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在平平淡淡的日常中,大家或多或少都会接触过作文吧,作文根据体裁的不同可以分为记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文。那么你有了解过作文吗?以下是我整理的中考英语的作文,希望能够帮助到大家。
初三中考在即。师生的复习应该进入一个非常专题化的时期。如何写好一篇60字的作文,争取18分的最大值,显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。原因很明显,本年度是中考有史以来作文分值最高的一年,要求也是最高、最细的一年,所以分差增大,原来最多不差三四分的作文,弄不好很可能差十分以上,十分!对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字练。目标有了,最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。
60字的作文,非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点,并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。
60字的作文最好先从结构上练起,一般要分这样五个层次:
1)开始句2)向主体过度句 3)主体叙述 4)向结尾过度 5)结尾。
第一层开始句起着点题的作用,60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡,完成第四层,多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了,也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文,每句平均10字左右 (每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整),最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。
在我的眼中,我的初中英语老师是一个穿梭于课堂之中幽默的化身。
我的初中英语老师身材瘦小,一头卷发,头发上总是喜欢戴发夹。夏天,她喜欢穿休闲裙,下面往往搭配一双阿迪达斯的板鞋。
我的初中英语老师很严格。每当早读时,她一走进教室,我们便知道今天要听写英语单词了。我们拿本子的速度很慢,她就会说:“快点嘛!真的是,叫你们不把自己的听写本放好。”单词听写完后,我们总是要讨论自己听写得如何。这时她就会说:“你们能不能安静一点,再不安静的人,我就扣操行分了!”但是每次说完话后,总是会有同学还要说话,只不过把音量调小了很多。可是老师的.耳朵尖,每次都能听见,便生气地说:“A和B,我用语言告诉你们不要说话,你们偏不听,你们是不是需要我付出行动?”A和B同学就使劲摇头,老师看见后会说“你们话多,上课时就多回答问题吧!”上课时,每当有同学太活泼,老师就会十分严厉地说:“X同学禁言十分钟!”
我的初中英语老师很幽默。记得有一次,老师教我们读“沙滩”的英语单词,老师教的很认真,说:“记住,要读长音。”我当时并没有搞懂长音和短音的区别,老师请我起来朗读时,班上许多同学都在笑,我十分茫然。老师说:“你读错了。”还告诉我,如果读成了短音,就变成了另外一个单词——“母狗。”如果说“我要去沙滩”人家外国人就会听成“我要去母狗”!听到这里,我的脸刷一下就变红了。从此以后,我明白了短音和长音区别很大,英语发音很重要。
亲爱的初中英语老师,您用您的幽默教会了我更多的知识,您用您的严格让我做更好的自己。
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing some things for it. We are all polite to our teachers. (In class, we listen careful to them./When we meet them, we always say hello to them./…)We also respect the old. For example, we help them cross the streets.
We are always ready to help each other.(When one has difficulty with his studies, others will help him at once./...)We often show our love to those in trouble. Last month, the students of my class donated money to the earthquake-hit areas.
Besides, we plant trees to protect the environment and make our city more beautiful.
Nantong is my hometown. I will do my best to turn Nantong into a civilized city.
