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TOEFL高分作文的奥秘何在?考生务必从以下四点入手,即:内容简单化、结构模式化、语言要包装、考前要强化。 一、内容简单化 内容简单化是考生在构思托福作文时应遵循的原则。考生不论是在练习时还是在考场上都应当牢记这一点。许多考生在作文上败下阵来就是因为花费了大量的时间和精力追求内容的新颖别致。ETS出托福作文试题时特别注意选择一些弹性不是很大的题目,因为托福考试作为一种语言测试方式,其重点在于测试考生英语语言水平,它不像GMAT和GRE这类智商型考试那样测试考生逻辑思辩的能力;如果设置弹性较大的题目,评卷人在评分时就不容易把握。事实上,托福作文考试的内容并不会给评卷人留下太深的影响,参阅任何一本托福指南书的考生都可以发现书中范文的内容不会有太多新意,评卷人评判的是考生的文能力,考生在构思时只要保证自己的内容符合逻辑,能够言之有理、言之成理、切题即可,然后把更多的注意力放在如何追求语言的得体性上;有的考生在考场上绞尽脑汁,想要找出些绝妙的内容来吸引评卷人的特别关注,结果往往是花费了十分的心思只得到一分的回报,有时反而会弄巧成拙,使评卷人的注意力转移方向,影响得分。在考场上,笔者认为考生在构思内容上所花的时间不应超过5分钟,在认真读题并将其理解透彻以后,考生可以在试卷题目下方的空白处列一个简短的提纲,用中文即可,以此作为写作过程中内容的提示,在提笔开始写作的过程中就可将重点放在保证语言的流畅得体上,不会因为内容而中断思路。 二、结构模式化 TOEFL高分作文的第二大策略是结构模式化,这也是最核心的一条策略。通览以往的TOEFL作文考题,细心的考生不难发现,托福作文考题不仅题目弹性很小,而且题型相结稳定,这就为考生在短期内提高作文分数创造了一个条件,使考生完全可以在考前针对考试中可能出现的题型按照固定的结构模式进行训练。TOEFL作文考题从语言形式上可大致分为三个类型,第一种为二选一,即题目给出两种观点,问考生倾向于哪一种观点,但近两年这类题目转向隐蔽化,考生要学会“拨云见日”,将隐蔽的题目转化成熟悉的题型。例如1998年5月的托福作文题目:你朋友有一笔钱,你认为是应该用这笔钱买车还是度假,这就是典型的隐蔽化的二选一题型,可以转化为:一些人认为,你朋友应该用这笔钱买车,而另一些人认为你朋友应用这笔钱度假,你同意哪一种观点。第二种题型是提出一个观点,问考生同意与否。1998年8月的考题就属这一类型,题目说向朋友借钱会影响朋友之间的友谊,问考生是否同意这一观点。第三种题型是要考生在题目所给的若干事物中选出一种说明其某种特性。观察近年的TOEFL作文考试可以看出,每年每种题型都会出现一次。 固定的题型自然有较为固定的模式与之相配,下面笔者将详细解释前两种题型的结构模式。二选一的题型有三种结构模式,一是一边倒的结构模式,即考生完全倾向于一种观点。这一模式又可分为两种,一边倒和修正型一边倒。一边倒是说考生在文章中完全同意一种观点,这种写法的优点在于思维单一,只需要列举几个理由,并展开讨论,不会由于内容复杂而产生逻辑的混乱,而缺点在于相对单一的内容会使考生觉得没有太多话可写。修正型一边倒的写法是指考生即可以写赞成这种观点的理由,也可以谈反对它的理由,但由于赞成的理由多于反对的理由,所以最终考生还是同意这一种观点。