天蝎工科男
whether--if（whether I didn't ）hurry--hurriedor-and（building or others）the-a（After the while ）
xiaomao7taotao
1.as-while while连接两个同时发生的动作.as没有这个功能.2.rings-变过去时. 整篇都是过去时.3.me-my 这里是"我的",不能用宾格.4.a-the phone是特指,就是自己用这个,a表示泛指,不知道具体哪部电话.5.room和full中间加 was be full of 固定句型.6.opening-opened 没啥好解释的啊,过去式,跟前面的turned照应.7.in-to to one's surprise出乎某人的意料之外,固定句型.8.没看出有错.9.about去掉 tell sb...告诉某人.. 中间没有介词.10.which去掉
木头人的老婆
Yesterday afternoon ,I left home to go shopping. Suddenly I was stopped by two robbers with knives .They said they would kill me if I didn't give them money .Then the two robbers forced me to take them to the building where I lived .One of my neighbour happened to look out of the window and found the robbers.She immediately called 110.The policemen hurried to my building in their cars .Some went inside the building and others waited outdoors to prevent the robbers from escaping .After a while the two robbers were caught .They were at once took to the police station .
卷毛先生老杨
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the 1.as->when telephone rings．I went to answer it immediately． 2.rings->rang She Was my close friend，Lisa. When we were talking 3.she->It on a phone．the fire alarm sounded．I ran back to the 4.a->the kitchen．The room full of smoke and the beef was badly 5.room 和 full之间加was burnt．I quickly turned off the gas，opening all the 6.opening->opened windows．and then went out of the house．In my 7.In->To surprise，two fire engines were outside my house．I 8.正确 Was rather worried．I told about the firemen that it 9.about去掉 was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke． 10.careless->carelessness
