陈宏立夏
写作思路：将自己的优点和缺点分别详细地罗列出来，比如“我”有一个缺点，那就是“丢三落四”，“我”的优点就是乐于助人等等，语言要通顺连贯，中心要明确。
正文：
I have a shortcoming, that is "forgetting", but this shortcoming has made my parents upset. Once, when the class leader checked the homework, I found that I didn't bring the math "learn with you". Finally, I used my classmate's telephone watch to call my mother and ask her to send things to school.
我有一个缺点，那就是“丢三落四”，而这个缺点可是将我爸妈折腾坏了。有一次，下课组长检查作业时，我发现数学《伴你学》没有带，最后还是用了同学的电话手表给妈妈打电话，让妈妈把东西送到学校。
One of my advantages is that I am willing to help others, which can set up a good image in the hearts of my classmates. Sometimes, if the ant did not hesitate to take out some of the stationery, he would not worry about it.
我的优点就是乐于助人，这个优点可让我在同学们的心中树立了好的形象。有时一些同学会忘记带钢笔、本子等学习用品，如果被我这个“热心肠”看到后，总会毫不犹豫地将我书包中的备用文具拿出来，对他伸出援助之手，不再让他着急得像热锅上的蚂蚁——团团转。
These are my shortcomings and advantages. I believe that one day I can turn my shortcomings into advantages and carry forward my advantages.
以上就是我的缺点和优点了，相信有一天我可以把缺点变为优点，把优点继续发扬下去。
笨笨的2003
advantage i am so clever that i can work out the math problems very soon.i am good at reading ,dancing.i always give a show on the stage .what is more, my engish is perfect, i can communicate with foreigners very well.shortcoming i am so lazy that i hate washing clothes.when comes the winter, i hate it more.i lack of confidence so that when facing problems i will be afraid.without my parents' encourages i do not know where i will be today.
苏州小迷糊
It’s important to know our goodness and badness because it can help us to improve ourselves better. Therefore, we should know ourselves as much as we can. I think I have three main merits. They are filial piety, honest and hardworking. Filial piety and honesty are the two basic qualities that people should have. And working hard can help to get knowledge and improve myself. However, no one is perfect. I have some week points, too. For example, I never make plans for my life and study. As a result, sometimes I am a little laziness because I don’t have tasks that must be finished. I hope I can change and be better.
碎花花11
优点：热爱生活,爱笑.merits:lovelife,lovesmiles缺点:容易忘记事情.defects:easytoforgetthings改正缺点:时常提醒自己不要忘记事情.howtorevise:oftenremindmyselfofnotforgettingthings.
