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第一段:描述图画1、 As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) above, 图画的内容。The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) tells ( 注意,如果是前面的图画是复数,则用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。2、 Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述图片里的现象, And it is very common/usual to see that in recent years.第二段:解释,说明和分析图片1、 The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What’s more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。 Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个) factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。 First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason,I think, is that原因3。第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。1、 In my view/point of view (或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to /must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。2、It is true that these unique/social points can/could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it. 采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we实现的目标!
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Yesterdy,my parents and I spent an amazing day -------having fun on beach . i was so happy when i walking on the soft sand .We walked on the beach so that we can made a beautuful , in the end we made a big heart. there was a little peole on the beach so ,it was not crowded there, and i could even see the boat far away. I love this trip。
Yesterdy,my parents and I spent an amazing day -------having fun on beach . i was so happy when i walking on the soft sand .We walked on the beach so that we can made a beautuful , in the end we made a big heart. there was a little peole on the beach so ,it was not crowded there, and i could even see the boat far away. I love this trip.。
I'm wangNan,a student of No.1 Middle School. I have a gooa friend,Jim.He' an USA girl.We are both in Class Two,Grade Eight.She is 15 years old,one year older than me. We both study hard.I'm good at physices,but she's good at math.We often help each other with lessons.Both of us like helping others. We both like sports very much.Jim enjoy playing basketball.but Ilike palying soccer. She likes green but Ilike red. Tough we are different in my ways,we are good friends。
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is ing to visit your China , what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?假设你的一位外国朋友来参观中国,你最感兴趣的地方想带他/她去看?为什么?【范文一】If one of my foreign friends is ing to China, no doubt, I will take him to Beijing first. The reasons are as following: First, Beijing is the capital of China, an energetic city with a long history. Beijing is a super large distribution center, high-quality goods across the country will appear here, so you can easily find whatever you like. Second, there are a great number of tourist attractions and historic sites in Beijing, such as Forbidden City, Tiananmen Square and Summer Palace. What is more, some of these interesting places are within walking distance, so you can visit several scenic spots by spending a relatively less time. Third, the traffic in Beijing is very convenient and inexpensive. You can take bus or subway train to anywhere you want to go.【重点句型及短语】no doubt 毋庸置疑distribution center 物流中心,配送中心a great number of 许多What is more 而且【范文二】In China, there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this, I will remend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent. Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery. From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting. I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.。
I'm wangNan,a student of No.1 Middle School. I have a gooa friend,Jim.He' an USA girl.We are both in Class Two,Grade Eight.She is 15 years old,one year older than me. We both study hard.I'm good at physices,but she's good at math.We often help each other with lessons.Both of us like helping others. We both like sports very much.Jim enjoy playing basketball.but 缉工光继叱荒癸维含哩Ilike palying soccer. She likes green but Ilike red. Tough we are different in my ways,we are good friends。
It was sunny and warm today.I went to the beach near my home with my best friend Jim.It took us enty minutes to get there by bike.We walked on the beach,played games,swam in the sea and built up a sand castle.
We didn't go home until 5:00 in the afternoon.Although we felt tired,we were happy because we really had a good time.
Bulabula789
英语看图作文的写作从整体上可分为两个过程:一,感性认识过程,即通过画面直接获得信息的过程(究竟画面展示了一个什么情景);二,理性认识过程,即针对画面让学生发挥想象力,挖掘画面间的内在联系融入自己的思想与见解(画面的内涵是什么)。
在实际教学过程中我将这两个过程具体渗透到五个环节(一抓,二列,三变,四连,五检)中去。一抓为抓主题。
首先,根据图片内容确定好题材与体裁 是写人还是写景,是说理还是叙事,是书信还是日记或其他应用文体。这一环节可采用 a, 求同法,即寻找画面中相同的人物、地点或时间等,来帮助学生确定主线,不致于跑题; b ,求异法,即启发学生观察几幅图的不同之处,挖掘出它们之间的内在联系从而确定体裁。
二列为列要点。由于书面表达是以一定的情景为基础,考查具有一定的针对性,因此要点要全面,无遗漏。
要点主要是结合图片中的情景用自己熟悉的结构与词汇列出,忌用生疏的结构与词汇按汉语思维盲目罗列,原则不求难,不求异,唯求准。三变为变要点为句子。
将第二个环节中所罗列的要点,先按一定的时间、空间及逻辑顺序排列;然后选定恰当的主语与人称,再根据动作发生的时间与主谓关系拓词成句。结合初中生的实际,要求用他们熟悉、简单的结构来表达,避免因用长句和大量的复合句而出现过多的语法错误。
如果遇到必须用长句表达时,可仿照、套用课本或各种阅读材料中出现的句型,切勿用汉语思维生造句子。四连为连句成篇。
这一环节是最关键的一环。首先,要根据题目所要求及画面展示确定好题材与体裁。
其次,要确定好行文的人称与时态的基调。再次,要在句与句以及段与段之间加一些表转折、递进和因果等关系的关联词与过渡句,使文章前后照应,行文流畅。
最后结合题目要求字数适当加入一些表达自己思想、见解的内容,使文章丰满显得有血有肉。五检为文章检查。
文章写成之后错误在所难免,检查这一环节不能省。检查可从如下几方面入手: 1 ,文章的体裁格式是否正确。
2 ,要点有无遗漏。 3 ,句子(人称、时态、语态、主谓一致、结构、词语搭配等)。
