密果儿颖颖
写作思路及要点：审清题目，确定中心，选择材料。
Do you know what my favorite animal is?
你知道我最喜欢的动物是什么吗?
It's a monkey. This is a very lovely animal. Many people like them very much.
是猴子。这是一种非常可爱的动物，很多人都非常喜欢它们。
Generally speaking, monkeys are small and covered with hair.
一般来说，猴子的身子比较小，身上长满了毛。
Some of these species have two big eyes, big ears and a long tail.
其中的一些种类有两只大眼睛、大耳朵和一条长尾巴。
I can see them on TV or in the zoo.
我可以在电视上或动物园里看见它们。
Every time I go to the zoo, I go to see monkeys.
每次我去动物园，我都会去看猴子。
They often stay in the trees and jump around among the trees. They are very lively and likable.
它们常常待在树上，在树木之间跳来跳去，非常活泼，讨人喜欢。
When they are happy, they will give special performances to tourists, which is very fun.
它们高兴的时候，还会特别表演给游客看，非常好玩。
带嘴过日子
今天，我来到了红山动物园。我看到了憨态可掬的大熊猫、美丽的长颈鹿、高大的骆驼……其中我最喜爱小猴子。Today, I went to the zoo. I saw a naive panda, beautiful giraffe, tall camel. One of my favorite little monkey.小猴子真机灵。一只小猴子抢到食物，就用两只前爪迅速地剥开皮，吃了起来。它一边吃，一边还警惕地向四周张望，生怕有其它猴子来抢它的食物呢！The little monkey is really clever. A little monkey grab the food, with the two front paws quickly peeling, and began to eat it. While eating, while also carefully looked around, for fear of the other monkeys to take its food!小猴子的动作非常敏捷。猴山里到处能看见它们灵活的身影：它们有的上蹿下跳，互相追逐；有的几步就攀上了山顶；有的轻快地爬上了大树；还有的调皮地抓住铁杆荡秋千。Small monkeys are extremely agile. Everywhere can see them flexible figure in monkey mountain: some of them jumping, chasing each other; some steps on the climb to the top of the hill; some briskly climbed the tree; and playfully grab irons swing.它们还很贪吃。我一扔下食物，它们就一拥而上，争着抢食吃。最终还是大猴子反应快，一下子扑向食物，赶紧塞进嘴里，津津有味地吃了起来。而那些没有抢到食的小猴子，只能眼巴巴地看着，时不时找点地上的碎食来解解馋。They are very greedy. I dropped the food, they swarmed, racing to snatch to eat. Eventually the big monkey quick, suddenly fell on the food, hurried into his mouth, with relish to eat. But those monkeys did not grab the food, can only watch helplessly, from time to time to find food on the ground to satisfy desires.小猴子真可爱！我很喜欢它们。The monkeys are so cute! I like them very much
Diana～蜜桃
monkey is one of those most intelligence in the animalworld.it has an advanced brain..as a result it is good cooperation.also it looks similar to human.whenever you see a monkey ,it is always jumping and down,and very noisy.
Rita泱泱
Monkey is very funny. A lot of people like them. Monkeys like to eat bananas. They live on the trees and enjoy jumping from one tree to another one. I like to ess monkeys in the zoo. I also like them very much. 答案补充 中文：猴子非常有趣。人们都喜欢他们。猴子们喜欢吃香蕉。他们生活在树上，喜欢从一棵树跳到另一棵树上。我喜欢去动物园去看（see拼错了 不好意思）猴子。我也非常喜欢他们。
zhang太太
哈哈,原来这是猴子的家呀!看树干上,叶儿底下,全藏着个小猴!喝!有深黄的,有浅灰的,有大的,有小的,有不大不小的,全鬼头魔儿眼的,又淘气,又可爱. 顶可爱的是母猴儿抱着一点点的小猴子,正跟老太太抱小孩儿一样.深灰色的小毛猴真好玩儿,小圆脑袋左右摇摆,小手儿摸摸这里抓抓那里,没事儿瞎忙.当母猴在树上跳,或在地上走的时候,小猴就用四条腿抱住母亲的腰,小圆头顶住母亲的胸口,紧紧地抱住,唯恐掉下来.真有意思!Ha ha, it's the monkey's house! Look at the tree trunk, under the leaves, there is a little monkey! Drink! There are dark yellow ones, light gray ones, big ones and small ones,
