小猴小吃货
看图写话是NMET书面表达经常采用的形式，它是一种检查学生观察理解能力及运用语言能力的形式。考生必须根据所示图片或图片组，恰当地运用所学的词句表达一个完整的故事，近年NMET书面表达均采用图画提示的书面表达形式，要求考生根据图画所表现的内容写一篇100字左右的短文。那么，如何根据图画的内容，运用正确的语言和规定的篇幅来写好这类文章呢？1．确定图画的内容要点 碰上这类试题，考生首先应仔细审题，看懂图片所表达的意思，根据图画内容整理出几个要点，再根据这些要点决定要采用的语言形式。如NMET 2000的高考试题中，书面表达部分题目是这样的：假设你是李华，在美国探亲，2000年2月8日清晨，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况，请根据图画写出报告，词数100左右，结尾已为你写好。根据图画确定的内容要点是：（1）2000年2月8日发生了一起交通事故（2）我走在公园路（3）一位老人从街的另一边公园里出来（4）一辆黄车开过来在公园路转弯（5）黄车撞倒了老人并向西开跑（6）我记住了车牌号是AC864，并送老人去医院2. 直截了当，开门见山 开门见山就是文章写什么，开头就说什么，直截了当，尽快入题，不要拐弯抹角，拖泥带水，如NMET 98，写的是参观农场，开头就是：Today we visited a farm.3．10句话左右组成文章 书面表达要求用100词左右写出含六个要点左右的短文，所以从近几年的高考英语答案看，一般都以10个句子组成一篇文章。若用较少于8句话来表达，则句子容易复杂冗长，容易失控；若用多于10句话来表述，则句子零乱与琐碎，文章缺乏整体感。请看NMET 2000年的书面表达范文（8句话）：（1）It was 7：15 on the morning of February8，2000. （2） I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street．（3）Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third street and make a right turn into Park Road．（4） The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road．（5） He fell with a cry. （6）The car didn't stop but drove at great speed heading west. （7） I noticed the driver was young woman and the plate number was AC864． （8） About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.4．语言基本无误（1）用有把握的句式 看图写话要用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语和句型将题中所规定的内容要点加以表达，进而串联成文。在表达时句子宜短不宜长，应慎用分词或复合句，对拿不准的表达，可采用“回避”的方法，在不改变原有意思的前提下，改换另一种表达方式，但切忌中文式的英语，或根据英语语法人为地编造一些不地道的语言材料。如NMET 98高考作文是：5月3日，你参观了一个农场，请根据图画用英语写一篇日记。针对这篇文章的要点，我们就要使用以下有把握的句式，如：①give somebody a warm welcome②show somebody around③How glad somebody was to do something④have fun （in） doing something⑤say goodbye to somebody 其中，第一句式The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. 我们也可以用其它表达法：The farm workers warmly welcomed us. 或The people in the farm received us warmly等。（2）注意用词表达得当 用词不当，会影响文章内容的正确表达。如：NMET 98的高考书面表达有如下要点：警察罚他们抓住下一个违章者。有的学生用He let us catch an other off ender．这种表达就没有He made us catch the next of fender. 来得恰当。因为文中是因违章被罚，站在路边抓其他违章者一事带有强迫性质，用“let”语意太轻，应改用make。（3）重视英语虚词的使用 “看图写话”所提供的图画内容要点，通常是分幅叙述，相互之间没有逻辑的联系。这就要求考生按照合理的顺序，将句子连珠成串。在不连贯时，可适当使用一些过渡性的连接词，如and，then，however，besides，thus等，这样使人看上去脉络清晰，层次分明，文理通顺，意思连贯。如：NMET 97范文中使用连词and达到5次，NMET 98使用连词and达到3次，NMET 99使用连词and达到4次，NMET 2000使用连词and达到3次，then l次，but l次。5．结尾自然有力 文章结尾要干净、利落，既不能拉杂，也不能草率，要显得自然，恰当得体。请看如表1所示的例子：年份文章结尾句NMET 1992At four o’clock, we said goodbye and set off for home.NMET 1993It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.NMET 1998The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.NMET 1999I hope you come and see for yourself some day.NMET 2000About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. 总之，做好看图写话的书面表达题，要做到内容切题，要点明确，文理通顺，语言正确，篇幅适中，开门见山，结尾自然。
慧慧在济南
1.男 Can you give me the book? 女 here you are ！2.女 This is the blackboard.3.Welcome to China4.男 how are you ？ 女 I'm fine5.男 Nice to meet you 女 me too
小兔子好好
It's a beautiful saturday afternoon and I went to the cinema with my mom.We watched a movie called Three Idiots . It was funny, and we were both moved by the story because the different feeling and message the movie carried. And after that, mom and I had a delicious dinner in the restaurant nearby. Then we walked home, talking and laughing all the way. This is my saturday, what about you?。
把你看到的写下来.不过避免用"I see a 。"这样的句子.
你就用现在进行时来描述. Three children are playing in the park. The boy in blue is running. The girl with a ponytail is flying a kite. And the girl in pink is sliding.
你也可加些描述天气的话.It is a beautiful sunny day. The sky is blue. There are some white fluffy clouds in the sky.
