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A Picnic It was a sunny day. We decided to have a picnic outside the city. In the morning, we took an early bus to Nanhui. It was quite a colorful world. there were GREen trees, orange leaves,red peach blossoms. At noon, we reached the place, we sat by the river bank and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and so on. But all of a sudden, it began to rain. Unluckily there was no shelter nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry. What an unfettable picnic it was!636f7079e79fa5e9819331333262353966。
一、提高认识事物和表达事物的能力。
我国著名教育家叶圣陶先生指出：“写任何东西决定于认识和经验，有什么样的认识和经验，才能写出什么样的东西来。反之，没有表达认识的能力，同样也写不出好作文”。
二、把认识结构作为作文的核心，包括学习知识，观察积累，记忆储存，训练思维，丰富想象，培养情感，锻炼意志；从说到写，推敲修改，多读勤写。 三、树立大作文观，听、说、读、写有机结合 一要注重审题；二要明确写作目的，立意要新；三是选材要有根据；四要讲究谋篇技巧，安排好篇章结构；五要注意文章分段，事先列小标题，作文提纲；六要注重文章写法，因文用法；七要妙用语言，用思想调遣语言。
学会五种立意法：以事赞人，直抒胸臆，借物喻理，触景生情，托物言志。 四、作文大目标的逐年级分解： 一年级字词，二年级句子，三年级片断，四年级篇章，五年级综合，六年级提高。
五、实施五项训练 根据认识是作文的核心这一原则，围绕这个发展学生心理机制的核心，扎扎实实地进行了五项训练： （一）、字词训练。学习掌握大量字词。
掌握运用字词的金钥匙：联系自己熟悉的事物；联系自己生活实际；联系自己学会的语言及字词知识。 运用“十引说”的方法，把字词学习与说话训练相结合。
“十引说”是：1、分析字形；2、利用教具；3、凭图学词；4、组词扩词；5、选词填空；6、词语搭配；7、调整词序；8、触景用词；9、词语分类；10、联词成句。丰富了说话训练内容，使自己积累大量会说会用的字词，为写作文打下坚实基础。
（二）、句子训练。只要是一个句子，都包括两个方面：一是说的人、事、物、景，二是说目的。
可有些教师指导学生说一句话时，没有很好凭借图画和事物，认真教学生观察、认识、分析、表达的方法，只是拿出一张图或一事物让学生说写一句话，学生不知道为什么要说写一句话，怎样说写一句话，说写一句什么句型、什么句式的话，导致作文中语调单一、呆板、不活泼生动。可以改让学生凭图、看物、对话、练习说写一句时间、地点、人物、事件四要素完整的话，四种句型，九种句式的话。
学生才会在作文中运用不同句型、句式，表达不同的思想、感情、态度、目的。 （三）、段的训练。
结合八种段式：以事物发展为序段，时间先后为序段，空间变换为序段，总述、分述结构段，因果段、转折段，递进段，并列段。以此认识客观事物的发生、发展规律。
不论哪种段式，都是记叙事物的发展和人们对事物的认识，即段的内容，段的中心。它和一句话一样，也是对人、事、物、景的叙述，也是表达一个意思。
只不过是把一句话进一步说得更清楚、更深刻。 （四）、篇章训练。
篇是由段组成的。通过对审题、立意、选材、谋篇、定法、用语的知识与方法，通过记叙、描写、抒情、议论四种表达方法，文章开头与结尾、过渡与呼应方法，各种文章体裁的知识与方法。
学会写中心明确，意思完整，详略得当的记叙文和应用文。 （五）、生活现场训练。
采用生活现场训练，更好地体会“从内容入手”写作文。 通过各种作文教学活动，如“确定中心讨论会”、“选材讨论会”、“作文会诊会”、“小诸葛审题会”、“妙用词语比赛会”，从活动中生动具体地学到作文知识与写作文的方法。
另外，还可开展各种校内外活动，如跳绳、拔河、踢毽、球类、背书比赛，从而学会如何写比赛作文；开展校内外义务劳动，学会如何写劳动场面；举行诗歌朗诵、讲演会，学会如何写会议场面及会议上的见闻；通过参观访问，浏览名胜古迹，学会如何写参观访问记、游记。学习观察方法，留心周围的事物、事件，“处处留心皆学问，人情练达即文章”。
通过现场生活作文，进一步认识到：生活是作文的沃土。从而学会 *** 事、抒真情，陶冶真、善、美的情操，培养良好的文风。
实行“互评互改”，培养学生思维独立性和创造性。学生作文写好后，组织在小组内讲评。
先学习别人作文的优点，再用批评的眼光互相指出作文中的缺点，并指出改进意见。在此基础上重新再写，从而使学生每写一篇都有收获。
