祎伊妈妈
Today is Children's Day.My father takes me to the zoo.There are many kinds of animals，the tigers， the pandas，the lions， the elephants，the giraffes and the bears.They are different from each other ，some are shy， some are beautiful， some are interesting ， some are friendly， some are so cute. But i think these animals are unhappy， they should live in the forest，because the life in the zoo are different from that in the forest.The children`s day is coming .so I am very happy.I think that day I am going to buy a beautiful gift for me.on that wonderful day， I am going to play in that children‘s garden whit my mother and father. it will be the most happy day！选六句即可
木有雨啊
一、作文范文:：
Today is Children's Day.My father takes me to the zoo.There are many kinds of animals,the tigers, the pandas,the lions, the elephants,the giraffes and the bears.
They are different from each other ,some are shy, some are beautiful, some are interesting , some are friendly, some are so cute.
二、翻译：
今天是儿童节一天。我的父亲带我去动物园。那里有很多种动物，老虎，熊猫，狮子，大象，长颈鹿和熊。他们彼此不同，有的害羞，有的漂亮，有的有趣，有的友好，有的那么可爱。但是我认为这些动物不快乐，它们应该生活在森林里，因为动物园里的生活和森林里的不同。
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百变珠珠侠may
Children's day is coming. I decided to do many things on that day.First of all. That day we will get up early, came to the school, because we now is a junior high school student, so the school won't for us as the primary that give us after 61, although just top junior high school of time, but a little habits, half year after will probably already accustomed to junior middle school life. 61 will be here soon, and now we are facing tests sports add try. Also is in the June 1 day, I hope we can take an examination of teenager years is a good grades.
