评价英文书面表达

I think , Chinese people should keep on learning English. I believe that learning English is good for everyone and it isn’t a waste of valuable time. As economic globalization continues to develop that the society requires not only we learn language but also need we learn many other languages.For example, English is a worldwide way of munication .It

is widely used in international trade, business negotiation, international conference and so on.If you learn English your career will be more successful or get a better job opportunities. To second with, by learning English we can enlarge our mental horizons

and increase our knowledge that understanding the different person, a

different lifestyle. and then convenient to municate with other.

Through the study of English, we can also read more all kinds of books, magazines and newspapers, and understand the news all over the world. Thirdly,as is known to all more and more foreigners are interested in Chinese literature and culture. We only learn English well to better

promote China to foreign countries and promote Chinese culture that to other countries know more about China and like China. To sum up that we must improve our English level

and persistent learning English. 我认为,中国人应该坚持学英语。

我认为学习英语对每个人都有好处而且他不是在浪费宝贵的时间。 随着经济全球化的不断发展, 社会不仅要求我们学好母语,同样也需要我们做到多种语言同修.例如，英语就是一项世界性的交流方式。它被广泛地应用在国际贸易、商务谈判、国际会议等等。如果你学好了英语你的事业将会更成功或者获得更好的工作机会。 第二，通过学习英语,我们可以扩大我们的精神境界（视野）和增加我们的知识, 了解不同的人,不同的生活.并且方便与其他人交流。通过学习英语，我们也可以阅读更多的各式各样的书籍，杂志和报纸，了解世界各地的时事新闻。 第三，众所周知越来越多的外国人对中国文学和文化感兴趣,只有学好英语才能向国外更好的宣传中国并且弘扬中国文化让其他国家更了解喜欢中国。 综上所述，我们必须提高我们的英语水平并且坚持不懈的学习英语。

《阿甘正传》观后感Forrest GumpIt is one of the greatest novels that I have ever read. The main role called Forrest Gump.Let me introduce him shortly. Forrest Gump, who is unfortunately born with a rather low IQ, has already created a miracle, achieving a great deal of incredible success. He is a football star, a war hero, and later a millionaire. Stupid as he is, he gains his brilliant life indeed.At the beginning of reading this novel, I thought an idiot's life must be more difficult than others. His life must be full of mocks. My thoughts are proved in the book. Because he is an idiot, all the people look down upon him. Most of boys don't want to share one seat with him on bus; many bad guys throw stones to hit him; he cannot be allowed to study into primary school at first; Jenny is the only girl that he loves all his life. But she thinks Forrest Gump doesn't understand what's love at first ……After finish reading this novel, I learned a lot. Sometimes I think he is not a fool but a genius. His attitude to life is even clever than ordinary people.Firstly, he is optimistic. He doesn't do anything wrong but the society is unfair to Forrest. I felt very sad to him. However, Forrest is as optimistic as his mother .he always remembers his mother's words: “ stupid is someone who did stupid things.” He does not do something stupid.Secondly, he has strong willed. Because his IQ is lower than others, he has to concentrate on one thing. So he does well on everything he works. He loves jenny from the first sight at her to her death. At last, he gets married with her and has a son; he runs for 3 years just because he likes running; he loads a gun faster than other soldiers…Thirdly, he is ideal hu *** and. He is a man with a sense of responsibility. He loves Jenny very much. When others hurt her, he tries his best to protect her. He can earn a lot of money and he is a famous person in America.So he is clever than others. Maybe a lot of people say he has good lucks. But I think character is bond to person's fate. His attitude and his efforts to life make him has a happiness results at last.In addition, I want to say something about destiny.Sometimes we think god gives everyone different fates. Someone has good looking while someone is born in rich family; someone is good at sports while someone is good at arts. Take Forrest for an example. He is a fool but he has talent on sports, such as running or playing pingpong.so everyone has his or her own gifts. God gives him a great mother. She is clever. She can earn enough money to support her one parent family. She I is also optimistic. She never feels ashamed of her son. She is proud of her son. She never thinks Forrest is a fool. She wants her son can lead a life as an ordinary person. In order to let him study into school, she has sex with the headmaster. She is also intelligent. Every night she reads some books for Forrest and tells some simple truths to him. Such as “There's an awful lot you could tell about a person by their shoes. Where they're going. Where they've been.” “Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you are going to get.”Thus, do not plain that you do not have something. Just like yourself and make your advantages better and better.Sometimes we think we have bad luck. But in fact it is a good thing for us. I remember one classic sentence: life is like a box of chocolates; you never know what you will get from it. For example, because Forrestalways runs to avoid being hit by stones, his speed is faster than others. So he is chosen to baseball team and bee to a famous player. He is so excellent that he has got chance to meet president. So whenever you are in trouble, do not think it is a bad luck. It is just a challenge. After overing it, you will gain more than you lost.For me, I want to say, last one month I got very bad luck. I got break up with my boyfriend and I met traffic accident on my way to school. And my back was hurt. Because of being shot CT, a lot of acnes appear on my face. Furthermore, my study is influenced.At first I felt very sad. I cannot know how to deal with it. I think I lost a lot of things. After reading the book, I changed my mind. The accidence makes me lost a lot of things. Meanwhile it also made me gain a lot of things. I gained a lot of love from my clas *** ates, my teachers and my relatives. I bee mature. And now I pay more attention about my health. If I can overe this terrible thing, I will be great. And I can lead a splendid life in the foreseeable future.After reading the novel, I watched the movie. As the beautiful music, there is a beautiful feather dancing with the breeze, finally lighting at the foot of Forrest Gump ...

Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best.There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Inter and over half of the world's technical materials are in English, thus a good mand of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the petition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible.

My view on EnglishWhat's the use of learning English. Against I learned over the years has been useless, is a waste of resources and manpower. It is necessary to popularize English? Take a look at the people after graduating from college, now there are a few people really can use English? Spread English so, personally think that is a major national policy mistakes. 70% of the students to study the energy on English, there are some of my clas *** ates speak English more than Chinese more fluently, less grammar mistakes, do you still dare to say oneself is a Chinese? Don't know if you notice, 80% of people are learning English to a result, learned later shelved, in later life is no use. Why not take English as an elective course?Students have interests and hobbies will naturally to study, and learn the along while also won't clas *** ates there would be no need to go to learn English. Someone said, study English is not. Which I see not, first of all is to interest, people will naturally interested in to learn. I dare say, engaged in English work on dinner now are interested in English. Needs the necessity for graduation, employment, and to learn English to several people within a year after again met an English word? Say say early forced to learn English for children. Said Chinese maxim doped inside a few English words almost has bee a fashion now, so speak what beauty in where? Seem to be very learned? I'd like to ask, what you said is mandarin or English. I think make now the so-called chinglish grammar that is part of the reason.

简单！如下：对学英语的看法：Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best.There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Inter and over half of the world's technical materials are in English, thus a good mand of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly,it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the petition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. 文章结构： 一些学生认为学英语很重要； 一些学生则认为不必学英语； 我认为 ……理由.语言亮点： 词语：1. the most widely used 最广为使用 2. a good mand of English 很好地掌握英语 3. a well-paid job 酬劳高的工作 4. has an advantage over 比…..有优势佳句：1 ……thus a good mand of English will greatly benefit me in my work. 2. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden to them.3. In the petition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot.

Attention,please!I have something to inform you.All the teachers and students are going to go the Space Museum this Saturday.We are required to gather at 7:30 in the morning at the school gate. We will set off and e back by bus.We need to prepare something to eat for lunch.We had better bring some plastic bags to carry our rubbish .Please do not throw litters about in the Space Museum.We should try our best to show our good quality to others.That's all,thank you.（你好，我基本没有改变你的原意，就是按照你写的改了几处语法错误，尤其中间的 we is going to ……这个用法有点不应该哦，再怎样也得we are going to……你说是不是？现在想起来了吧，呵呵~还有就是文章比较平淡，这是一则通知，首先要把要求用简洁明了的语句表达出来，还要注意不要一个模式的句子通篇下来，这样会显得文字贫乏。

下回多多注意哦，愿你更上一层楼哦）

首先的你的用词不够好，大量口语话的用词和拼写，在书面表达这是应该避免的。

例如，首句中的many可以改为a plenty of 或者numerous；第二行中的mom最好写成mother；另外你用and作为开头太多了，或许这样可以调节句式，但是毕竟不是正式用法，你可以把and小写，直接作为并列从句。

第二，你的文章不是太简洁，虽然写够了70词，但是并没有传达出很多信息。

例如，“she asked me for the resons and telled me to believe ···”一句，ask实际就有tell的意思，你可以把它改成，she ask me the reason and to beliece myself.第三，你的文章逻辑性不强，也就是说连接词用的太少，句子间的过渡太突兀了。

