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热爱写英语作文,你觉得需要什么理由呢?下面是我给大家整理的关于爱的大学英语作文,供大家参阅!

For a long time,I have been seeking an answer to this:What is love and what do people want to get from love?

Once I, together with several classmates, visited a teacher who enjoyed a perfect marriage. We just wanted to know the reason for their mutual affection. The teacher smiled and said:"In fact, neither of us is perfect. It is love that brings us courage and determination to seek each other's perfection. But day by day, we were surprised to see the imperfect side. Consequently,we decided to stand out the crisis." I was so touched by his words. Although it was raining heavily outside when we left his home, I could not help feeling excited.

It was a wonderful experience, just like someone groping in the darkness suddenly catching sight of a light far away.

My parents have been sharing their time for two decades,but I never saw them quarrelling. Curious, I seized an opportunity to ask my mother. She was knitting a sweater at that moment while the rest of my family members were watching TV.When asked, she somehow flushed in the face. "Ask your Dad",she said. I went to my father and raised the same question. To my surprise , my father, who was always awesome, felt embarrassed and replied in the same way:"ask your Mom."

The difference between the answers made by the teacher and my parents totally confused me. After entering the large gardennamed "love", I was so amazed to discover that each flower was getting off her unique fragrance. I forgot what to do. I was lost.

Perhaps, love really needs no reason. How can you ask a cactus: "Why do you choose the desert rather than fertile land?"How can you ask a fig: "Why do you prefer bearing fruits to blooming?" How can you ask arose, "How can you enjoy such a calm life in the greenhouse?"... What is known to us all is merely that once be loved, a cactus can bloom ever in a desert; a figcan bear fruits without blossoming; a rose can survive calmly anywhere. When love comes to you, nothing can be impossible.

Are you still familiar with these feelings? You wake up at sunrise, you feel happy. You breathe the fresh air, you feel happy. You touch the lights sent by the sun, you feel happy. You walk on your way home, you see a sparrow, you wander in the garden... Happiness follows you everywhere. And you know,all of these were just because a fascinating smile given by him/her.

Do you still remember your first lover? We met, knew,liked, loved but at last broke up. We cannot forget the words,"I love you", "I hate you" , "forget me" and maybe someday"how are you?" , "sorry", "thank you". If God is kind enough to make you meet again, what will you say? Perhaps only the simple words above. And I think we'll say nothing but smiling.We are so grateful for what time gets us to know Love needs no reason.

简 评

爱是什么?什么是爱?多少年来,痴男怨女上下求索,难得其解。这是一个谜一样的问题,这个问题永远没有标准答案。老师的经验不同于父母的,父母的经验又不同于我们的。所以每个人只好自己用心去体验。本文作者,一位刚入爱情圣殿的女同学,希望能找到幸福的真谛,文章写得不错,尤其是第四段中对父母的描写比较传神有趣:面对儿女关于爱情的提问,母亲面红耳赤;一向严肃的父亲也颇为尴尬。但是这位作者没有注意段落的衔接:第三段与第四段之间就缺少过渡。后面的部分语言较美,但思想的统一性有待加强。

(点评教师:汪中平)

I searched in memory and at last found myself surprised at what was brought back. Here is what I used to be. Once, I was simply a creature of schedules. That means I was so well planned a girl that I was entirely loyal to everything arranged.Every day you caught me as busy as a diligent ant and it was true that I actually enjoy the full and colorful life led which in other's eyes was utterly a dull and routine mode. I would not make any compromises to change the plans plans about study, plans about future, and plans about love.

To some degree, I deliberately avoided being hit by the current of love for fear that it might destroy my perfectly planned life. I did not expect its arrival. I didn't expect its power so magic and influential. And I certainly didn't expect its coming accompanied with the purest feelings of blessing.

Tall, straight and shining that is my boyfriend. That was the way he came to me: "How do you do? We are from the same high school. I am two grades senior,do you know?" He greeted me in a confident and gentle manner, and his hairstyle impressed me deeply.

