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高级英语作文八篇

在学习、工作乃至生活中,说到作文,大家肯定都不陌生吧,作文可分为小学作文、中学作文、大学作文(论文)。你所见过的作文是什么样的呢?以下是我为大家整理的高级英语作文8篇,供大家参考借鉴,希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。

1、at the same time 同时 for instance 例如

2、Besides/what,s more 而且;此外 from now on 从此

3、but 但是 by this time 此时

4、after a few days 几天以后 certainly 无疑地;当然地

5、beside 此外 for this purpose 为了这个目的

6、of course当然 truly 事实上;真实地

7、by and large 一般说来 thus 因此

8、all the same 依然;照样 however 然而;无论如何

9、to begin with 首先;第一 一方面…(另一方面)

10、meanwhile 与此同时 thirdly 第三

11、as a result结果 in sum 总之,简而言之

12、in the first place 首先;第一 on the whole 总起来说

13、above all 最重要的是 accordingly 于是

14、after all 毕竟 fortunately 幸运地

15、no doubt 无疑地 such as 正如

16、by doing so 如此 to sum up 总而言之

17、all in all 总之

18、at first 最初 for one thing…(for another)

19、certainly 当然地;无疑地 obviously 显然

20、currently 目前;最后 recently 最近

21、in addition 此外 second 第二;第二点

22、in fact 事实上 unlike 不像……;和……不同

23、obviously 明显地 later 后来

24、as a matter of fact 事实上 yet仍;然而;但是

25、moreover 而且,此外 for another 其次

26、in short 简而言之 truly 的确

27、in fact 事实上 similarly 同样地

28、still 仍然 unfortunately 不幸地

29、also/too 并且;又 for example 例如

30、in addition to… 除…之外 secondly 第二

31、in conclusion 总之,最后 undoubtedly 无疑

32、at the same time同时;然而 luckily 幸运地

33、indeed 的确 third 第三;第三点

34、in brief 简言之 no doubt 毫无疑问

35、particularly特别地 unlike …不像……;和……不同

36、anyway 无论如何 in spite of 尽管……;虽然……

37、though/although 尽管 no doubt 无疑地

38、at present 现在;当今 首先…(其次)…

39、finally 最后 to conclude 总而言之

40、in particular 特别(地) soon 不久

41、briefly 简单扼要地 to speak frankly 坦白地说

42、eventually 最后 surely 无疑

43、what is more 而且;此外

44、in the same way 同样地 still 仍然

45、at last 最后 therefore 因此

46、as I have said 如我所述 on the whole 总体来说;整个看来

47、in a word 总之 so 所以

48、presently 现在;此刻 now 现在

49、first(ly)第一 in general 一般说来

50、even though即使 otherwise 否则

51、in/by contrast 对比之下 on the contrary 相反地

52、in the beginning 起初 one the one hand…(on the other hand)

53、in other words 换句话说 so 所以

54、after/after that/afterwards此后 by this time 此时

55、first of all 首先;第一 generally speaking 一般地说

56、lately 最近 to start with 首先;第一

57、as has been noted 如前所述 in summary 简要地说

58、after a while过了一会儿 therefore 因此;结果

59、by the way 顺便提一句 then 然后

1.强迫 coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to)、compel 代替force

2.扩大 magnify(magnify means make something larger than it really is) 代替enlarge

3.赞扬 extol(stronger than praise)、compliment(polite and politic 代替praise

4.刻苦的 assiduous(someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly 代替hard-working

5.艰巨的 arduous (if something is arduous、it is difficult and tiring、and involves a lot of efforts) 代替difficult

6.贫瘠的 barren、infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it) 代替poor (soil)

7.易碎的 brittle、vulnerable(someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically) 代替fragile

8.展示 demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people. ) 代替show

9.公正的 impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something. ) 代替fair

10.袭击 assault (physically attack someone)、assail (attack violently) 代替attack

11.憎恶 abhor(abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons)、loathe(dislike very much) 代替dislike

12. 破坏 devastate (it means damage something very badly、or utterly destroy it. ) 代替ruin

13.总是 invariably(the same as always、but better than always) 代替always

14.永久的 perpetual(a perpetual state never changes)、immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed) 代替forever

15.吃惊 startle(it means surprise you slightly)、astound(surprise you to a large degree),astonish(the same as astound) 代替surprise

16.热情 zeal (a great enthusiasm)、fervency (sincere and enthusiasm) 代替enthusiasm

17.平静的,安静的 tranquil(calm and peaceful)、serene(calm and quiet) 代替quiet

18.错综复杂的 intricate(if something is intricate、it often has many small parts and details) 代替ccomplex