例如，首句你可以写成when I got ＂c ＂in a English test,I was very nervous.and I cried in my bedroom. At that moment my mom came in.你可以用连接词把文章整个串起来，这样的话时态就比较清晰，句式也复杂，逻辑性就强了。

part-time jobs而不是a part-time jobSome of them, who choose to work while having classes. 简练性很重要earn a living而不是earn their livingsome financial problems而不是some family problemsfare要改成school feessave experience？？？ 得到经验？？是gain experienceany benefits而不是any benefie should think about it on both sides, think about可以用considerit does have benefitsdetects? defectsouter world---> challenging societytake them a lot of time to finish -----> take up lots of study hours and distract them from their studie *** ad effect ------> negative impactson their study ------> on their studiesin clinical chemical school -----> in a clinical chemical schoolI think we are too busy to have a job while we are study -----> I think it is too busy for us to have part-time jobs while studyinglose much more important things ------> waste our precious time and energy on things that are not so importantPart-time job is just for these students ----- Part-time jobs are for students who have lots of leisure time....大体一看就这些需要改进的地方，观点还OK

(1)Share of Spirit of the Olympic Games As 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is drawing nearer and nearer, we can feel the special atmosphere of the (2)game everywhere through various forms of Olympic advertisements (3)in television, (4)rodio and newspapers. At the same time we are looking forward to this great international event, it is quite necessary (5)of us to take (6)sometime (7)thinking about the spirit of the Olympic Games as well and what we can learn from it. Overall speaking, the spirit of the Olympic Games can be characterized by “mutual understanding, friendship, unity and fair play”. Though invisible, Olympic spirit has always played an indispensable role in the Olympic Games throughout its history by encouraging athletes to observe rules of the games, face and pete (8)with strong rivals as well as respect and cooperate with people from other nations. Since the spirit of mutual understanding, friendship, unity and fair play is (9)in mon for everyone of us despite our differences in nationality, career, position and social rank, Olympic spirit is not merely confined to sports and naturally we can share it in other fields and put it into practice in our daily activities. (10)In a word, only by wide spreading and sharing this praiseworthy spirit, (11)can we make greater contributions to (12)Olympic movements ,and perhaps, even the social harmony and development(13).这篇文章写得很流畅，要得15分以上应该没问题。

既然你提出指正和改进，我就与你探讨探讨吧。

1. 既然是标题，应该用sharing 较准确；建议Sharing The Spirit of Olympic Games2. 你指的是奥运会，应该用大写Games，用game会被沦为某一种游戏。

3. 你这里表达的意思应该用 on television。

4. radio 的笔误。

5. 应该用for us。

6. 这里sometime 要分开，否则“一些时间”变成“有时”了。

7. 我建议用to think。

8. 应该是pete against 。

9. 应该是in mon with。

10. 既然不能一个字总结，当然就不能用in a word。

建议用In short; In a nutshell。

11. 这句话不该用逗号分开。

12. 这里应该加the 来明确你指的Olympic movements。

意见仅供参考，希望共勉。

, we can stick the word 'fridge'. Also. Simple words to things are a great way to build up vocabulary. We can put up sticky notes to the items we see everyday so that when we use them we can pronounce them. For e, we shouldn', we should actively use it in our everyday lives. That way, it will help us to reinforce our memory and we will be more fortable with using the language.g, grammar rules can be learnt while we listen to others speak. It's also important to speak more; on the fridge door so that each time when we open it;t stop ourselves from speaking up because it is great practice. If we can have a penpal from overseas then it will help us even more. I think to study English, or any languageEnglish is not a difficult subject to learn. Most people learn English by memorizing grammar rules and spelling. For starters, perhaps the best way to learn is to know more words. Even if we make errors, we get reminded of how to say it and spell it. Sentences will e in later when we have enough words to work with

嗯，作文就没时间点评了，见谅！英语作文讲究铢积寸累，注重平时的积累和词汇的运用。

写作的时候会灵活遣词造句、布局文章思路，逻辑串联。

这些需要假以时日的操练，当然方法就在不断的练习和改进中不断完善。

我们一直这么做、这么鼓励和监督学生坚持练习和不断反馈、完善。

相信好的作文都是精心的策划和日久的历练而成。

急功近利不是长远之计！

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