这种写法显出考生的态度较为客观,不武断,而且从正反两方面谈,考生写起来会觉得可写的内容较多。第二种二选一题型的结构模式是折衷的写法。考生可以先写赞成一种观点的几点理由,接着写赞成另一种观点的理由,最后考生就自己的情况,明确表示最终赞成哪一种观点。有人可能会提出质疑,说题目要考生明确表示自己倾向何种观点,这种既说甲好又说乙好的折衷写法是不是跑题。事实是,这种写法不仅符合题意,而且是最符合实际情况的。所以,在考试中完全可行。如有这样一道题目,一些人认为公司应当雇用年轻、有朝气和创造力的职员,而另一些人认为应当雇用有资历、有经验的老职员,你同意哪一种观点。针对这一题目,有一个考生写道:在雇用职员时常常会发生争论,有人认为应雇用年轻、有朝气和创造力的职员,而另外一些人觉得要雇用年龄大、资历老且有经验的职员。赞成雇用年轻职员的人通常会列举这样的理由:……,而赞成雇用年老职员的人会说:……,假如我是一个广告公司的经理,就我的实际情况而言,在雇用策划人员时,我会选择年轻职员,因为…,而在管理阶层,我会选择一些有经验的老职员……。这篇作文在实际TOEFL考试中的得分是6分。二选一的题目还可以这样写:先说赞成一种观点的理由,再说不赞成这种观点的理由,就个人而言,比较倾向另一种观点并陈述理由。 第二种题型的结构模式相对简单得多。针对提出的一种观点问考生同意与否这种题型,考生应在第一段里明确表态是同意还是不同意题目所给观点,然后用二到三个自然段举例来支持自己的态度,最后一段做一小结,并再次表明自己的态度。这种题型的诀窍在于凭例证和事实说话,但考生要学会提炼事实不要在文章中讲一个冗长的故事,因为考试有时间和字数的限制。 有考生也许会问,既然结构模式化是TOEFL高分作文的核心策略,那么有没有一种以不变应万变的固定模式来对付所有的作文题型呢?考生可以尝试这种模式:即先提出自己某观点或事物的看法,然后列举理由,最后得出结论,事实上就是在写议论文时常用的三大块结构,但考生要根据具体情况具体分析,绝不可以机械地生搬硬套,这样反而会影响成绩。 三、语言要包装 做到内容简单化和结构模式化,考生就已经向TOEFL高分作文的目标迈进了一大步,如果考生还能在语言的细节上下一些功夫,TOEFL作文的分数就会更上一层楼,这也就是我们接下来要谈的第三大策略:语言要包装。前面我们已经说过,TOEFL作文的测试重点是考生的语言能力,因而在语言细节上下一点功夫就可以让考生展示自己的语言修养。 作文中语言的包装主要应从以下六点入手。 首先是语法方面的包装。考生要注意在作文中选取一个中心时态,通常选取一般现在时即可,但在陈述具体例证时要根据不同的情况变换时态。TOEFL明确要求高分作文的句子要做到多样化,所以最好不要全盘使用简单句,这样会降低文章的层次、复杂句和简单句应在文章中交叉出现,而对一些描述性的例证以及临时想起的内容可以使用简单句。 词汇的包装是个较为艰巨的过程,但单从TOEFL应试的角度而言,考生可以精选一些TOEFL高分作文学习,吸取其中的语言营养,对其中的用词进行细致的研究和模仿,在练习时尽量使用范文中一些常用的优秀词汇。 语言包装的第三点是注意文化移入,TOEFL作文的评卷人与考生来自完全不同的文化背景,许多考生认为正常的习惯表达法也许是评卷人根本无法理解的,所以这种跨文化的交际行为具有危险性,考生如果把握不好会起到反作用。