19.独自的 solitary (if someone is solitary、there is no one near him/her 代替lonely

20.非常小的 minuscule(very small)、minute 代替small

1. architectural industry 建筑工业

2. map out 制定出

3. city designing 城市设计

4. beautify our life 美化我们的生活

5. human civilization 人类文明

6. cradle of culture 文化摇篮

7. mainstream culture 主流文化

8. cultural traditions 文化传统

9. national pride 民族自豪

10. local customs and practices 风土人情

11. attract people’s eyes 吸引人们的眼球

12. artistic taste 艺术品味

13. cornerstone 基石

14. be closely interrelated with… 与…有密切关系

15. adhere to the tradition 坚持传统

16. architectural vandalism 破坏建筑行为

17. carry forward … 弘扬…

18. cultural needs 文化需求

19. reputation 声望

20. maintain the world peace 维护世界和平

21. cultural diversity 文化多元化

22. cultural treasures 文化宝藏

23. cross-cultural communication 跨文化交流

24. cultural reconstruction 文化重建

25. spiritual civilization 精神文明

26. heritage 遗产

27. achievements of art 艺术成就

28. tear down 拆除

29. humane historical sites 人文历史遗址

30. preserve the cultural relics 保护文化遗产

31. blueprint 蓝图

32. skyscraper 摩天大楼

33. high-rise office buildings 高层写字楼

34. city construction 城市建设

35. well-structured 结构良好的

36. crystallization 结晶

37. visual enjoyment 视觉享受

38. driving force 驱动力

39. reconstruct 重建

40. destruct 破坏

41. artistic reflection 艺术反映

42. give publicity to… 宣传…

43. burden 负担

44. cause irreversible damage 造成不可逆转的损失

45. national identity and value 民族特性和价值观

46. remove prejudice and misunderstanding 消除偏见和误解

47. symbol 象征

48. artistic standards 艺术水准

49. enjoy great popularity 广受欢迎

50.cultural devolution 文化退化

Describing graphs Ex 4: Sample answer: (132words)

The share price of IBM and AOL showed a upward trend from June until the end of 1998.However, while AOL shares then continued to rise steadily over the next three months, the price of IBM shares fell slightly. By March 1999 both shares were worth about $100.

AOL shares then shot up, almost doubling in value within four weeks. They reached a high of $180 in mid-April before collapsing to just over $100 per share at the beginning of May. There was a slight recovery during that month however, despite this by June 1999 the price of AOL shares was once again about $100. In contrast, despite minor fluctuations, IBM shares made a steady recovery over the three month period, finishing at just over $100, almost equal to AOL.

一、引出开头

1:It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)2:Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)

3:Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今,人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)

4:Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)

5:With the rapid development of science and technology,more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展,越来越多的人认为……)

6:It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……)

7:A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……)8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)

二、表达不同观点

1:People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异,有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)

2:People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)

3:Attitudes towards (drugs)vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)(人们对待吸毒的.态度因人而异)

4:There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)

三、表示结尾

1:In short, it can be said that……(总之,他的意思是……)

2:From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……(从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论……)

3:Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑,我们自然可以得出结论……)

4:Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此,我们最好的出这样的结论……)

5:There is no doubt that (jo有优点也有缺点)

6:All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之,我们没有……无法生活,但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)

四、提出建议

1:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)

2:There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够重视)

3:Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然,如果我们想要做么事,很重要的是……)

4:Only in this way can we ……(只有这样,我们才能……)5:Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)

五、预示后果

1:Obviously,if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.(很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险)

2:No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,否则我们很可能会……)

3:It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation(很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展)

六、表示论证

1:From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first

opinion rather than the second.(在我看来,支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)

2:I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……(我无法完全同意这一观点)

3:As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……(就我来说……)

4:I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句.(我真诚地相信……)

5:Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……(最后,坦率地说,还有另外一个实际的原因……)

七、给出原因

1:The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)

2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons .First,…….Second,…….Third,……。这一现象存在有很多原因的,第一……第二……第三……

3:For one thing,…… For another thing,…… ==On the one

hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……

4:I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即……。其主要原因如下。

八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法

1:The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

2:As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言,……3:It is obvious that……很显然……

4:It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……

5:It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的,但我们不应忽视……

6:There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……

九、表示好处和坏处

1:It has the following advantages.它有如下优势

2:It is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有益处

3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处

十、表示重要、方便、可能

1:It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do sth.对于某人做……是……

2:It plays an important role in our life.

