幽花零落
如果我有幸被贵校录取，我将尽我的最大努力来学习所需的专业知识，If i'm lucky enough to be accepted and become one member of our college, i will make all the efforts to study professional knowledge and achieve the ample scientific research practice as well.I will perfect my Master's degree with high-qualified thesis.And that will not the end of my pursuit, i will surely endeavor to go on proceeding the doctor's degree.
迪拉索高品
I wish I was lucky enough to be admitted to your university wherein i can continue to creat my wonderful life完善了一下楼上的请楼主斟酌，合则采纳
树果衣嘎凌
I really hope that I will have the privilege to get the admission from you school, and to continue my wonderful life here.
