王小若1127
1.1 Don't judge a book by its cover[句子错误] 请检查Do，确认主谓一致。1.2 Welive in a complex world.[句子错误] 请检查句中谓语动词。1.3 In the world, there are good things and terriblethings.[词语错误] 请检查terriblethings，确认拼写正确。1.4 Let's see some contrary groups, beautiful persons and ugly persons,noble person and humble person, the rich and the poor, warmhearted person andcriminal person, honest person and tricky person.[词语错误] 请检查andcriminal，确认拼写正确。[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击1.5 Just like every coin has twosides.[词语错误] 请检查twosides，确认拼写正确。1.6 Every thing also has its counterpart.[批改提示] 查看every thing和everything的区别。 1.7 Clearly distingushing them is animportant skill for us.[词语错误] 请检查distingushing，确认拼写正确。[批改提示] 查看clearly与clear的区别。 2.1 Asa famous saying goes, don't judge a book by its cover.[句子错误] 请检查do，确认主谓一致。2.2 I really experienced asimilar situation.[词语错误] 请检查asimilar，确认拼写正确。2.3 One day, I was looking for a data in library in myuniversity.[其他] 请检查a data in library，本族语中很少使用。[词语错误] 请检查myuniversity，确认拼写正确。2.4 The appropriate data had not been founded for a long time.2.5 FinallyI difficultly found a book.2.6 What's worse,the book is really old.2.7 It's cover wasold enough,too.[词语错误] 请检查wasold，确认拼写正确。2.8 What bothers me a lot was a mark on the page 2 said "Wrotedown in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next is amazing.Oh!2.9 Thecontent of the book is useful a lot!2.10 Since then,I haven't judged a book by itscover.[词语错误] 请检查itscover，确认拼写正确。3.1 Beautifulperson doesn't mean that she has a wonderful heart.3.2 Do not believe other peopleeasily.[词语错误] 请检查peopleeasily，确认拼写正确。3.3 Rational judgement is important in our life.3.4 For instance, when we arebrowsing all kinds of news online, we can never know the whole story well onlyby reading the oversimplified--sometimes even misleading -headlines.[词语错误] 请检查onlyby，确认拼写正确。[批改提示] all kinds of的近义表达有a great variety of。3.5 Actually,we should not make a judgement on anything hastily until we've studied itcompletely.[词语错误] 请检查itcompletely，确认拼写正确。4.1 In my opinion, in order to make rational judgements, we'd better spend enough timeand energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.[动词错误] 请检查spend enough timeand energy to understand，确认动词用法正确。[词语错误] 请检查timeand，确认拼写正确。你可以搜索句酷批改网，很不错的，上面内容均为那个网站上的。
amy20060207
Rencently, it is generally accepted that a harmonious life is so important for everyone who lives in the dormitory。if you do not have a harmonious dormitory,you will meet some troubles。firstly，one of the impact from this phenomenon may bring negative influence on your study。additionally，a good，happy leaving environment is very important for us。it is no doubt that making a harmonious dormitory life will bring about far-reaching influence 。 as for me，i can do lots of things for the harmonious dormitory。for one thing，we should be stricting with ourselves and lenient towards others。for another，we should regard our dormitory as our second home。if we follow the above-mentioned，i believe we will harvest a wonderful dormitory life
嘟嘟的Daddy
稍作修改，供参考。Don't judge a book by its cover We live in a complex world. In this world,there are good things and bad things. Some contrary pairs of examples could be--beautiful and ugly, noble and humble, the rich and the poor, warmhearted and criminal, honest and tricky. Just like every coin has two sides, everything has its counterpart. To be able to clearly distinguish them is an important skill for us. A famous saying goes that don't judge a book by its cover. I know it's true because I've really experienced a similar situation. One day, I was looking for some data in a library of my university. At first, I couldn't find the right data I needed. However, after a hard search for it, I finally found a book. It was such an old book that almost looked like an antique. Its cover was old enough, too. What bothered me a lot was a mark on the second page saying that "Written in 1928", but the thing waiting for me next was amazing. Oh! The contents of the book were of a great use. Since then, I haven't judged a book by its cover. Beautiful person doesn't mean that she or he has a wonderful heart. Do not believe other people easily. Rational judgment is important in our life. For instance, when we are browsing all kinds of news online, we would never know the whole story well only by reading the oversimplified-sometimes even misleading-headlines.Actually, we should not make a judgment onanything hastily until we've studied it completely. In my opinion, in order to make rational judgments, we'd better spend enough time and energy to understand a person or a thing before drawing any conclusion.