十一、采取措施

1:We should take some effective measures.我们应该采取有效措施2:We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难

3:We should do our utmost in doing sth.我们应该尽力去做……4:We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我们应该解决我们面临的困难

十二、显示变化

1:Some changes have taken place in the past five years.过去五年发生了很多变化

2:Great changes will certainly be produced in the international communications.在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化

3:It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…4:The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%

十三、表明事实现状

1:We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……

2:No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……

3:This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.

4:be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)

十四、进行比较

1:Compared with A,B……与A比较,B……

2:I prefer to read rather than watch TV.

十五、常用英语谚语

1:Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩

2:All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子

3:All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马

4:A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半5:Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊

6:A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘,差之千里

7:Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母

8:Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母

9:It is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老

10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量

11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事,只怕有心人

1.occur 替换think of

Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.

An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

2.devote替换spend

He spends all his spare time in reading.

He devotes all his spare time to reading.

3.seek替换want / look for

They sought (wanted) to hide themselves behind the trees.

4.average 替换ordinary

I’m an average (ordinary) student.

5.but替换very

The film we saw last night was very interesting.

The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.

The film we saw last night was anything but boring.

6.seat 替换sit

On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.

7.suppose 替换should

He is supposed to (should) have driven more slowly.

8.appreciate 替换thank

Thank you very much for your help.

We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.

“听不懂啊!”

一下课,许多同学一边哀嚎一边从录播室往外走,他们今天的话题又变成了这节英语课。

也许我会对这个英语课印象深刻吧,毕竟是这样一位“传说”中十分有名的英语老师给我们上课。没什么感觉,但听不懂是真的。平时英语老师上课时也都是一句中文一句英文,所以这种全程飙英语的课对我们来说实在是高级。

初见,感觉这个英语老师长相也就不普通通,没什么特点,只记得她的眼睛很大,像太阳一样明亮,后来发现她这个人也像太阳一样热情。她会和全班同学一边问好,一边握手,甚至还给我们放着背景音乐,高级感一下子就出来了。

“这是太阳女士吧!"我心里暗暗叹道。温暖,热情,似六月骄阳,即使是这样冷的天,却也感到一丝温暖,这温暖来自那位姓葛的英语老师,我清楚的知道。

但当一个个英语句子从她嘴里蹦出来时,我就知道我要“灭亡”了。明明每个英语单词都极其耳熟,可意思总得反应半天。她领读单词,读完我就忘,平时的我总自称“平平无奇的读单词小能手”,但现在我确实慌了。

我不知道我该怎么样达到这种水平,这看上去遥不可及,我不再像上课前那样放松了,那会让我懵的很厉害,我从来没有过这样的感觉。

一句句英语中,下课了,葛老师向我们告别,最后张开手,像是给了我们一个拥抱。

我忽的放空了,焦虑不安都消失不见。像是回应她的拥抱,我伸手,仿佛抓到了希望。

22.附近、临近的Adjacent、Adjoin 代替Near

23.准确的、精确的Precise、Exact 代替Accurate

24.巨大的、大的Massive、Colossal、Tremendous 代替Big

25.骇人的、丑陋的Hideous 代替Ugly

26.祖先Ancestor、Predecessor 代替Forefather

27.不同Gap、Distinction 代替Difference

28.犯罪Delinquency、Criminal Act 代替Crime

29.环境Circumstance、Atmosphere、Surrounding、Ambience 代替Environment

30.污染Contamination 代替Pollution

31.人类The humanrace、Humanity、Humankind 代替Human

32.危险Peril、Hazard 代替Danger

33.在当今社会In contemporary society、In present-day society、In this day and age 代替In modern society

34.顶峰peak、summit 代替Top

35.模糊的Obscure unknown or Known by only a few people 代替Vague

36.竞争者Rival、Opponent(especially in sports and politics 代替Competitor

37.责备Condemn(if you condemn something、you say it is very bad and unacceptable) 代替Blame

38. 意见、主张Perspective、Standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way) 代替Opinon

39. 名望Prestige(describe those who are admired)、Reputation 代替Fame

40. 侮辱Humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid) 代替Insult

41.抱怨Grumble (complain something in a bad-tempered way) 代替Complain

42.首要的Radical (very important and great in degree)、Fundamen 代替Primary

43.缓解Alleviate (alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe) 代替Relieve

英语作文高级长句

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英语四六级写作万能句式

在英语四六级考试中,想要写好一篇英语作文不简单,需要大量的积累和练习。下面是我整理的英语四六级写作万能句式,希望能够帮助到大家。

1、开头:

Everything has a good side and a bad side, and ....is no exception.

万事万物有其两面性,而________也是如此。

As the proverb goes: "every coin has its two sides", ……is no exception.