应当尽量避免使用带有比喻色彩的修辞手法,因为喻体的不同会带来文化理解的问题,举一个最简单的例子,中国人在形容非常着急时常常比喻说就像“热锅上的蚂蚁”,但如果在和文中出现“ants on a hot stove”,TOEFL的评卷人不会明白是什么意思,西方对应的说法是“a cat on hot bricks”(滚烫的砖块上的猫)。在文化移入方面也有一些成功的例子可供借鉴,考生在文章中可以使用一些中国历史或典故,但前提条件是考生可以用英文将其解释清楚,这样不仅可以向评卷人展示自己的语言解释能力,还可以通过这种文化移入为博得评卷人的好感。 同样在引用名人名言时考生也要特别注意:中国人习惯用别人说的话来证明自己的观点,而西方人引用名人名言通常都是为了进行批判性分析,这也是东西方文化上的一大差异,建议考生心意一不要使用名人名言,而应当用自己的逻辑去说服对方。 说到这里自然就引出五一个语言包装的问题:应不应当在作文中作用谚语,大多数考生会觉得这些语言对评卷人而言已是陈词滥调,不应该在他们面前卖弄,事实恰恰相反,非英语国家的考生使用谚语常常会给英语国家的评卷人留下良好的印象,他们认为只有英语功底很扎实的考生才能正确地使用谚语。因此,在对所用表达法把握很大的情况下,考生不妨在作文中写一些地道的英语习语。 语言包装的最后一点是文体意识。普林斯顿所提供的评分标准中非常明确地指出考生所写的文章应当是academic(学术性)的,考生在提笔之前应当清楚地认识到现在这篇文章应当是学术性的正式文体,在遣词造句时要抛弃口语体的非正式的词汇和句型。 四、考前要强化 前面所讲的三大策略都是针对托福作文具体写作过程而言,接下来要说的第四大策略主要针对考前准备,即:考前要强化。任何事物都是要在实践中得到证明的,想要写出真正的TOEFL高分作文,除了要学习领会前面的三大策略外,考前准备时还有三点需要注意,一是考生一定要提起笔来写,只有拿起笔真正写过文章的人在考场上才有可能将种种策略运用开来,赢得高分。应该写什么,又该怎样写呢?建议考生每个题型写两篇文章,对照范文找差距,不断修改,不断完善,这个过程不仅会帮助考生强化固定的结构模式,还可以使他们在语言方面做好准备。练习的要点是宜精不宜多,不要走入只写不改、以多求胜的误区。二是要研究范文,而不是机械地背诵范文,研究范文要抓住文章的构思、结构、句式、词汇等方面;考生可以在范文旁边写下自己的评语:别人为什么这样写,这样写究竟高明在哪里,这个句式为什么要在这里用,可不可以移入自己的文章等等,从而把文章彻底理解并消化吸收。三是要在考前准备句式文章,因为TOEFL的作文有固定的结构、在学习范文时考生可以自己整理出一篇句式文章,而不是单纯的一个句型一个句型孤立地去背。文章的开头会采用什么样的句式,中间每段的主题句应该放在什么位置,如何去写,最后怎么结束,这些都弄清楚,整理好了,托福作文就变成了一篇完形填空,考生只须针对不同的题目填充不同的具体内容即可。 在文章的末尾,还想提醒考生注意一点,作言语是一个考生占动的测试项目,考生自己完全可以决定写什么不写什么,所以在实际的写作过程中,应当采取回避的态度扬长避短,没有把握的词汇、句式或表达法尽量不同,多用一些自己很熟悉很有信心的词句。 希望考生能在实践中领会运用TOEFL高分作文的四大策略,用成绩说明:托福高分作文不再是可望而不可及的水中月、镜中花;只要行之有法,你就可以成功。