吃逛吃逛2333
总体来说文章结构没有什么大问题哦，就是用词上可能还需要再斟酌一下，用一些比较学术性、规范的词来替代一些大路货的词，比如good和terrible. 然后句式可以再整齐一些。这些都是我个人的小建议。有需要还可以试试批改网人工批改，可能有帮助！
beibeidesignwang
每天改作业,最怕的就是该学生的英语作文.写错单词的,用错句型的,存在语法错误的,毛病皆是.有的同学的作文如要一一帮他改正错误,等于老师重新帮他写了一篇作文.这样势必造成批阅时间过长,影响其他环节的工作.如果粗略批阅则会阻滞学生英语写作能力的提高.针对这一问题,我摸索出一套自认为行得通的方法.根据不同情况采用不同的批改方法.如果是在课堂上进行的写作（每个单元拓展部分都有写的能力的活动）.采取大家批.具体操作是抽两名同学在黑板上写,其他同学在练习本上写.写完之后,和同学们一起当老师,找黑板上两位同学写的文章的错误.让有类似错误的同学改正.指出文章的不足之处,有哪些地方需要改进.同时也要指出优点有哪些地方可供同学们学习.效仿.通过大家当老师一起改作文的方法既调动了学生的学习气氛又加深了犯错同学的印象,让他们不再犯同样的错误.如果是课后作文,则采用收上来祥批和略批方式交叉进行.要确保每个同学在一期的英语写作中有几次祥批的机会.祥批时改出学生写作中词汇.句法.章法的错误.甚至包括单词拼写,大小写,标点符号和其他语法错误.指出学生存在的问题指明其努力方向.略批则只画圈圈点点,打分分等级.启发学生自己去找错误.培养其自发学习的能力.如果是自习课上的课文,则采取互相批改的方法.先由老师讲解批改要点,指出批改方法和原则,注意要指出批改的具体注意点.如：大小写,单词拼写,标点,时态,语态,人称,句子结构,句子顺序等等.让学生心中有数,从而批改更详细.当然,经过不同方法的写作批改后,有的同学可能写作水平任是涛声依旧.这时则需要找空闲时间面对面的批改了.就是当着学生面对面地批改.当面指出其存在的错误,让学生自己改正错误以加深印像.改完之后,让学生再体会一下.以便更好的整理思绪.以上这些就是我在批改英语作文中找到的一些方法.希望同行多提意见,帮助我更好的搞好教学工作.
LuckyXue521
教师在布置了作业之后，还需要批改，那么英语作文怎么样批改评语呢？下面是我收集整理的英语作文批改评语，欢迎阅读参考~
字迹
A、本子清秀、整洁，犹如海滨小城的街道一样，找不到一点脏……端端正正的字迹，让人看了真舒服……你的字像印的一样漂亮……很惭愧，我字没有你写的好看……
B、随随便便，字哪能不像猫掏的似的……字不在格子中间，当然看起来不顺眼……你的字东倒西歪，是不是今天风太大，才刮成这样的……我不相信你的字写不好，永远就这么潦草……认真耐心地写，你会写的比我还要棒……
内容
A、这般丰富的内容，简直和作家写出来的差不多呀……你的习作有血有肉，读起来真是一大享受……你的作文内容具体，我读的十分过瘾……你平时肯定爱看作文书，才写出这么多字……
B、干巴巴的内容如同白开水，一点味道也没有，多加些优美的词句就好喝了……不如刘维维字数多（或者举其他差生名字），你不觉得有点难为情吗……你的作文像90岁老太太的嘴，干瘪空洞，讲话直漏风……
语句
A、这篇文章流畅生动的语句，好似庐山瀑布，飞流直下，通顺极了……比喻得十分贴切，说明你一向观察细心……你怎么想出这么巧妙的拟人句的……反问句运用在这里多么合适……这个感叹句表达了你当时真实的感情……古诗引用恰到好处，我以后也要把学过的诗用到作文中去……歇后语用的妙啊妙啊，把我肚子都笑疼了……
B、作文疙疙瘩瘩，读起来很难受，如同走在乡下凹凸不平的小路上，不小心就容易跌一跤……句子像被谁切断了，不完整……写好后仔细读一读，就会发现不通的地方……不要怕麻烦，好文章都是改出来的……不能老指望别人替你改，要学会自己修改每句话……
层次
A、小节分的清清楚楚……小节划分合适……一个小节讲一层意思，段落分明……
B、这篇文章层次混乱，一节包含那么多内容，读着有喘不过气来的'感觉……小节分的太少，你舍不得多分吗……中间一节还能再分几个小节……一、二小节不该分，要合并……这一节与上面小节内容联系不上……
详略
A、这篇文章重点突出……重点部分写的详细，不错……事情的经过一五一十都叙述清楚了……按游览的顺序记叙了各个风景点，重点描写了……
B、第X节写的过于罗嗦……看不出这篇作文重点是什么……不是重点的内容应该简单写一写……
题目
A、这篇文章的题目新鲜，像春天的竹笋，又嫩又脆……题目很有意思，让人忍不住想看下去……告诉我，你从哪想出这么绝妙的题目……题目加标点符号（省略号、问号、感叹号、破折号），与众不同……我很喜欢你这个有趣的题目……
B、题目老一套，人家就没多大兴趣看你的作文了……这样的题目人人都会起，太一般……内容写的似乎和题目对不上号……动动脑筋，换个啥题目更合适……我看题目不如叫《……》更恰当一些……
标点
A、这篇文章标点打得规规矩矩，看出来你是个做事顶真的人……标点用得十分准确……
B、内容再精彩，标点马马虎虎乱打，大家也不愿意读你的作文……丢了许多标点，你想让我一口气不停地读下去，憋死我呀……标点可不好吃啊……标点打的太多，读起来一跳一跳的，仿佛瘸子走路……希望你认真打好每个标点……一句话意思说完了应该打句号……省略号占两格，不能打在一个格子里……
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