热爱每一刻
one summer,I volunteered to (work) in a public library.___It was (a) very interesting experience during which I met a great___(number) of persons and tried new things.____I worked to help with the library's reading program 打钩by entering the (names) of children who had signed up into____the library's computer system.I also helped (teach) computer___skills.(It) was necessary for them to master the skills.____(When) the program was finished,I received a letter____and small gifts (for) my services,and I was happy to have made___someone's life () better through my efforts. _____
hinomoonna
1.One summer,I volunteered to work in a public library.（working改为work）2.It was very interesting experience in which I met a great.（during改为in）3.deal with persons and tried new things.（of改为with）4.I work to help with the library's reading program.（worked改为work）5.by entering in the name of children who had signed up into6.the library's computer system.I also help to teach computer.7.It was necessary for them to master the skills.8.Although the program was finished,I received a letter.9.I was happy to have received small gifts for my services.10.someone's life will be better through their's efforts.开始只是觉得单词要修改，后来发觉语序也有问题，所以后面的就直接写的句子，没有标明啦！
秋林花语
My grandma is an active woman ，who goes dancing every evening .She made me to go with her this evening. There were many people here，most of which were elderly women.They were dancing on the music on the playground. Several friend of my grandma’s warmly welcomed me and taught me how to dance step by step . Learn to dance was a little challenging for me at first .It was difficult for me to keep up with the beat. I tried my best to follow them but gradually I was making progress. My grandma praise me for the progress making by me and I enjoyed myself greatly. I understand why my grandma loves dancing so much. It’s good way for the elderly to work out and communicate
KP-bangbangbang
我的答案最专业。I’m seeing the manager tomorrow,who will be back from New York. 用who引导一个非限制性定语从句。还可以这么改：I’m seeing the manager tomorrow. He will be back from New York.这样就变成了两句单句。This is the pen with which I wrote the letter. which引导的定语从句代指前面的PEN，但前面有介词WITH，所以只能用which不能用that。They gave up the plan,which was a very good one. 典型的非限制性定语从句。因为有逗号，是非限制性的，所以只能用which不能用that.LZ可以看看定语从句那块的语法。