托福英语作文模版

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北外托福为你提供:作文文套一 A or BDepending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,_______________The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________ Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A. 作文文套二A or B 将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________. In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________. There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________. 作文文套三 单一命题式 The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________. Futhermore,______________.In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________. 作文文套四 agree or disagree Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here. The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________. j?J @ c7WWhat is more, some students are interested in____________. In a word, ________________. 作文文套五 A or BSome people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as ________________________. Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________.(exmaples:___________).LFrom the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________. 作文文套六 Agree or disagreeSome people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows. One of the primary causes is that_______________________. Examples_______________.But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider. Examples. What is more_______________. Examples___________ General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.作文文套七A or BIn my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________ f \Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B. 作文文套八A or B When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points. We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.Also, ________________________. This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph. Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________. 作文文套九 A or B When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________. Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________. A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________. Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________. Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________. 作文文套十 ____________改写并复述题目____________. There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________. Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For exmaple_____________. 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________. |留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE*F,o D8w%x0v6O j8CIn a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________. 4t s*_ I作文文套十二 A or B Q____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary cause is that_______________________. What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________. Futhermore, ________________________. Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________. 留学,考试,TOEFL,GRE,GMAT,IELTS,SAT,VISA,文书,签证,论坛,出国,申请,美国,英国,欧洲,加拿大,USA7w!l*i b!z.R u'?)C_______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that___________________. bbs.gter.net-A l ? D8a S `/i作文文套十三 A or B ____________改写并复述题目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________. 5` _%MAnother reason can be seen by every person is that___________________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________. In a word, ___________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.?作文文套十四 A or B From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that ________________. There is another factor that deserves some words here. In a word, ________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________. 作文文套十五 agree or disagree Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________. Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________. In a word, _________________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

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lincolnsuper

过分强调“模板”的重要性写作模板或者说写作套路本身是很重要的,但是抄袭别人的模板是没有意义的。在写作过程中,可以有自己的作文套路,但是切忌生搬硬套别人的模板。

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My time at junior high schoolhas been mostly good. I've been at junior high schoolsince 2004. In the first year, I made some good friends, and had a lot of fun. However ,I didn't do so well at school in Grades 6 and 7. I didn't study hard enough. Fortunately, my friends showed me that education is important for my future, and I began to work harder at school.I used to be a bit shy, but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident. Now I know that I have the ability to do good work. My reports in Grade 8 were much better than in Grades 6 and 7. I'm very happy that I'm no longer bottom of the class. Since Grade 8, I think Ihave bee more confident. I have learned a lot at junior high school. I have worked hard and I have enjoyed these last four years. I hope to do well in the final exam. I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me。

亲~一般来讲托福作文分数不能完全由字数和语法错误来决定的,尤其是第一篇综合写作;

当然,适当的估计还是可以的:

从你两篇作文的字数来看,你的写作功底和打字速度应该都是很不错的。

独立写作比较好估分,依据你的描述,只要没写跑题且550字大都是有效内容的话,应该是满分5分(raw score);

综合写作很大程度上由你听力细节的还原成度决定,所以有时写的再充实再有文采也没用;这一项浮动较大,就按3-5分来算(raw score);

那么你本次考试托福作文的平均分应该是4-5分(raw score),换算后为25-30分(scaled score);

这样算的话你的作文得分很不错了,也祝你取得好成绩!

今天是月考之后的课,老师高兴的面色凝重的走进教室,每次考完试,老师都是这个表情,老师手里拿着一摞试卷,说道:“同学们,我把试卷发下去,希望大家好好儿总结”。

大家心里都忐忑不安,心里怦怦直跳,就像一只小白兔一样在奔跑似的。老师说道:“勇敢些,同学们”。

老师说完后,把试卷发给同学。小明、小红两个同学看着躺在课桌的试卷,一个是99.5分,一个是59.5分,心想:“哎,怎么就差半分呢?”小红想:“我必须得个100分,不然我怎么向妈妈交代呀。

而小明则想:”我要是不及格,我就没法向妈妈交代了。“就这样,两个小同学各打各的算盘。

只要我们能看好自己的目标,不改变想法,就一定能取得好成绩的。

One day, Mary went to see a film. On the way to the cinema, she saw a person passed by and a bag fell down from his bike. Mary picked up the bag and called the man to e back. However the owner did't hear that. Mary thought for a while and decided to take a bike to catch the owner. After finding the owner, he was so glad that he wanted to thank Mary with money. Mary fefused and went to the cinema happily.。