俗语有云:"万事万物都有两面性。" ________也不例外。

The discussion as to whether the…… is a blessing or a curse arouses most people's interests.

__________是好是坏 / 利弊问题引起了很多人的兴趣。

……plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world.

______ 尤为重要,引起当今社会的关注。

There comes a question: is it a blessing or accurse.

问题是:____是福是祸?

There is no denying that everything has one more face and……is no exception.

不可否认,每一件事物都有其两面性,其实,______也不例外。

Everything in the world has its own two sides. Without exception, A has both advantages and disadvantages.

任何事情都有两面性,A也不例外,有其优势和劣势(利与弊)。

……undoubtedly plays an increasing significant role in modern life.

不容置疑,_______在现代生活中不断显示出其重要性。

With the development of the society, is increasingly important.

随着社会的发展,_______变得越来越重要。

The merits of this is obvious……

其好处显而易见。

2、原因:

And I would like to present two explanations for this:

对于此,我有如下两点愚见:

The reasons are chiefly as follows.

主要原因如下:

There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.

为什么___________,原因很多,在此列举几个较为重要的原因。

The reasons are presented below.

原因如下。

There are three premier / best / most important / largest / significant / obvious / crucial causes as follows.

以下这些是造成这一问题的最主要/最好/最重要/最大/最有意义/明显/至关重要的原因。

This is based on the propensity(倾向,原因) of following points.

这基于以下的原因。

The main reason is that……

主要原因是_____________。

One very important argument for…… is that……

_______的非常重要的原因便是_____________。

The reasons are quite clear. Above all, ……

原因非常清楚。首先(首要的是)__________。

The first reason can be seen by every person.

第一个原因其实很明显。

Another reason why ...… is that……(有利于写长句)

另一个原因是________。

What is also worth noticing is that……

值得一提的是___________________。

There is another factor that deserves some words here.

还有另外一个很重要的原因。

A more essential factor why……Is that……

________ 的更为重要的原因是____________。

A further reason why…… is that……

________的更深层次的原因是____________。

In addition……

此外,再者

Moving on to wider themes, _______

展开来说,_________________________。

The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that……

第二个原因也很重要(值得考虑),即__________。

Likewise,common sense tells us that……

同样,___________,这是众所周知的。

The third but very important reason is that……

第三个(尽管不是很重要)原因是______________。

The third, not the last is that……

第三个原因是___________。

Moreover, furthermore。

此外,_______________。

Finally, last but not least。

最后__________。

3、影响:

As we know, ……bring many benefits and convenience to people.

众所周知,_______ 为我们的生活带来很多好处。

There are no less than three advantages in…… As rendered below.

如下所示,_______ 至少有三种好处。

Despite the advantages …… has some people claim, we shall not lose sight of its adverse effects on……

尽管_____有些益处(优势),有些人则认为,我们不能忽略了其对______的负面影响。

However, like anything else, has more than one face.

然而,像其他任何事物一样,______ 还有其它的方面。

However, with the advance of the human civilization, there is an increasing number of people who have raised doubts about whether……

然而,随着人类文明的进步,越来越多的人开始置疑是否__________。

Some people deem it is a dangerous signal and call for public awareness of the negative effects it has brought about.

有些人认为这是一种危险的信号,因此需关注其给社会带来的负面影响。

Of course, nothing in the world is perfect, so is……

当然,世间没有完美的事物,所以,________。

Despite its merits, it also brings some problems to solve.

尽管其也有很多优点,不过,也给我们带来一些问题。

But its bright side should not keep us from examining its dark side.

但是,我们不能因为这些优点而忽略了其缺点。

From the reasons presented above, I think the pros outweigh the cons.

从以上原因可以看出,其优势胜过劣势(优点多于缺点)。

As far as I am concerned, its disadvantages outweigh its disadvantages.

我认为,其优势胜于劣势。

4、结论:

总的说来:

In general, all in all, on the whole , in brief, in summary, in conclusion, in short, in a word , to sum up, to conclude, to summarize……

But all in all, I would say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. With the advance of society, if we encourage the merits and eliminate the drawbacks, all people will enjoy a better life.

但是,总的说来,我认为其优势大于劣势。随着社会的发展,如果我们能对此善加利用,所有的人都能生活得更好。

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that……

通过以上的讨论,我们可以得出如下结论,___________。

So, as I see it……

因此,我个人认为,_________。

What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least extent.

我们必须尽可能发挥其优势,趋吉避凶。

In conclusion, although……has its negative effects, it can to a great extent bring us more advantages.