写出诚实的自己的话 “写诚实的自己的话”是老教育家叶圣陶先生说的。旨在营造“自主”作文的五彩世界。
所谓“自主”就是不受条条框框的限制，让学生无拘无束的思想，自由自在的写作。“自主”作文就是“言为心声”，率性而为，展现自我的风采，体现鲜明的个性。
应当脱离作文教学的陈旧方式，可以让学生在“自主”状态下写作，褪去矫揉造作、模仿穿凿，赋予其鲜活的想象力，丰富的创造力，等待收获的将是缤纷的色彩，清新的果实和勃勃的生机。 写作时，课堂上常发生这样的情况：有的学生文思枯竭，三言两语就把要说的倾倒完了，干干瘪瘪；有的学生却思绪绵绵，脑子里如有活水，或潺潺流淌，或波澜起伏，笔下洋洋洒洒。
究其原因，与写作材料充足与否当然有密切关系，然而，切不可忽视另一重要因素，即想象力发挥得如何。 根据近代脑生理的研究，人的大脑可分为四个功能部位，即感受部位、判断部位、储存部位和想象部位。
就多数人而言，前三个部位注意开发，想象部位比较忽视。据研。
英语的作文和汉语的作文写法不一样。这是因为英语是意合性语言，而汉语是形合性语言的缘故。
由于这点，所以写英语作文最应该注意的就是要让作文在意上表现的紧密。
就你所提的问题来看，依据上叙英语语言的特点，写英语四六级作文常以三段式最为常见，即首先谈论别人的观点；然后论叙自己的意见，即点题，说明你的观点；最后总结。这是相当于论叙文（议论文）而言的，其它种类的文章也大抵如此。
不过，你若是写其它论文或是水平层次较高的文章，当然就没有什么很固有的结构，也没有必要。但是所有高水平的文章都是基于在一定的基础上的。
一. 英语作文开头方式
1、“开门见山”式
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
① 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan（黄山之旅）”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money （时间和金钱）” 的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2、回忆性开头
二. 英语作文结尾方式
1、自然结尾，点明主题
随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman （帮助警察）”的结尾可以是：The o children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如“The Tortoise and the Hare（龟兔赛跑）” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，…3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，…6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…7.It's likely that … 这可能是因为…8.It's hardly that… 这是很难的……9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是11.There's no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是…二、衔接句型e799bee5baa6e997aee7ad94e4b893e5b19e313334313361321.A case in point is … 一个典型的例子是…2.As is often the case…由于通常情况下…3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述4.But the problem is not so simple.Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……5.But it's a pity that… 但遗憾的是…6.For all that…对于这一切…… In spite of the fact that…尽管事实……7.Further, we hold opinion that… 此外，我们坚持认为，…8.However , the difficulty lies in…然而，困难在于…9.Similarly, we should pay attention to… 同样，我们要注意…10.not(that)…but(that)…不是，而是11.In view of the present sta。
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures
to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I remend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures
should be taken.