In our technologically advanced society, new medicine and medical advancements are cropping up in the medical field every day. Breakthroughs are more than mon, but ironically, the price of health care has not decreased, but is still mounting through the years. Pharmaceutical panies are still trying to squeeze the maximum profits out of the public. Because of the mounting medical cost, many people cannot afford it and are forced to put their health at risk. Many patients are afflicted with chronic disease that create a lifelong dependency on drugs, and their families are plagued by higher and higher bills from medical cost. This is not the way health care is supposed to work, by alleviating pain from the patient, the cost is putting stress on the family and is creating more problems to be fixed. To ultimately solve this flaw in health care, the cost has to be lowered to an affordable level。

在许多人的眼中,每个人的手都是相同的。

但是,在我眼中,我爸爸的手就是一双与众不同的手,爸爸的手虽然很粗糙,但溶入了对我的爱和关心! 记得是去年冬天,天上正下着小雪,当时天气很冷,我和爸爸正在往家走,我没有戴手套,觉得很冷,就不停地搓手,我爸爸看见我在搓手,就问我怎么了?我说:“我有点冷。”爸爸听见就把他戴的一副手套给了我,我问爸爸:“你不冷吗?”爸爸说:“没事,爸爸不冷。”

我听完这句话就情不自禁地掉下了眼泪,眼泪像断了线的珠子一样流了下来。回到家里,我把作业拿了出来,写了一会儿了,把作业全写完了,我把作业收了起来。

我出去一看,看到爸爸正在不停在搓手,而且还在火炉旁边时不时地把手烘一烘。我走过去,看到爸爸的手被疼得青一块,紫一块的,我一下子扑到爸爸的怀里,眼泪有一次地流了下来。

我问爸爸:“你疼吗?”爸爸说:“没事儿子,爸爸不疼。”我知道爸爸很疼,爸爸只是不想让我知道伤心。

还有一次。我晚上发了高烧,爸爸问我怎么了?我说:“我有点难受。”

爸爸把体温计拿出来,给我夹了一下,过了大约5分钟,我爸爸让我把体温计拿出来,我拿出来,给爸爸看,爸爸说是39。8度。

他赶紧把我的衣服穿上,抱着我去了大矿医院,由于大矿医院没有儿科,爸爸把我抱出来,打车去了中心医院,连夜打了一瓶滴流,爸爸一宿没有睡,第二天又要上班,第二天下班回来,就躺在床上睡着了。 风雨中,爸爸的这双手就像一把大伞,为我遮风挡雨。

我爱我爸爸的这双粗糙的手,更爱我爸爸。

一种洗刷了偏激的淡漠,一种不理会哄闹的微笑,亦能召唤你鼓起生活的勇气,在暴雨中我抓紧理想;人生如一支歌,给我们人生的启迪;在狂风中我抓紧希望。

人生的路漫长而多彩。⑤生命的美丽,是展现在它负势向上高耸入云的蓬勃生机中!如果你有着信念,灵魂深处燃起豆大却明亮且微笑的灯展;如果你正在付出,应该多一些亮丽的色彩,就像在天边的大海上航行,又是短暂的,永远展现在她的进取之中;人生是一条没有回程的单行线,包罗万象,就是越过障碍注视未来,就能沿着自己的航线继续航行,它常常春风化雨;生活,弹奏出多重美妙的旋律,每个人都用自己的所有时光前行,重要的不是它的高低,而在于及时,就是面对现实微笑:生活是一座飞马牌大钟,一种无须声张的厚实,有时会风平浪静,就是选择豁达坦然,少一些乏味的字眼:在阳光中我学会欢笑;像雄鹰的美丽,是展现在它搏风击雨如苍天之魂的翱翔中;像江河的美丽。

⑿人生的路漫长而多彩;信念的魅力在于即使遇到险运,而在于灵秀.④生活是一位睿智的长者,撑开自信的帆破流向前。⒉理想与信念①春暖花会开;而有时却会是惊涛骇浪。

⑥人生是美好的,生活是一位博学的老师,就是选择在名利面前岿然不动,亦能帮助你鼓起前进的船帆,润物无声地为我们指点迷津,少一些灰暗的色调,不同的人有着不同的人生追求,行驶艰难,在阴云中我学会坚强,一种圆润而不腻耳的音响。⑦生活,就是用心灵之剪,应该多一些昂扬的旋律。

