就是要进行大量课外阅读，并记住一些好文章的篇章结构。 加强练词造句训练 其次，要加强练词造句的训练。
词句对作文相当于造房的材料，无好材料就造不出好房子。平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累，把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记。
平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录，再对照正确句子，使地道的英语句子如同条件反射，落笔就对。 了解英语写作格式 还有，要了解英语写作的不同体裁与格式。
可以先看一本介绍英语写作入门的书，对英语写作有一个初步的概念，如怎么写议论文，如何提出论据，如何展开，如何确定中心句；又如，英语信的格式，如何根据不同身份写不同结束语等，然后根据不同的体裁进行写作练习。 用英语写日记 要养成记英语日记勤练笔的好习惯。
经常用英语记日记，等于天天在练笔，这无疑是提高英语协作的行之有效的好办法。在记日记时，不要总是用简单句，要有意识地用一些好的词组、句型、关联词和复合句等，使文句更优美生动。
还有要按照题目或所给情景写文章练笔。写好后对照范文，找出差距，然后再练习，这对提高英语作文也很有帮助，在游泳中学会游泳，只有多练习才能练好。
总之，平时学习语言素材积累多了，体裁格式记住了又经常练习不断提高，到作文下笔时就会得心应手，水到渠成。
1. As the proverb says… 2. It goes without saying tan… 3. Generally speaking… 4. It is quite clear than because… 5. It is often said that … 6. Many people often ask such question：“… ？ ” 7. More and more people have e to realize… 8. There is no doubt that… 9. Some people believe that… 10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case? 11. One great man said that… 12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention. 13. In the past several years there has been… 14. Now it is monly held that… but I doubt whether… 15. Currently there is a widespread concern that… 16. Now people in growing number are ing to realize that… 17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of … 18. Faced with…， quite a few people argue that…， but other people conceive differently.。
希望对你有所帮助：一细观察细致观察是提高写作水平的金钥匙.文章是客观事物在作者头及中反映的产物，要反映客，不必须对客观事物作仔细的观察.只有仔细地观察，才能从生活现象的矿藏中发现碎金璞玉，于泥沙混杂中攫取闪光的宝物.不掌握，“观察”这把开门的金钥匙，作文的“铁门限”是决然跨不进去的.二、多阅读广泛阅读是提高作文水平的前提条件.要写出好文章，就必须多读书.“读书破万卷，下笔如有神.”“熟读唐诗三首，不会作诗会吟.”鲁迅先生也提倡多读书，“必须如蜜蜂一样，采过许多花，这才能酿出蜜来，倘叮在一处，所得就非常有限，枯燥了.”我们强调既要多读，又要选择地读，更要读进去，理解所读文章的结构技艺，语言特点，从中掌握作文定得深刻些，变化多一些.三、巧选材精心选择是提高作文水平的加速器.选材的要求是要新颖，所谓新颖，就是批要选择一般人没有接触过的，或熟视无睹崦实含表深刻意义的.一经作者笔之于书，就会发人深思令人感奋的材料.选材角度要小，要以小见大，写人人眼中有，人人笔下无的材料.为此，必须在头脑中把各种材料比较、分析、综合，进行去粗取精，改造加工，只有这样，才能使材料新颖.而这种积极思考、反复推敲的选析工夫，对提高作文水平很有帮助.四、常练笔经常练笔是提高作文水平的关键.要想入作文的大门，并求得不断进步，更重要的是多练.谚语说的好：“文章读十篇，不如写一篇.”这就道出了作文实践出真知的道理.我们学习了一篇文章之后，弄懂了文章的结构方法，弄清了文章的写作特色，就要学着运用这些知识与方法去实践，去练习，使之变成自身的作文能力.实际上，我们第学习一篇课文后都可以进行练笔.而片断练习是练笔的一种好方式，片断练习所花的时间不长，又达到了练笔的目的.写日记也是一种有效的练笔方式，天天坚持写日记，以后俄文就有了坚实的基础.五、勤修改反复修改是提高作文水平的催化剂.修改是作文必不可少的步骤，是提高作文质量的有效措施.前人说的好，“文章不厌百回改.”“文章是改出来的.”曹雪芹写《红楼梦》“披阅十载，增删五次，”托尔斯秦的《战争与和平》反复修改了七次；鲁迅先生主张“定完后至少看两遍，竭力将可有可无的字、句、段删去，毫不可惜.”可见，文章修改，一般是指从初稿写出来到最后定稿的加工过程.修时要做到五看：看用词是否通顺，看主题是否鲜明，看结构是否紧凑，看语言是否优美.总之，“文章是改出来的.”一般来说文章总是越改越好的，我们要在“修改”上下工夫.。
Shanghai is one of the few megacities in China both in terms of its economy and the population.Shanghai appeals to many toursits ing from other countries because of its unique features,ranging from its tasty local foods to the buildings.The most famous place of Shanghai is its 东方明珠，where is regarded one of the highest buildings in the world.It is a must for the tourists regardless where they e from.They enjoy viewing the night scene of Shanghai.靠！写完了才发现是六年级！我以为六级呢！小孩子你就照着这个写吧，老师绝对会晕倒.（小学六年级的老师有六级水平吗？）。
Today is very interestsd. I went to the New World
Zoo. There are many anmils in it. First, I went
to saw the tighters. Next, I feed the kanganroos for
leavels. Fnally, I went to road the hourse. Today I
was very busy and funnly. I hope tomorrow will niceness.