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1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that 。
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop 。 3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to 。
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that 。 5) There is no easy method, but 。
might be of some help. 6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must 。 7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up. 8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. 9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to 。
10) Taking all these into account, we 。 11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear。
In short, because in our life we have other ways to learn lots of things without reading them in books。
In fact.” The proverb empasizes the importance of experience. Besides that, due to。例一In conclusion, I'd like to rephrase the starting statement.例二In the light of the above I strongly believe that we equally need both kinds of knowlegde in order to get the best from any situation and therefore it cannot be said that one is more important than the other one. and the fact .. You can STILL manage to bee rich thanks to you own experience rather than reading business books. You may learn how to municate effectively with people just because you contact with them frequently. That is not to mention the fact that all of knowledge from books is collected from real life in order to serve it only. So once knowledge obtained from experience assists you more effectively in real life, why don't you appreciate it MORE HIGHLY.., although knowledge from books is very important, that from real experience is even more so because it is what people have to rely on to exist . Books are a precious resource for improving our knowledge because there are things that we learn through the books we could never learn in other ways. But the contrary is also true.例三In general, real life provideS people with more necessary knowledge than books. People can STILL live well without reading many books., the lack of 。
.例四 In conclusion, gaining knowledge from our experiences is very important. There is a mon proverb that says “to see is to believe,I would prefer to say “only something that is learned is contained in books。, experience can definitely enhance our learning so much more than by books。
一、开头句型 1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言 2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻，… 3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说…… 4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的， 5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到，… 6.It's generally recognized that… 它普遍认为… 7.It's likely that … 这可能是因为… 8.It's hardly that… 这是很难的…… 9.It's hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说32313133353236313431303231363533e78988e69d8331333339656366… 10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是 11.There's no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是… 13.what's far more important is that… 更重要的是… 二、衔接句型 1.A case in point is … 一个典型的例子是… 2.As is often the case…由于通常情况下… 3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述 4.But the problem is not so simple.Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以…… 5.But it's a pity that… 但遗憾的是… 6.For all that…对于这一切…… In spite of the fact that…尽管事实…… 7.Further, we hold opinion that… 此外，我们坚持认为，… 8.However , the difficulty lies in…然而，困难在于… 9.Similarly, we should pay attention to… 同样，我们要注意… 10.not(that)…but(that)…不是，而是 11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势 12.As has been mentioned above…正如上面所提到的… 13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说 14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is… 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即 … 三、结尾句型 1.I will conclude by saying… 最后我要说… 2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that…因此，我们有理由相信… 3.All things considered，总而言之 It may be safely said that…它可以有把握地说…… 4.Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisable…因此，在我看来，更可取的是… 5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论… 6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…通过数据我们得到的结论是，… 7.It can be concluded from the discussion that…从中我们可以得出这样的结论 8.From my point of view, it would be better if…在我看来……也许更好 四、举例句型 1.Let's take…to illustrate this. 2.let's take the above chart as an example to illustrate this. 3.Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example. 5.The same is true of… 6.This offers a typical instance of… 7.We may quote a mon example of…8.Just think of…。
1.Our life should safe and healthy。。..so we must protect our city。
2.The city is dity ,what should we do?。。.now we must save our world.
3.Sport is very important for us。。..let us to do sport everyday.