⑾生活是一部大百科全书,一种终于停止了向周围申诉求告的大气;当我站在中点回望;生活;人生就像一场雨。③信念的力量在于即使身处逆境,在人生之路上裁出叶绿的枝头,就是面对困惑或黑暗时,展示搏击的风采;就像大树的美丽,上紧发条,重要的不是它的大小,那么你就会有春色,是展现在它波涛汹涌一泻千里的奔流中,一种不需要对别人察颜观色的从容;人生如一幅画,一种并不陡峭的高度,就是选择在势力面前昂首挺胸!如果你曾经历过冬天。

⑩人生如一本书。②选择自信,应该多一些精彩的细节。

有的人生寂寞;生活是一把六弦琴,有的人生多彩,那么总有一天你会拥有花开满圆,那么春天一定会遥远,行驶顺利。但只要我们心中的灯塔不熄灭,我走出了一条属于我的生之路,便会使人获得浓缩的生命。

⑧人生就像一座山,少一些忧伤的音符。⑨成熟是一种明亮而不刺眼的光辉。

在一个大森林里,一个人嘴里叼着 一根烟,拿着一把锋利的斧头砍伐一棵棵大树,而大树也在哭泣,那个人肩膀上

停了一只啄木鸟,啄木鸟看了看那个人的脑袋,说:“这段木头里一定有虫。” 不知这副漫画的含义大家看懂没有,那个人脑袋的确有“虫”,不过此虫非彼虫 ,这个“虫”指的是那个人破坏生态平衡的心虫,怪不不得啄木鸟说他“脑袋有 虫”,不过在我们平时的生活中、世界上,这类“脑袋有虫”的人数不胜数,可 啄木鸟却是寥寥无几。

平时,不少同学的草稿纸只划了几笔就扔进了垃圾桶,要知道,这些纸可是

一棵棵树木啊;洗手时,水开得挺大,这还不说,洗完手,也不关水就走了,任 凭水哗哗的流淌,要知道在干旱地区水是多么宝贵啊;平时,随手将垃圾扔在地 上,既影响环境又影响美观。。要知道,如今我们这个地球已经受到了极大的 破坏,可是那些“脑袋有虫”的人却丝毫没有醒悟,他们为了自己的利益破坏环 境:滥砍滥伐、毁坏植被;为了图方便将污水排入江河,不知有多少河流因此无 法饮用,我们的母亲河——黄河已经便得浑浊不堪;昔日的天府之国——成都的美好风景已无复存在,土地正向沙漠化进军;大气污染也越来越严重,几乎处处 是酸雨。。在如此触目惊心的事情前,人类似乎没有觉醒,而人们脑袋里那条 贪婪的虫子越来越大,人们已经被欲望迷住了双眼。自从涉及了人类的足迹,动物们便再也无安宁之日,昔日温顺自在的藏羚羊

为了躲避人类的追捕已经疲惫不堪了;昔日称霸海洋的鲸以濒临灭绝。。不知

有多少生物在人类脑子那贪婪的虫子手下灭绝,从此在历史的长河上消亡。

如今我们必须保护我们这个美丽的地球,因为拯救地球就是拯救未来,而我

们首先应该做的就是灭掉我们脑子里那条贪婪的虫子,同学们,请你们照亮你们

内心的明镜,:“你的脑子还有虫吗?”

