华兰欣子
整体没多大问题。有一些小问题第一段的opinion on,on改成of,以下是我对这一现象的看法。“choose to overwork”你用了两遍。推荐一些词组be tempted to do sth,intend to do sth还有they have few money,few是形容可数名词,应该改成little money。最后是for survive,survive是动词,改成survival满意请采纳哦
欧阳小七
My holiday life is very wonderful.Don't you believe?Now let me show you my good life.Every morning I get up early .After taking sports,I eat a nice breakfast.Then I alaways go over books.Sometimes I will go out with my good friends.I also play computer.How? Is my life wonderful?Do you like it?
s791144868
如下:
Nowadays, working overtime is so common in many companies, especially in foreign companies, private companies, and joint ventures. As far as I am concerned, there are two main reasons of working overtime. For one thing, there is indeed too much work to do.
If it is so, the boss should compensate staffs by paying them as overtime salary or giving them vacations. For another, some staffs are not suitable for their positions. In that case, the boss ought to help them to improve their working efficiency.
If they are still not qualified, boss may change the positions for them, or to the worst, dismiss them. That's all what I think about working overtime.
如今,加班在很多公司都很常见,尤其是外企、私企和合资企业。我认为加班主要有两个原因。一是,确实有太多的工作要做。
如果是这样,老板应该通过支付加班工资或给员工假期来补偿员工。二是,一些员工并不适合他们的职位。在这种情况下,老板应该帮助他们提高工作效率。如果他们仍然无法满足岗位需求,老板可能要给他们更换职位,或者最糟糕的情况,解雇他们。这就是我对加班的看法。
岁月静好-静静
Nowadays, foundation education reform and development are in a key period. After making nine-year compulsory education task completely finished, 我写好了。放不下了。。你应该会满意滴。。发你留言里叭
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