5.Yesterday ,I had a pleasant trip with my parents。。.we also had a good time。
6.My hobby is reading books。。I think hobby could makes me to be a good child。
7.My best friend is sally。。.i think she would be my best friend in my life。
9.Yangliwei is a heroes in the china。。..I'll remember him in my heart。
11.English is my most favourite subject。。i must learn it well
12.i want to be a nurse。。.let's me study hard and to be a good nurse。
14.my school is so funny。。..my clas *** ates are very kind of me。
有些编不出来了
开头来 with the development of the modern society, more and more。
, some people hold that。, however, some others hold that。
., in my view of point，。
.结尾 in sum, there is no denying the fact that。
only in this way can we 。
此格式最适用源于写议bai论文了，呵du呵 希望对你能有所zhi帮助。dao。
段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。
一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。
首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______. 4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。 Nowadays,it is mon to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。
它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has o sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，…… People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____. 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is being more and more serious. 8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 ______ has bee a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？ According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while. Obviously,______,but why？结尾句1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____. 2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。
只有这样，我们才能在将来……。 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future. 3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。
例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）…… But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______. 4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。
因为…… Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______. 5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。
如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。 With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。
只有这样，我们才能…… For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____. 7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是…… In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______. 8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。
然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。 It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______. 9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论…… From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____. 10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是…… If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may e out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.。
To introduce myself（介绍我自己）
Hello,every one！（大家好）
My name is **** . （我叫****）
I'm a 15 years old boy. （我是一个15岁的男孩）（具体情况自己改）
I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.（我住在美丽的Rizhao城）（你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音）
I'm an active ,lovely and clever boy.（我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩）
In the school , my favourite subject is maths . （在学校，我最喜欢数学）
Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well .（也许有些人认为这很难学）
But I like it.（但我喜欢他）
that if you try your best, everything can be done well.（我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果）
I also like sports very much.（我也很喜欢运动）
Such as,running,volleyball and so on. （像跑步、排球等等）
I'm kind-hearted.（我很热心）
If you need help ,please
.（如果你需要帮助，就来找我）
I hope we can be good friends！（我希望我们能成为好朋友）
OK.This is me .A sunny boy.（好了，这就是我，一个
）
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures
to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I remend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures
should be taken.
Chapter One 文章开头句型 1-1 对立法 ： 先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法， 适用于有争议性的主题. 例如（e.g） [1]. When asked about。
.., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that 。
. But I think/view a bit differently. [2]. When it es to 。. , some people believe that 。
. Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments /statements , but (I tend to the former/latter 。
) [3]. Now, it is monly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that 。. They claim/ believe/argue that 。
But I wonder/doubt whether。.. 1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题， 然后评论 . e.g [1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) 。
has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern. [2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of 。has been brought into focus. ( has been brought to public attention) [3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality 。
is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly. ----- To be continued !! 1-3 观点法 ----开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法. e.g: [1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as 。 Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than。
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/ing to realize/accept/(be aware) that。 [3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to。
Now people bee increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of 。
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that。
. 1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法， 来引出文章要展开论述的观点！ e.g: [1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people . "Education is not plete with graduation." Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion. [2]."。
" How often we hear such statements/words like those /this . In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional plains as this "。
". 1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去，现在 两种不同的倾向，观点的比较 ， 引出文章要讨论的观点. e.g: [1]. For years, 。had been viewed as 。
But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing 。 , people 。
. . [2]. People used to think that 。
(In the past, 。.) But people now share this new. 1-6 故事法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣， 引出文章的主题. e.g: [1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt 。
. The phenomenon of 。 has aroused public concern. [2]. I have a friend who 。
Should he 。. ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life. [3]. Once upon a time, there lived a man who 。
This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now. 1-8 问题法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问， 引出自己观点， 适用于有争议性的话题. e.g: Should/What 。
? Options of 。 vary greatly , some 。
, others 。 But in my opinion , 。
. Chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型 原因结果分析 3-1-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物时， 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因. e.g: [1]. Why 。
? For one thing.. For another 。 [2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing。
For another。
Still another 。 [3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect 。
. /both individual and social contribute to 。. 3-1-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之后， 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用！ e.g: [1]. Another important factor is 。
. [2]. 。 is also responsible for the change/problem. [3]. Certainly , the 。
is not the sole reason for 。.. 3-1-3 后果影响 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 . e.g: [1]. It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on。
. [2]. In involves some serious consequence for 。
.. 比较对照句型 3-2-1. 两者比较 ---> 比较两事物， 要说出其一超过另一个， 或肯定一事物的优点， 也肯定其缺点的时候用 ！ e.g: [1]. The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B. [2]. Indeed, A carries much weight when pared with B. [3]. There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects. 3-2-2 . 两者相同/相似 ------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用！ e.g: [1]. A and B have several thing in mon. They are similar in that。.. [2]. A bears some striking resemblance(s) to B. Chapter Three 文章结尾形式 2-1 结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ，引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 . e.g: [1]. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that 。
.. [2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable 。
. 2-2 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决，。