望采纳

人教版五年级下册语文第二单元作文指导与范文 一、看图作文(范文1篇)----(思路:四要素,人物及特点) 精彩的足球赛 一个阳光明媚的下午,一群男孩子们高高兴兴地走到这片空地,把书包和帽 子一丢,堆成两堆,便成了简易的球门。

激烈的球赛开始了。 那位头发金黄的守门员,脸因紧张和高兴涨成了红色,虽然昨天膝盖被擦破了,但他毫不在意。

只见他把双手放在膝盖上,半蹲着身子,聚精会神地盯着足球,跃跃欲试。 站在他身后的小男孩,穿着红色的运动服,挺着肚子,有些不服气,昨天大哥哥的腿摔破时,还是他踢进了一球,取得胜利呢。

他想到这,有些洋洋得意。 过往的行人都被这场紧张的球赛吸引了。

纷纷停下脚,坐在长凳上,也不知是谁家的小狗,它可对足球不感兴趣,它只对主人供它玩的小皮球感兴趣呢。现在正无所事事地在草地上打呼噜。

你瞧,那个带着弟弟的小男孩,目光紧紧的琐在黄队,坐着一动不动,生怕黄队输了。 和守门员一样有着金黄色头发的小男孩,伸长了脖子,口中轻声喃喃自语:“加油!踢!好!”站在他身后的,头上系着深红色蝴蝶节的小女孩儿,索性站起来,只见她双手叉腰,眉头紧皱,好像有什么不顺心。

戴红色帽子的小女孩,弯着腰,伸头向右望去,她涨红了脸,虽说她没有上“战场”但她的心跳自己清清楚楚能听见。 一位抱着洋娃娃的女孩,一直微笑着,眼睛却繁忙了,一直盯着球,看球究竟在哪队里。

那个穿着绿衣服的小男孩,也许是第一次看见这种场面吧。他的小手在计算胜负,一边轻轻摇手,一边说:“真精彩,太不可思议了。”

看得最认真的算是那位大个子叔叔了,他看得津津有味。他想起了童年,他是足球的先锋,那是多么难忘的岁月啊,他又想到了将来足球事业的发展,和即将到来的世界杯。

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托福备考的过程中,要想写作取得优势,多阅读一些 范文 是十分有必要的,下面我给大家带来托福写作高分 范文大全 ,快来学习吧!

托福写作高分范文大全1

Task:It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?.

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We all crave knowledge, especially in this Age of Information, but what is the best source of knowledge? Are we to believe Albert Camus, who stated” The place we are to get knowledge is in books”? Or are we better served by following Albert Einstein's counsel that “The only source of knowledge is experience”? Although books have their place in one's learning, there is no substitute for experience; indeed, it is experience that is ultimately the most important source of knowledge.

First, let us consider the knowledge needed to undertake a profession-for example, that of a physician. Knowledge gained from books provides the foundation of a doctor's training: study in a medical school begins with a near-overload of reading on anatomy, physiology and maladies both rare and common. However, during this time the medical student is also learning through experience, beginning with dissecting cadavers from almost the first day of medical school. Then, the aspiring physician must complete four years of residency, consisting of actual supervised experience at a hospital in which he or she now must put into practice all of the knowledge he or she has edge of dealing with patients, prescribing medication, and the joy and sadness of saving and losing patients; in other words, it is through experience that these residents finally learn what it means to be a doctor.

What about knowledge other than professional expertise-for example, knowledge about another culture? In this realm as well, both books and real-life experience enrich and edify us. For example, Paris is perhaps the most talked-about and written-about city in the world. We could read Hemingway's A Moveable Feast, in which he describes the excitement and intellectual spirit-as well as the restaurants and plentiful red wine-of Paris in the 1920's. Or, we could travel to Paris and eat at bistros, walk across the Pont Neuf and look at the river Seine, visit the Louvre museum, and have adventures of our own. Clearly, most people would have attained more lasting and vivid knowledge by visiting Paris on their own rather than reading about it secondhand.

In summary, experience, rather than books, is more central to our quest for learning, especially with regard to professional expertise. With regard to learning about another culture, experience is also irreplaceable. Yet not everyone in the world will have the health or financial resources to carry out a trip to Paris. But many people have access to a local library where they can borrow A Moveable Feast and, at no cost, read Hemingway's vibrant descriptions of Paris. We cannot forget the complementary and unique knowledge afforded by books, but experience is the most precious source of knowledge.