Later on, the life pattern which I strictly stick to has been gradually affected by his moving behaviors. None of a day will I find him absent from waiting outside my dorm to pick me up to classroom. None of a night will end without our heated and joyful chat. Gradually, I was incredibly thrown to cultivate a fresh view on the surroundings which didn't seem as burdening as expetted. I began to adjust myself to enjoy the peaceful pace of life.

And so it goes, the sweet, joyful and romantic freshman year, a year with love that changed my way to live.

简 评

一篇温馨感人的文章。作者体会了爱情的魔力,尝到了爱情的甜美感人。作者以女孩特有的细腻笔调向我们娓娓道述了自己感情的变化与波动,让我们分享了她的甜蜜。

本文结构清晰,表达流畅,但在句子的用词结构上有些地方仍有待提高与改进,但总体来说瑕不掩瑜。

(点评教师:张雪波)

It's just an ordinary road, nearly the same as every other one in the campus, if not narrower or shorter.

Lined with tall parasol trees at both sides, the path is neat and quiet. On one end of it stands the Maths Building, which is already time worn, but still in good shape and eye catching because of its delicate design. The building dates back to 1960's,which adds to an atmosphere of art and culture. The house on the other end is much more modern. It has an European style,with smaller structures and brighter colors of walls, which gives you a feeling of vigor and youth. The two buildings, and the path, and the lawn surrounding the path, exist in harmony, and form a beautiful picture.

But in fact, it's not the natural beauty of the road that at tracts me so much. It's the romantic story of it that catches my fancy. It is said that several years ago, a romantic film was shot here right on the road. It goes like this, a boy and a girl are walking sweetly on the road one night. The boy gives the girl a bottle of perfume as a present to show his love and care for her.And that's just the girl's favorite. The girl thanks the boy shyly and sweetly with bright colors on her face. So the boy is intoxicated and encourages his pretty girl to try the perfume right now. The girl gives him a sweet smile, looking into his eyes with deep affection. "Dear, I know the most beautiful way to sprinkle the perfume", says the girl, "so close your eyes, and I will show you the magic." The boy follows, and closes his eyes,smiling in sweet expectation. The girl raises the perfume high in the air as high as she can make. Then she sprinkles gently several drops of the perfume. The boy smells the scent and opens his eyes. He sees his princess dancing so gracefully in a circle with the perfume high in her hands. She sprinkles the perfume as she dances. Tiny drops of perfume also dances in the cool night air. Scent of it spreads, and flows, surrounding and embracing the dancing girl, who looks so beautiful just as if she were a pretty and glorious angel dancing from the paradise above! The boy stares at his little beauty in excitement and doesn't know what to do. Then his hands are held gently by the girl. And he is led into the "Perfume Rain." What a perfect magic. Two lovers walk hand in hand, immersed in the air of perfume. And drops of the scent fall and lie on their hair, their shoulders, clothes, and hearts. Their love is purified and deep ened in the magic "perfume rain". Thus the road gets another name "perfume path", also a name of magic that always brings us imagination of love and romance.

That's how the road gains its special beauty. And that's why I call it "a road of love". But not long ago, it played completely different role in the university life. Then it became "a road of memory", at least to me.

That was the second day of the death of our famous head master Su, Buqing. When I went running one morning to the XiangHui Hall, I was hit by a special scene. Hundreds of paper cranes are hanging on the trees along the sides of the road, white and yellow, all delicately hand made, fluttering in the wind. Among them there were also small notes with words that expressed our love and respect for the headmaster. I was deeply moved. In my eyes, the road had never been as beautiful as it was that very morning. And my affection for it has since deepened a lot.

I love walking along the road, as it's really nice to have a road of love and memory in the campus.