就用简单的语言描述就很好了.懂吗？
首先要把题审清楚 因为作文一般都是看点给分 所以题目一定要审仔细 每一个点都要抓住 点都写到了 就算句子不是写得很好 单词就算有错误 也应该在及格分左右
然后就是句子 不能写从句就尽量写简单句 每一个句子的时态 语态要搞清楚就行了 如果能用到短语 从句之类的当然好 写的好了会有适当加分的
还要注意句子和句子之间的衔接 也就是要使用一些衔接词来承接上下文 这个就你自己平时多积累 看别人的文章是怎样衔接的 怎样衔接用怎样的词，要用心去写那篇作文。
如果涉及到格式的话 比如信 该用什么标点 什么称呼 什么样的语气 这些都是死的东西 记得就可以了
如果要发表自己的观点一定要积极向上的 这个没办法 咱国情嘛
写日记有帮助的 但是写完了最好给老师批改下 这样才知道自己错在哪 怎么改进
My name is Susan. I have a cat, but my cat is sick right now. I need to bring the cat to see the doctor. Docter gives me the medicine let me serve for cat. After cat eats the medicine, Susan hope that her cat will be fine quickly, so they can play with each other.。
Last Sunday i watched a nice vocal concert with my friends.The show is just for the super Rap star Pan Weibo.I was totally enjoying the show of him and he is really a cool and handsome man!I even gave him a bounch of flowers as the show ended,and after that Mr Pan took a picture with me and you see we are all feeling so happy.How interesting the show it is!
我在一本漫画书上看过这样一则漫画：在一个大森林里，一个人嘴里叼着一根烟，拿着一把锋利的斧头砍伐一棵棵大树，而大树也在哭泣，那个人肩膀上停了一只啄木鸟，啄木鸟看了看那个人的脑袋，说：“这段木头里一定有虫。”
不知这副漫画的含义大家看懂没有，那个人脑袋的确有“虫”，不过此虫非彼虫 ，这个“虫”指的是那个人破坏生态平衡的心虫，怪不不得啄木鸟说他“脑袋有虫”，不过在我们平时的生活中、世界上，这类“脑袋有虫”的人数不胜数，可啄木鸟却是寥寥无几。
平时，不少同学的草稿纸只划了几笔就扔进了垃圾桶，要知道，这些纸可是 一棵棵树木啊；洗手时，水开得挺大，这还不说，洗完手，也不关水就走了，任 凭水哗哗的流淌，要知道在干旱地区水是多么宝贵啊；平时，随手将垃圾扔在地上，既影响环境又影响美观。。要知道，如今我们这个地球已经受到了极大的破坏，可是那些“脑袋有虫”的人却丝毫没有醒悟，他们为了自己的利益破坏环 境：滥砍滥伐、毁坏植被；为了图方便将污水排入江河，不知有多少河流因此无 法饮用，我们的母亲河——黄河已经便得浑浊不堪；昔日的天府之国——成都的
美好风景已无复存在，土地正向沙漠化进军；大气污染也越来越严重，几乎处处 是酸雨。。在如此触目惊心的事情前，人类似乎没有觉醒，而人们脑袋里那条 贪婪的虫子越来越大，人们已经被欲望迷住了双眼。
自从涉及了人类的足迹，动物们便再也无安宁之日，昔日温顺自在的藏羚羊
为了躲避人类的追捕已经疲惫不堪了；昔日称霸海洋的鲸以濒临灭绝。。不知有多少生物在人类脑子那贪婪的虫子手下灭绝，从此在历史的长河上消亡.
如今我们必须保护我们这个美丽的地球，因为拯救地球就是拯救未来，而我们首先应该做的就是灭掉我们脑子里那条贪婪的虫子，同学们，请你们照亮你们
i may say i have a meaningful and fruitful summer holiday.why?i guess you may interestedly aks me.admittedly,i worked part-time this summer and have found the real meaning of labor and e to the understanding of living independently,that's why i consider it to be of so much significance to me.
all of a sudden i noticed a wanting ad in the newspaper and it said a restaurant was in need of a cleaner and of course they accepted casual laborer,so i just headed to it and had a try.fortunately,i was successfully given the job.at the beginning,i have had the thought of earning a big handful of money with little effort as i believed it must be "an easy job".however,it finally turned out to be a wrong expectation.i had a relatively tough time in my working days as a cleaner when i was expected to rise early in the morning and worked for seven hours a day and carry on working for three weeks.the job was totally beyond my expectation,which was extrordinarily tiring and tedious.i was made very exhausted every day when i was off duty,and i have ever thought of giving up but something powerful in my mind had finall e to my encouragement,and i kept on until i got my job finished at last.
it is an impressive experience for me in which i learnt a lot rather than merely what i've been paid.the most significant is that i have arrived at a better understanding of labor itself----labor is glorious,it creates the world and exhibits the value of man.
Today is my birthday day.I am very happy,beacuse I will have a party .My mother ,father and friends give me many good gifts. They sing a birthday song for me. Then ,I make a wish.The cake is very big and beatiful .I like the cake,it is delicious.I have a good time 。
please obey the traffic rules
Obeying traffic rules,The Responsibility which everyone should have。Wish People to live longer,Share safety in miles。It's the good saying to be。Regardless of what,nothing is over life。At least,don't let tragedy Occur。No Traffic Accident can bring the benefit,even though purposive to make an Accident to gain assurance,that is still of the life as the wager。So,please obey the traffic rules。It is everyone's good that good indeed。
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