英语写作改错例文

My opinions on cheating Nowadays, exam has become one of the most important tools(ways) to judge how the student is(students' study). Who can past (pass)or have a high grade(score) has a great meaning for(has a prosperous future) his school life or career. All the students try their best to pass. Cheating is one of the ways, and it’s on the rise. (Cheating becomes one way to pass, and much more common today.)There are two groups of the cheating students. The first group wants to experience(try) new things in school. They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities. In this situation, they ignore the importance of knowledge and ( they are )out of mind in the class. In the end of the semester, they choose cheating (as a way )to pass the exams. Another group works hard on their study. They gradually notice that cheating can possibly (help them pass)succeed in the exam, and they find that who cheats in the exam even has a higher grade than them. For protecting the fairness (To be fair)between cheaters and non-cheaters, they begin to cheat too. That is because schools pay more attention to the result but (study itself). In my opinion, cheating absolutely should be forbidden all the time. Supervisors(school) must strictly punish the cheaters. At the same time, school should judge the students all-rounds but the dates of the grades. In this way, I think the fairness will come to us again in the near future.

一、所给短文改错答案：1. eye —— eyes2. Whatever —— Whenever3. lend —— lent4. as ————when5. final ———— finally6. started the school —— started school7. myself ———— me8. instead ——instead of9. independence ——independent10. encoureged ———— encouraging二、高中英语改错题，高考中以【短文改错】的形式出现。三、短文改错命题特点：借助学生习作形式，呈现学生在日常写作和英语学习中最容易出现的问题，并要求结合全文语境和表达需要进行错误改正。四、错误设置： 高考短文改错，一共设置10处错误，按照修改出的错误和正确修改的数量计分，每小题1分。从第11处多改都不得分。五、错误形式和修改方法：错误形式及修改方法共有三种：错词，指按照行文需要使用错误的词，在原行错误词下面划线，并在线下写出正确的词。多词：在表达中多余的词，在原行中用斜线划掉。少/缺词：表达中漏掉的必须用的词，在原行中缺词处划漏字符，并在漏字符下写出正确表达所需要的词。六、高考短文改错常考考点：结合短文，考查常见表达中容易出现的语法和搭配错误。主要语法考点包括：名词：可数和不可数，单复数变化。冠词：不定冠词a/an;定冠词the；零冠词。代词：数，性，格的正确使用和变化，反身代词等。形容词，副词：表达中需要的形容词，副词混用及正确表达。数词：基数词，序数词，分数，百分数等。动词：动词时态，语态，语气；非谓语动词，动词单三形式，过去式，过去分词，-ing1形式等变化。介词：介词正确搭配和使用。连词：句子和上下文正确表达所需要的连词，从属连词等。七、短文改错例文及修改说明：Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose1.第一段:去掉bothers后的tobother sb.打扰某人。2.第二段第一句:time→times考查名词复数。several times好几次。3.第二段第二句:understanding→understand根据it’s difficult to do sth.句型可知。4.第二段第三句:have→has考查主谓一致。the early morning barking为单数,所以谓语动词也应为单数形式。5.第二段第四句:Beside→Besides此处应为副词besides而不是介词beside。6.第二段第四句:average前的a→an考查冠词。average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。7.第二段第五句:starts→started考查时态。因为是今天早晨发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。8.第二段第六句:closely→close考查形容词。形容词close作表语。9.第三段:our→your考查物主代词。10.第三段:在figure后加out根据动词短语figure out(想出)可知答案。

括号中是修改后的，主要是一些基本语法，语句还可以进一步润色。Nowadays, exam has become one of the most important （ways） to judge how (do the students master knowledge). Who can （get passed） or have a high （score） has a great meaning for his school life or career. All the students try their best to pass. Cheating is one of the ways, and it’s on the rise. There are two （kinds） of cheating students. The first kind want to experience new things in school. They join in the associations and take part in different kinds of activities. In this situation, they ignore the importance of knowledge and (be) out of mind in the class. In the end of the semester, （they） choose cheating to pass the exams. (The other kind of students) work hard on their study. They gradually notice that cheating can possibly (help them to) succeed in the exam, and they find that who cheats in the exam even has a higher (score) than them. For protecting the fairness between cheaters and non-cheaters, they begin to cheat too. That is because schools pay more attention to the result (than) process. In my opinion, cheating absolutely should be forbidden all the time. Supervisors must strictly punish the cheaters. At the same time, school should judge the students all-rounds but (only the scores). In this way, I think the fairness will come again in the near future.

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