Zhang Tong
“叮铃铃',一位老师踏着铃声走进教室,清了清嗓子,喊道:"Standup。”没错,他就是我可爱的英语老师。他有一颗宛如“光头强”一般的锃亮的脑袋,两个眼睛不大不小,却因太过疲劳,带上了一对“迷你车轮”,他身材偏瘦,也不是太高,但看上去却很精神。
英语老师上课搞笑,幽默,却又令我们受益匪浅。瞧,他又开始讲作业了。“对,下一题。”他话音未落,我便开始插嘴了:“does,does,does。”我兴奋地大叫三声,一脸兴奋地望着老师,而他却一言不发,快步走到我身边,眼睛瞪得铜铃大小,望着我:“再说一遍。”还好我经验丰富,看到他似笑非笑的眼神,立马改口:“哦,不对不对,是is,is。”“呼,吓死我了,幸亏我反应快,要不就挂了。”我心中暗想道。
“哈哈哈……”,但还没等我喘口气,周围便传来了一阵哄笑,瞬间一种不好的感觉遍布全身,后背也不自觉地出了一身冷汗。只见老师一只手朝我脸伸来,轻轻捏住我的右眼皮,愠怒道:“呵,你自己好好看看。”说完,便把手缩了回去,轻拍了一下我的脑袋:“看清楚再回答。”唉,又错了。
有了刚才的教训,我便乖乖地把嘴巴闭起来,一言不发。不一会老师便注意到我的情况,又开玩笑说:“这会学乖了,不插嘴了?被揪一下就不敢说了,真是胆小。”我听了,鼓起勇气,又积极回答起来。就这样,英语课就在一阵又一阵欢笑声不知不觉地度过了。
这,就是我的英语老师了,一位幽默风趣而又善于开导学生的老师。
1. 动笔之前,认真审题
《中考考试说明》指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 围绕中心,拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条:
(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样,要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
1.内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误,书写规范,给9-10分;
2.内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无语法错误,书写较规范,给6-8分;
3.内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错误较多,书写较规范,给3-5分;
4.只写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠规范,只有个别句子可读或不知所云,给0-2分。
从个评分标准来看,它对考生的作文要求有四点:
1、内容要完整。
2、语句流畅。
3、没有语法错误。
4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。
所以,在写作文的时候,大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整,我们首先要认清看好题目的要求,抓住要点,注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下,自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后,再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅,这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上,注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上,也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段,考生应注意语法点有:动词单三形式,时态(包括:现在进行时,一般过去时,将来时),定语从句(此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用),语态,单复数,主谓一致,冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如,我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成I very like football.这样的错误一定要避免。
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作文不难写,难的是完美。现如今英语风靡全国,先后出现了许许多多的培训机构。孩子们从小开始接触英语,周末还要参加英语补习班。大家都能学好第二门语言的话,一定会非常高兴。下面是我给大家整理的一些英语范文,供大家参阅!大家可以参考作文里面的框架。
初三英语作文范文篇1Mother's day
Mother's day is a day to celebrate with all the mothers. It is a time to show our thanks to our mother. On my mother's day, I gave my mother a present and thanked her for taking care of me every day. Then I asked her to take a rest for the day and I do the housework for her. In the evening, I took my mother to a restaurant to celebrate mother's day.
6 How to learn English
First ,you should listen to English evey day. Because linstening is a part of lerning English. Second,make sure you read and practise English .Or you will understand the text slowly.Third,it is important to recite the text every morning .Read English loudly in your free time.Fourth,writing is very
necessary,you dont write a lot ,but you must learn all Writing Skills.And finally,when you are in trouble ,you must be patientand not drop.
初三英语作文范文篇2My hometown
Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .
初三英语作文范文篇3My classmate
have a classmate called Susan, she and I are the best friends you can possibly find in this whole wide world. Susan is a very pretty girl with long, shiny black hair and delicate features. She is rather slim too, which often makes me
slightly jealous. But she is such a nice friend and companion. When I was sad, she has always been there to give me a hug and tell me that's alright. And when we are both cheerful, we would do all sorts of fun activities such as
playing chess and hanging out. Although in ters of academics, she does not do as well as I, she is a really hard working student. I enjoy discussing schoolwork with her because I know that she will always be sincere. There is my classmate Susan, and she is the best friend in the whole world.
初三英语作文范文篇4My favorate sports
Basketball is my favorate sports. Different people love different sports,and in the GAME, the ethletic according to his or her talent take part in the different games. But , for me i love basketball so much!
First, basketball game is a team game,so every body have to support and coporation together that can finish this game well.
second, basketball game is a way for relax. it's good for body and good for mind too.
fanilly,it's a good exercise to everybody, it is good to our health.
In all ,basketball game is my favorate sports.
初三英语作文范文篇5Fast food
Now, in China, fast food is very popular.many people like having fast food, especially teenagers. fast food like hambugers, French Fries tastes good. in fact, this kind of food is not good for your health.but why fast food is popular in China? there are some reasons, fast food is convenient to take with you,so you can have your breakfast during the way to school. and it is easy to prepare,you can make your lunch just in ten minutes.
初三英语作文范文篇6My house
We have a new flat. It’s on the third floor. There are there bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a big living room. I have my own room now. It’s big and nice. There is a big curtains and an air-conditioner. It’s nice. I love my new room very much.
初三英语作文范文篇7
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.