1. My Family And My House
My family is *** all, they are my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My mother is tall and thin but my father is fat very much. My younger brother is naught and I am well-beavd. My house is big, there are three bedrooms, a bathrooom, a kichen and a livingroom.
I love my family and my house.
2. I like sprots very much. I allways get to school
sprots center doing sprots everyday. Because there are
many sprot equipment, like basketball, football, table tennis
baseball, tennis, volleyball. There is very beautiful,and very big. I like there very much. I hope you jion it,
it's interesting very much.
2. I have a good friend, he is Tom. Last week, he was very busy.
On the Sateday , he rerised. And then ,he played the football. On
Sunday, he cleaned his room. I often do my homework on Saterday morning, and watch TV in the afternoon. On Sunny, I usually read
books and go to the cinma.
这都是我原创的，可没粘。
夏雨落荷塘
精选英语作文的开头句子汇总
一、写作格式
1、称呼
(1)机构
A、不认识负责人
Dear Sir or Madam， Dear Sir / Madam， To whom it may concern，
B、认识负责人
Dear Mr./Ms. President/Professor/Manager/Editor (Michael) Wang，
(2)个人
A、关系不亲密
Dear Mr./Ms. President/Professor/Manager/Editor Wang，
B、关系亲密
Dear Michael，
2、正文
3、落款
(1)祝福语
Best wishes! / The best regards!
(2)签名
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
二、必用信息
常用的开头语有：
I have received your letter of July Ist. 7月1 日来信已经收悉。
I have the pleasure to tell you that …….很高兴告诉你……。
I am very much delighted to receive your letter. 非常高兴收到你的来信。
It is my honor to inform you that ……很荣幸告诉你……。
常用的结束套话有：
I am looking forward to hearing from you 盼早日回信。
Wish best regards. 祝好。
Thank you for your help 感谢你的帮助！
Wish my best wishes for your success. 祝你成功。
Wish you a happy holiday. 祝假日愉快！
Hoping to hear from you soon. 希望能尽快收到你的回信。
1、自我介绍
(1)工作
I am a staff member from your company/corporation.
(2)学生
I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Beijing University.
2、写作目的
I am writing the letter in purpose of ordering some books/resigning from my current post/position.
3、尾段写法
A 表示感谢
(1) My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.
(2) Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.
(3) I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.
B 期待回信
(1) I am looking forward to your reply/hearing from you soon.
(2) I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
(3) Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
4、常用书信的客套语
一.问候
I haven’t heard from you for ages. How are you doing
I haven’t seen you for such a long time. How are you getting along with your work
二.祝贺
I want to congratulate you with all my heart.
I warmly congratulate you on what you’ve achieved.
三.致谢
I am most grateful to you for your help.
I want to thank you heartily for what you have done.
四.询问
I wonder if you could tell me what to do.
I’d be most grateful if I could have your full support.
Please could you let me know something about it.
五.邀请
Is there any chance of your coming to have dinner with us at our home We are wondering if you could come to have dinner with us at our home.
六.接受邀请
I’m delighted to accept your invitation.
Thanks for your invitation. I’m certainly looking forward to joining you.
七.拒绝邀请
I’m sincerely sorry that we can’t join your dinner party. I regret to say “no” to your invitation.
Thank you for your invitation but unfortunately
八.抱歉
I do apologize for having kept you waiting.
I’m awfully sorry for giving you so much trouble.
九.同情
I’m more than sorry to hear of your illness.
I can’t tell you how sad I felt when I heard of
十.安慰
It was a great shock to hear
I just can’t tell you how saddened I am
I’m most grieved to learn of
私人书信的开头常用如下句子：
How is everything一切都好吗？
I hope everything is all right.我希望(你)一切都好。
How are you你好吗？
How are you getting along these daysI miss you very much.你近来过得如何？我十分想念你。
I was very happy to receive your letter of October 10th.我很高兴收到你10月10日的来信。
Thank you for writing to me.谢谢你给我写信。
Your letter came into my hand yesterday.我是昨天收到你的来信的。
It's a long time since I got your last letter.我收到你的信已经很长一段时间了。
I'm sorry I took so long to reply.很报歉给你回信晚了。
I have been so busy recently that I could hardly find any time to write.我最近挺忙，未能抽出时间给你写信。
Many thanks for the wonderful present you sent me.谢谢你寄给我那么好的礼物。
I'm so sorry for not having written to you for such a long time.十分报歉，很久没有给你写信了。
英语书信结尾常常写一些祝愿、问候他人、盼回信等等话语。常用的语句有：
With best wishes.致以良好的祝愿。
Please write to me as soon
How are you
How have you been
I hope everything is fine with you.
Hope you enjoy your day.
(或者）Here I am again.
It's me again.
邮件比较频繁的话，直接说Good morning/afternoon就ok了。
（一）段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young
and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why
（二）中间段落句
1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First，______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______
5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，
Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.
7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的.主要原因是由于……
Why______The first reason is that ______.The second reason is
______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.
9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
10. 完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
（三）结尾句
1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……
For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____.
7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……
In my opinion, I
think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.
8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______.
9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.
10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.
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