4 ,词汇(意义、拼写、时态语态,形容词与动词的形式,名词单复数)。 5 ,标点符号是否有遗漏与错误。
在经过以上几个环节之后,一篇符合要求的看图作文就算完成了。在这里还要提到的是,英语做为32313133353236313431303231363533e4b893e5b19e31333365653230一门语言基本功的训练不可忽视,书面表达中书写尤为重要。
此外,还应不断加强基础词汇与语法的积累与锤炼,只有这样书面表达才能有真正的提高。
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is ing to visit your China , what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?假设你的一位外国朋友来参观中国,你最感兴趣的地方想带他/她去看?为什么?【范文一】If one of my foreign friends is ing to China, no doubt, I will take him to Beijing first. The reasons are as following: First, Beijing is the capital of China, an energetic city with a long history. Beijing is a super large distribution center, high-quality goods across the country will appear here, so you can easily find whatever you like. Second, there are a great number of tourist attractions and historic sites in Beijing, such as Forbidden City, Tiananmen Square and Summer Palace. What is more, some of these interesting places are within walking distance, so you can visit several scenic spots by spending a relatively less time. Third, the traffic in Beijing is very convenient and inexpensive. You can take bus or subway train to anywhere you want to go.【重点句型及短语】no doubt 毋庸置疑distribution center 物流中心,配送中心a great number of 许多What is more 而且【范文二】In China, there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this, I will remend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent. Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery. From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting. I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.。
第一段:描述图画1、As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) above, 图画的内容。
The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) tells ( 注意,如果是前面的图画是复数,则用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。2、Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述图片里的现象, And it is very mon/usual to see that in recent years.第二段:解释,说明和分析图片1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What's more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。
Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个) factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。
First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。
The last reason,I think, is that原因3。第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。
1、In my view/point of view (或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to /must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。2、It is true that these unique/social points can/could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it. 采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we实现的目标。
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is ing to visit your China , what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?假设你的一位外国朋友来参观中国,你最感兴趣的地方想带他/她去看?为什么?【范文一】If one of my foreign friends is ing to China, no doubt, I will take him to Beijing first. The reasons are as following: First, Beijing is the capital of China, an energetic city with a long history. Beijing is a super large distribution center, high-quality goods across the country will appear here, so you can easily find whatever you like. Second, there are a great number of tourist attractions and historic sites in Beijing, such as Forbidden City, Tiananmen Square and Summer Palace. What is more, some of these interesting places are within walking distance, so you can visit several scenic spots by spending a relatively less time. Third, the traffic in Beijing is very convenient and inexpensive. You can take bus or subway train to anywhere you want to go.【重点句型及短语】no doubt 毋庸置疑distribution center 物流中心,配送中心a great number of 许多What is more 而且【范文二】In China, there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this, I will remend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China. Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent. Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery. From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting. I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.。
第一段:描述图画
1、As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) above, 图画的内容。The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) tells ( 注意,如果是前面的图画是复数,则用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。
2、Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述
图片里的现象, And it is very mon/usual to see that in recent years.
第二段:解释,说明和分析图片
1、The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1,Second/What's more, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2。 Last but not least/Finally, 揭示涵义/愿意/结果3(如果有的话)。And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern/care of our whole society/world/all the people.
2、There may/might be three(也可以是两个) factors which contribute to/are responsible for/explain/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。 First of all, 原因1。And then the second reason is that 原因2。The last reason,I think, is that原因3。
第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。
1、In my view/point of view (或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to /must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。
2、It is true that these unique/social points can/could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it. 采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we实现的目标!