真龙木木
My family had 5 people, the elder sister 24 years old, long was very attractive, some big eye, thin, younger sister 6 years old, but also on kindergarten, went to the elementary school this year. Mother long is also very attractive, is also very thin. the younger sister's childhood name is called each family, elder sister's English name to call LISA, mother and the elder sister veryMy family had 5 people, the elder sister 24 years old, long was very attractive, some big eye, thin, younger sister 6 years old, but also on kindergarten, went to the elementary school this year. Mother long is also very attractive, is also very thin. the younger sister's childhood name is called each family, elder sister's English name to call LISA, mother and the elder sister very can window-shop, I am also same, each time can buy many clothes pants also to have the shoes. I like the pink color, because the pink color is very lovable, the younger sister also likes the pink color, her clothes are the pink color. this is my one. can window-shop, I am also same, each time can buy many clothes pants also to have the shoes. I like the pink color, because the pink color is very lovable, the younger sister also likes the pink color, her clothes are pink color this are my one.
Angelia8412
小改了改。Good afternoon. I'm Ann, and I'm 22 years old. I come from Changchun in Jilin province, which is located in the northeast of Beijing. It is famous for being the China's largest motor vehicle plant. I graduated this year from the cu with a major in English. It is really a great hornor to have this opportunity for a interview. When I was a teenage girl, I had a dream of working as a cabin crew and getting the view from the top. In the past six months, I worked for Jilin oversea travel agency as a tour guide, but I never gave up making my dream come true. So I'm sure I can apply my service working experience to this new position. I think travel around the world as a flight attendant will make my life more fabulous. I hope ANA(日本的？) will give me a pair of wings to fly to the top of my fantastic sky. And I will keep my passion for service excellence and responsible personality to be the best. Thank you.
薇宝儿521
用有道词典翻译的，希望采纳Today I want to speak with you about one of my most happy experience, but also about my friends! That was last year's summer vacation, we still senior high school students, off the second day we nine people will be on the play of the journey! Us is our hometown yunmeng mount, the mountain high, but we still insist on the climb up, we encourage each other, mutual game, after several hours of fighting we finally climbed up the yunmeng mount peak! Next, I want to let everybody share with me once we had a happy mood! Look, these photos is our friends, this is what we in the middle of the mountain climbing, and then look at this photo, this is we climbed to the top of the hill of excitement, we sat in the top of the mountain to rest, to see this classmate, he has been very tired very hot, so he took off his T-shirt! Look at these photos, this is yunmeng mount scenery, very beautiful, I hope you also like here! To see the last one, this is our photo of nine people, when we are very happy and happy, because we are friend, the friend of the lifetime!!!!!
yyh心随我动
I have five homes, a 24-year-old sister, the beautiful long, a pair of big eyes, Shoushou, 6-year-old sister, also on kindergartens, primary schools on a year.'s Mother is also very beautiful long, very thin. The small sister called every family, sister of the English name is LISA, mother and older sister is very street, I also like to buy every time there are a lot of clothes pants shoes. I like pink, because pink is very cute, Sister likes pink, her clothes are pink This is my one
烟点燃空虚
最好在开头或结尾加上一句Thank you very much;it is very nice to meet you here.表示对别人的尊重.也显得很口语话.提个建议,如果再加一些口语化的句子,那么会更好.祝面试成功.Good luck.
猪妈妈1964
Today I want to speak with you about one of my most happy experience, but also about my friends! That was last year's summer vacation, we still senior high school students, off the second day we nine people will be on the play of the journey! Us is our hometown yunmeng mount, the mountain high, but we still insist on the climb up, we encourage each other, mutual game, after several hours of fighting we finally climbed up the yunmeng mount peak! Next, I want to let everybody share with me once we had a happy mood!Look, these photos is our friends, this is what we in the middle of the mountain climbing, and then look at this photo, this is we climbed to the top of the hill of excitement, we sat in the top of the mountain to rest, to see this classmate, he has been very tired very hot, so he took off his T-shirt! Look at these photos, this is yunmeng mount scenery, very beautiful, I hope you also like here!To see the last one, this is our photo of nine people, when we are very happy and happy, because we are friend, the friend of the lifetime!
小二2004
Today,I'd like to tell you the most fantastic experence in my life.Of course it's about my friends.It was in the summer vocation last year that some friends and I went outside for visiting.At that time,we have nine people,and all of us are senior 2 students.Yunmeng mountain,which we went to,was a very high mountain in our hometown.Wiith the encouragements of the others,we never gave up.We even competed with the others in order to make process.A few hours later,we finally reached the top of the mountain!Next,I'd love to share my happness with you!Look!The people in the picture are my friends.This one shows that we were on our way. And look at this!How excited we were when we reachd the top!We could just sit down having a rest.See this guy!He seemed so tited,and he was so hot that he had already put his T-shirt off!See?It's the view of Yumeng mountain that fascinates us so much! I do hope you can also like it! Finally,I will show you our group photo.We were happy at that time.That's because we were sincere friends,and now we are,and also we will be friends forever! 嘻嘻，100%自己写的，纯手工，保证少错~ ~见好就给分哦
鹤顶红IF
1.Everyone in his English class must have group work. 去掉be 不需要被动 2.I like my group work,because it can help me learn English better. because 打头字母小写 中间用逗号 因为前后是一句话 不是两句 3.I am looking forward that our English group would be more successful. am looking 进行时态表示持续期盼的心情 that 之后引出的是一句完整的句子 that作为引导词引出从句 所以不用to would委婉的说法 用来表达希望的心情 4.I would like to tell them some suggestions that if we think over our ideas,we will be much better. that 后是跟的是前面的单词suggestions的同位语从句 也就是对建议的内容说明了一下 写成一个复合句 文章比较流畅 有衔接性 5.上下文加些适当的衔接词 不然好像是一堆句子流水账 改的也许有点难 不知道能不能理解 Everyone in his English class must have group work.I like my group work,because it can help me learn English better.And we can save time to deal with a lot of questions.I knew Peter and Linda in the class,they are my classmates.I would like to tell them some suggestions that if we think over our ideas,we will be much better.Sometimes one of us in our group is in difficulty,at this moment we must try our best to help him or her.I do belive ‘where there's a will,there's a way.’I am looking forward that our English group would be more successful.
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