马路口的miraale
eye变为复数eyeswhatever变为wheneverdifficulties放到whateverlend变为lentfinal变为finallyby变为withmyself变为mehelped me 后加介词toinstend 后加ofindenpendence变为indenpendent
海鲜饭泡粥
改错如下:Thanks a lot for your letter and I am happy to be your friend.Here are some things about myself. My favorite subject (are改成is) computer studies too. I like computer games, (especial改成especially) action games. You are very lucky to have a PC at home. I wish I (can 改成could) have one, too! My mother thinks it is too expensive, so I have to play computer games at my (friend改成friend's) home.(Beside改成Besides) that, I also like to listen to music during (our改成my) spare time. My brother works in (加入a) music store (for改成so) I have lots of free CDs. My favorite band is “Black Eyed Peas”. Do you have a favorite band or (singers改成singer)?It (was改成is) great to hear from you, Joseph. I hope you’ll write again soon and (去掉to) tell me about yourself.Best wishes,Kim
最爱尛草莓
ullest use of these blessed faculties. Their eyes and ears take in all sights and sounds
非非1227
best friend (for) many years 介词搭配错误didn't think her friend (would)mind it 时态一致her friend did seem to (had) minded it 时态Therefore改为However 连词She stopped (visting) her 去掉visiting前的to 动词固定搭配was such (a) mean woman 冠词She was (truely) sorry 副词(words) really mean a lot 名词复数(we) should really think twice 前后主语不一致in order not to (hurt) 固定搭配
魔吞不動城
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.He did not want share things with other people. For 1._______example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 2._______in a secret place where I couldn’ t find it. Then he 3. _______ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 4. _______He said he is busy. That is, a game of 5. _______tennis making him very busy. He did not care 6. _______if something he did made people angry. For 7. _______instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _______loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 9. _______he is difference now. He often helps grandma 10.______with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps hisclassmates with their lessons.答案及解析1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。2. them 改为 it。依据上下文, 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数, 后边的代词显然用 it, 而不是 them。3. where 改为 which/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句, 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语, 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个, 而 others 指另一些。5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语, 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。7. 此行无错。8. 删去 on。one night 前不需要任何介词。9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词, 此处修饰名词 music, 应用形容词。10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。
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