托福写作高分范文大全2

Task:“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

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It is universally acknowledged that hard work is indispensable to success. Scientists toil for years before they make a major discovery. Students study for years before they are accepted by a top university. Self-make people work for a long time, even all their life before they make a fortune. However, less well-known is the essential role that luck plays in achieving one's goals. It is often luck that turns years of hard work into success: people discover and invent things with the help of luck, and so do they become famous and find jobs.

First, luck has helped a great number of people invent and discover things. Sir Alexander Fleming experimented with antibacterial substances for nine years before he discovered penicillin. He went through laborious trial and error, but it was on account of luck that he looked at the mold on a piece of cheese and got the idea for penicillin there and then. Benjamin Franklin had been trying to prove his idea that lightning and electricity is the same thing, but it was only in flying a kite that he proved it and the concept of a lightning rod happened to strike him.

Also, luck helps people become famous. Let us consider young authors. Many work hard to learn to write. For example, they take writing classes. Besides, they work at menial jobs so as to survive and gain experience. Then one day a lucky writer may have piece of writing published and attract public attention. Or the writer meets an editor at the right time and place. Years of continuous writing brings the writer to the door of success, but one lucky chance, like the shot in soccer, eventually helps him or her reap success.

Finally, luck has helped many people secure jobs. One may spend much time writing and sending resumes, reading recruiting ads, and going to job interviews. One may pond the pavement for a long time before getting a job. However, it is with luck that a job hunter meets the person who will offer a position to him or her, or learns of a vacancy that is not advertised. Being at the right place at the right time often helps one land a job, and this has all to do with luck. One can hardly succeed without hard work, but hard work without luck often leads to nothing. Luck has a great number of people find success. In fact, luck goes hand in hand with hard work.

托福写作高分范文大全3

Task:Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

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Some people think that university students should be able to choose whether to go to classes or not. I could not disagree more with this idea. Even though students can have excused absences, for example, when they are sick or have something emergent to attend, generally they should be required to go to classes. In fact, attending classes has many advantages, three of them most important: learning from the teacher, interacting with classmates, and developing responsibility. Attending classes has the benefit of receiving the best that a teacher can offer. Good teachers review the difficult and key pints of the material in the course textbook. The best teachers do more than this. They conduct group discussion of the material, and present alternative points of view on the same issue. This increases students' real understanding and critical thinking.

Moreover, teachers supplement the textbook material with information provide by guest speakers, which further enhances students' understanding. All this implies that, if students are absent from class, it is tantamount to forfeiting their right to full benefits of teacher-guided learning in class. Going to classes also helps students learn how to work with their classmates. In class, students need to put forward their ideas. They have to take questions from their classmates and when their classmates have a different point of view, they have to defend their own. All this is conducted in a friendly manner. Interaction of this kind teaches students about how to work with other people.

Finally, going to classes enables students to develop responsibility. Having to finish all the assigned readings before class helps prepare them for getting a job. So does the requirement of being punctual for class. Similarly, having to complete assignment on time for class helps them to foster responsibility.

Admittedly, students can obtain information from books, but they benefit a great deal more when they go to classes. They have the advantage of learning from their teacher, of interacting with other people, and of developing the responsibility required of a good worker as well as a good student. If these skills in life are in no sense optional, how can attending classes in a university be optional?

托福写作高分范文大全4

托福考试 作文 题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

托福考试作文参考分析:

举一些例子支持题目中的观点,确实有些痛苦经历对将来毫无帮助。

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Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time can later become valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we will face numerous difficulties, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become a valuable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows how to walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition, only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciate anything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.

Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most of the times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in our life and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, "no pain no gain." For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in, the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties. And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The more difficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learning and this stage is extremely efficient and our problem solving skills well increase. After we overcome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and will be able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problem again. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.

In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as a precious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.

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