简 评

校园生活永远多姿多彩、浪漫绮丽,因为它是所有学子年少青春的见证,也是所有人内心深处的一片温馨。俞沛贞同学以其细腻的笔触婉婉描述了一个浪漫名称的由来,描述了年轻学子的浪漫奇想与真挚。

本文从介绍小路的实际位置入手,引出故事并加以自己的评论,结构十分明朗;另外,作者选词也在精确的同时做到了多样化,使全文读来如春风拂面,感觉清新无比。

(点评教师:张雪波)

细微的爱英语作文

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Love is a ray of sunshine in the winter, the cold and hunger person feels particularly of warmth; Love is the desert a spring, make thirsty man have renewed the fire of hope; Love is the long drought earth a downpour, is in accordance with the nurses who get warm consolation. Love is everywhere, love can not only warm others, still can warm oneself. "Send person rose saved" said wasn't it the reason? Everyone needs love, the world need more love. Let the world fill with love, is our each person responsibility. Because only we are living in a world filled with love, our hearts will have love. You remember on May 12, 2008 the wenchuan earthquake? And you have to listen to the sound of wrenching eclogue tearing cry for help? You still have see that YiJuJu bloodied corpses? And you had smelt a drop of tears 鯹 鯹 drop? It is the tears of the lost relatives! The tears expressed relatives, but for all the emotion of a lost relatives with emotions, is that who forced them to leave tears? Is heaven? Is the upbringing of their earth? No, are not. Is the relentless disaster, ruthless earthquakes. However earthquake ruthless, people are sentient beings! Yes, in that piles of rubble, we saw that willo w father-in-law familiar faces. Ah! Rescue people, armed police officers is...... They came, they come, hope, and we saved, that's rubble a fragile life kept Shouting. Then, the rescue teams separate search hard in the debris that each the miracle of life. At this time the sweat from their cheeks drop down, but they shrugged it off, continue to perform their duties. Their faith: as long as there is a glimmer of hope, they'll pay a thousand times even million times efforts, even pay the cost of life, also a massacre. When a and a survivor had to be rescued, they even systemic injuries, never forget to say the simplest, most plain two words: thank you! This is the national excellent character! Aftershocks continued, and they -- help angel also had will farther around. This is so great and selfless dedication spirit! It is these great unselfish people, they use oneself that one heart loved too many people, those who be loved man can love continue. Yeah! Earthquake ruthless people love! It is the first soldiers, giving us the world too much love, would create a another the miracle of life. Even if we can't do the stars, then you have to do a firefly, although small, but can also lit up the world a certain corner; Even if we can't do flowers, then you have to do a single grass, even flimsy, but can also have a green; Even if we can't do hero, then you have to be a love person, although identity humble, but also can make victims get a little warm. Let the world fill with love, you and me and he coexistence!

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在日复一日的学习、工作或生活中,许多人都写过作文吧,作文是经过人的思想考虑和语言组织,通过文字来表达一个主题意义的记叙方法。那么你有了解过作文吗?下面是我为大家整理的爱英语作文4篇,希望能够帮助到大家。

But somehow those three little words

但不知道为什么这小小的三个字

Are the hardest ones to share.

却最难与人分享

And fathers say I love you

而父亲说我爱你

In ways that words can‘t match--

用言语没法比拟的方式

With tender bed time stories

或是温和地在床头讲故事

Or a friendly game of catch!

或是一场友好的捉迷藏游戏

You can see the words I love you

你可以看到我爱你这些字

In a father‘s boyish eyes

从父亲孩子起的眼睛里

When he runs home,all excited,

当他兴奋地跑回家

With a poorly wrapped surprise.

脸上带着难以掩饰的惊喜

A father says I love you

父亲说我爱你

With his strong helping hands

用他强有力的援助之手

With a smile when you‘re in trouble

用他的微笑帮你度过难关

With the way he understands.

用他所理解的方式

He says I love you haltingly.

他踌躇地说我爱你

With awkward tenderness--

带着笨拙的温柔

It‘s hard to help a four-year-old into a party dress!

