激动的小胖
Among many people i admire my father most.Because my father taught me a lot of good qaualities. He taught me to be friendly and prepare to hlep people who need helps especially the elderly.And from this,I learn a lot, I know how to make freinds by heart.He also taught me to keep our environment clean.When we are outside,he never lets me throw rubbish on the roads,instead in the rubbish bin.My father wants me to have a strong will and power of rapid decision,then I can overcome any difficulties I met.When I was 9 years old,I was studying piano.It was too hard for me that I wanted to give up,but my father gave me confidence and stayed with me.At last I passed the piano exam and now i'm very keen on playing piano.It was my father who told me that all I needed to do was to have faith, persistence, courage and and indomitable spirit,then I will be the master.My father has influenced me a great deal,I admire him so much.
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写作思路：先开门见山的表达佩服的对象是父亲。然后简单介绍父亲的基本特征，接下来对佩服的论点做论证。
示例如下：
I'm going to talk about my father because he has been a major influence in my life.
My father was always a good role model for me as I was growing up. He's hard-working, patient and understanding; he's also got a good sense of humour and seems to get on well with everybody. Hopefully I've inherited some of these traits.
I admire my father because I think he brought me and my brothers/sisters up well; he was quite strict but always fair, and he has always been someone I can turn to for advice.
I think my father set a good example by working hard and having a positive outlook on life. I remember that he used to leave for work early and come home quite late, but he always made time for me and my brothers/sisters.
【翻译】
我要说说我的父亲，因为他一直对我的一生有重大影响。
我的父亲一直是我成长过程中的好榜样。 他勤奋，耐心和理解; 他也非常哟幽默感，与大家都相处得很好。 希望我继承了这些特质。
我很佩服我的父亲，因为我觉得他把我和我的兄弟/姐妹得很好; 他得比较严，但总是公平的，他一直都是一个人，我可以找谁咨询。 我想我的父亲努力工作，并具有在积极的人生观树立一个好榜样。 我记得他曾经离开工作早，回家比较晚，但他总是让时间对我和我的兄弟/姐妹。
