太阳的路
1.第一行，of去掉2.第二行。will改为would，3.therefore改为however。4.第四行。such后加一个a.5.第五行。true改为truely.6.第六行，word改为words。7.第七行，you改为we。8.hurting改为hurt。我只找到这么多。
苏明zhsm13579
ullest use of these blessed faculties. Their eyes and ears take in all sights and sounds
虾米啊1
best friend (for) many years 介词搭配错误didn't think her friend (would)mind it 时态一致her friend did seem to (had) minded it 时态Therefore改为However 连词She stopped (visting) her 去掉visiting前的to 动词固定搭配was such (a) mean woman 冠词She was (truely) sorry 副词(words) really mean a lot 名词复数(we) should really think twice 前后主语不一致in order not to (hurt) 固定搭配
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