帮一个四岁小孩穿上派对礼服实在是不容易!

He speaks his love unselfishly

他无私地表达他的爱

By giving all he can

付出他的全部

To make some secret dream come true.

让心底的梦想成真

Or follow through a plan.

或追求一个计划

A father‘s seldom-spoken love

父亲很少说出口的爱

Sounds clearly through the years--

随着光阴流逝变得清晰

Sometimes in peals of laughter,

有时在响亮的`笑声中

Sometimes through happy tears.

有时在欢乐的泪水中

Perhaps they have to speak their love

可能他们表达他们的爱

In a fashion all their own.

只能用自己的方式

Dear students,

After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless.

Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air.They don t have enough school things or clothes .As we all know,every kid has the right to go to school,but now they are in trouble.As a Chinese,we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help

love.. what is love? a lot of people shared their views to what love really is, or at least what love is in their eyes. perhaps love is just an illusion. a strong illusion, especially for those who are searching for a purpose of life. is love an answer? love can be wonderful, special, complicated, a distress, a gift, a curse, a tragedy, and most of all, an experience.

love is a mysterious and a complicated force. what do a person mean when they say they love someone? love is many different things. each of us have our own understanding of love is, and most of the time we base our definitions from feelings and experiences. the book defines love in many ways. "it is a strong affection for another arising out of kinship or personal ties." it can be an affection and tenderness felt by lovers. love is the object of attachment, devotion, or admiration. just when we thought we finally grasp what love is, somebody asks:

"does anyone really know what "love" mean? i believe i have a true love, but "true love" is always hurt, isn"t it?" i scratches my head with this thought and began to wonder. what is the answer to this? "this i have to know!" i said to myself. i looked in the mirror and asked "is it a true love when you know you want to live with this special person for the rest of your life? have we reached "true love" when we are ready to give everything away towards our subject? or maybe when can go as far as to sacrifice ourselves for our love? what about love as an obsession? is that possible?"but isn"t love suppose to be an obsession? if it is not, then you"d have to rationalize. if you rationalize then it"s not love, because there is always a better rationalization.""i think the "in love" phase is obsessive but according to williamson (and backed up by my paltry experience), love does not involve the ego, is selfless and the opposite of obsession."

according to marriane williamson, the author of "a return to love," there is a "holy love" and a "special love." "the latter type is the obsessiveone; finding that one "special" person absorbs _all_ your attention."so who is right and who is wrong about love? there is no wrong answer. love is many wonderful things. love may not work out all the time but it leaves you a special sort of feeling, like nothing you have ever imagined. is love a purpose of life? i think are life will be dull without it. but is it necessary? important? it is a part of life, and forever it will be a part of us. "love is not thinking about your happiness but making others happy." -anonymous "our hearts are created to love." -e. atienza"love is like a roller coaster, it has ups and downs."

"love doesn"t make the world go around, love makes the ride worth while." -unknown

"money will buy you sex but not love." -simon vainrub

"the more you cry for the person you really love, the more you can understand real love." -tsuchida tomomi

父爱如乐曲,为我弹奏美妙的乐曲;

Father's love is like music, playing wonderful music for me;

父爱如泉水,在口干舌燥时给我补充水分。

Father's love is like spring water. When my mouth is dry, give me water.

父爱如支柱!是父亲用他高大的脊背支撑着整个家。

Father's love is like a pillar! It is father who supports the whole family with his high back.

父亲爱是伟大的

Father's love is great

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With the improvement of living standards of the Chinese people, there are more and more old people. China is to the aging, but then the problem more and more. For example, first, young people are busy working have no time to take care of the old man, make the old man feel lonely. Second, China's pension system is not perfect, some families to provide for their children at the same time more than the old man, make their lives pressure is too great. But as their descendants, we should be more for them to do something. For example, it often goes home to see them and they chat. We can also help them find some entertainment activities is their life won't be lonely. Such already appear we have filial piety, it is a happy old man. I think that is a good method.

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