Would you please offer us more information about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Zhang Hua
初三英语作文范文篇8
Once I saw the TV show, it was about the fathers and their kids having the match, they were separated by five groups and compete for the match. At first, they were competing happily, but as the game came to the end, the last group was so worried. The father inspired his kid to stick on and finish the match, while the kid was crying because he knew he must be the last. After the match, the father told his kid that winning was not the most important thing for the match, the first thing was to enjoy the game and finish it, the result was not that important. I agree with the father, the child must be endowed with the consciousness that to enjoy the game is more important than to win. Every match can only have one win, but we can enjoy every match。
初三英语作文范文篇9Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
初三英语作文范文篇10The National Day
"Oct,1 of every year is our National Day.Today is Oct 1st,2012 and is also our National Day.It is a important festival in China.The Five- Star Flag is flying high in the sky of the Tian'anmen Square. And we can have a eight-- days holiday.During the holiday,people can go to some places of interest for visiting.
On the early morning of the 1st day, I had my breakfast quickly with my family, and then went shopping outside with my several friends.After lunch, I went to the park and played badminton with my younger brother.I had planed to travel to some places of interest but youcan see so many people , so many cars,and traffic jam everywhere , so I spent the holiday at home. I got together with my family to enjoy the moonlight, discussed some interesting topics,talked about the legends such as "ChangEr". Of course,I didn't forget to do my homework. According to plan, I did my homework everyday,so I think I had a good time and I am very happy. And I wish everyone has a happy holiday.
汉语对照:
每年的10月,1日是我们的国庆日。今天是,2012年的10月1日,也是我们的国庆节。在中国这是一个重要的节日。五星国旗在天安门广场上空中高高飘扬。我们可以有一个8天的假期。节日期间,人们可以去一些名胜古迹参观。
在第一天的清晨,我和家人很快就吃完了早餐,然后和我的几个朋友去购物。午饭后,我去了公园,和我的弟弟和打羽毛球。我本来打算前往一些有趣的地方,但看到人多,车多,到处都塞车,所以我就在家度假了。我和家人一起欣赏月光,讨论了一些有趣的话题,谈了一些传奇故事,例如“长娥奔月”。当然,我没有忘记做功课。根据计划,每天我都做作业的,所以我过得很愉快,也很开心。
初三英语作文范文篇11My House
We have just moved into a new flat,like most people here living in their houses in the suburbs. Our house is big though it consists only two floors.
On the first floor there is the dining room, the lounge or sitting room, the kitchen and the hall. In the hall we set a stand for hats, coats and umbrellas. A staircase leads from the hall to the landing on the second floor; On this floor there are four bedrooms, a bathroom and a lavatory. In front of the house we have a small garden in which we grow flowers: roses,tulips and some fruit trees. Thereis also a vegetable garden where we grow all kinds of vegetables, such as cabbages, cauliflowers, and tomatoes. We all know how to plant vegetables for my father was once a vegetable grower.
At the side of the house is a garage. We haven't got a car up to now, but my moths said: we'd have one at the end of this year. People ,in this high-consumer city are very rich, not like the people live in the inland,cities.
我的家
我们家刚搬进一座新房。房子就像这里郊区大多数的住房一样。虽然只有两层,但房子很大。
一楼是饭厅、休闲室、起居室、厨房和门厅。我们把帽予、外套和雨伞放在门厅里。楼梯从门厅通往二楼。二楼有四间卧室,一个洗澡间和厕所。
房子前面有一个花园,里面种满了花,有玫瑰、郁金香,还有一些水果树。还有一个菜园,种了各种各样的蔬菜,有大白菜、花椰菜、西红柿等。我们都知道怎么种菜,因为爸爸曾经是菜农。
房子的一边是车库。我们还没有车,但妈妈说到年底就会有的。高消费城市的人们都很富有,不像住在内陆城市的人们。
初三英语作文范文篇12My Weekend
I went to Beijing Zoo on Saturday morning.
星期六早上我去了北京动物园。
I went there with my teachers by bus. It took us half an hour to get there. There were many kinds of animals. First, we went to see pandas. They were my favorite animals. How lovely they were! Then we watched the elephant show. The elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. At last, I took some photos of them. I had a great time. I stayed in Beijing Zoo for 2 hours.
我和我的老师们一起坐公共汽车去了动物园。去到那里花了我半个小时。有各种各类的动物。首先,我们去看了大象。它们是我最喜欢的动物。它们是多么可爱啊!之后我们看了大象表演。大象是如此的聪明,它们可以回答一些数学问题。最后,我给它们照了一些照片。我玩得很开心。我在北京动物园呆了两个小时。
When I came back home, I was tired but happy. I will remember these lovely animals. I am looking forward to seeing them again.
当我回到家的时候,我又累又开心。我会记住这些可爱的动物的。我期待着再次见到它们。
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