总的说来,虽然_______ 有其负面的影响,在很大程度上,其也将给我们带来很多好处。

From what has been discussed above, we can see……does more harm than good to us. Therefore, I strongly approve of the motion that……

从以上论述可知,_____ 对我们百害而无一利。

5、举例子:

"比如"的表达方式:

For example,

For instance,

It can be given a concrete example,

Take ... for an example, it is a very obvious case,

There is one impressive example I want to mention here.

Let's see an example.

It is best illustrated if given the following example.

Let me provide an example.

Perhaps the most important example of……is that……

As I remember,I now still remember that.

I will never forget that……

To illustrate this, there is an example that is very persuasive.

An instance that accompanies this reason is that……

An example can give the details of this argument……

It is a forceful example to demonstrate the importance of……

In order to see this point clearly, let us see an example.

拓展: 英语四六级写作的高分技巧

1、阅卷流程

由于阅卷老师每人都需要在规定的时间内保质保量的阅完规定数量的试卷,因此实际上老师停留在每份试卷上的时间是非常的短的,甚至只有十几秒的时间。在阅卷之前,老师们会接受一个简短的培训,清楚相关规定。然后熟读不同等级的作文,做到心中有数。接着在阅卷的时候采用global scoring的原则,先大致上看下文章文章属于哪一个等级,再看有没有一些基础的、低级的错误,若没有则给出该等级的高分;若有,则酌情扣分。

2、重点部分

由于阅卷老师在每份作文上停留的时间很短,这就决定了他们只能重点的.去看一些内容,对每份作文从整体上把握。其实这就像我们的小学语文作文一样,相信当时的语文老师已经告诉过我们:开头、结尾一定要写的非常优美。同理,在英文写作中,这也同样适用。对英文作文来说,关键的地方就包括开头、结尾和段落的首句,由于我们的写作是议论文,这些地方是最可能出现中心的地方。重点抓这些地方,可以帮助老师在短时间内抓住重点。所以,我们在写作时可以放心、大胆的在这些地方埋伏亮点,并且不能出现单词拼写等低级错误,避开不会写的词汇和短语。若实在万不得已,允许在其它部分犯下小小的错误,因为这些地方老师很少去关注。

3、高分作文特点

写作部分的分值相对于其他部分来说是比较高的,所以我们要尽可能在这部分得高分。那么高分作文有哪些特点呢?首先,必须要包含所有的内容要点。题目中会给出一些points,那么我们需要做的就是把所有的点都要写全,不全面肯定是要扣分的;其次,应该包含一些高级词汇。比如“重要的”,我们通常会用important,但这是我们在一开始接触英语就会的,可以用一些高级的词来替换比如vital,crucial,significant等等;然后,可以使用一些复杂句式来替代简单句式,比如用些强调句、倒装句、虚拟句等来表达;最后,可使用过度衔接词来使文章衔接更紧密。

4、实战技巧

既然高分作文有这样一些特点,那我们在实际写作中该怎么去做呢?①设置观点鲜明的开头。怎么说?我们的四六级作文,通常都是提出一个现象,不同的人有不同的观点,然后问你的观点是什么?这就决定了我们的写作是一篇议论体裁的写作。所以我们一开始就可以采用开门见山,点明主题的方式。对于这个问题A认为是什么,B认为是什么,然后点出我的观点是什么。②紧扣主题的结尾。在第二段进行多方面论述后,最后在第三段要首尾呼应,通过改写主题句,再次点明主题。③衔接顺畅的中间段。在第一段提出观点后,第二段应该对你的理由进行多方面论述了。根据老师的阅读特点,我们在第一段可以先总说,作本段的中心句。然后从多角度进行论证。为使段落衔接顺畅,可以使用一些关联词,如and,or,but,so等;还可以使用序数词,使文章看起来更有层次感。

如果小伙伴可以做到这些,并在平时多加练习,相信大家在英语四六级考试中一定可以勇往直前,所向披靡,获得成功!

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英语写作万能公式 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?经典句型:A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that…2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:Honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型:A recent statistics shows that …写作绝招结尾万能公式:1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!更多过渡短语:to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型:Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型:Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作绝招写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 主 题 句原则国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 一 二 三原则领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)8)most important of all, moreover, finally9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩! 六、 多变句式原则1)加法(串联)都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用:besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover2)转折(拐弯抹角)批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语:despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding3)因果(so, so, so)昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语:then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:When to go, Why he goes away…5)附加(多此一举)如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。6)排比(排山倒海句)文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!写作绝招文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her 更多句型:To take…as an example, One example is…,Another example is…, for example二、做比较方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:相似的比较:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner相反的比较:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …这个对 compare and contrast 题型很有用三、换言之没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子:I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语:in more difficult language, in simpler

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