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范文： Dear Sir ,

I’m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I’m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number : ; 1234567.

Look forward to your reply .

Yours ,

Li Hua

范文： Hi, TigerMom ,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .

范文： Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,

Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .

Thank you!

范文：

Dear zhuanghua ,

It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .

On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .

From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .

Yours truly ,

Li Hong

试题：第二节 读写任务(共l小题，满分25分) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Dear Ari, As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you. I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others. Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon. Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face. And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari. Love, Daddy [写作内容] 假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：1．以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2．以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：(1)读信后的感受；(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。 [写作要求]1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。二、评分标准项目 分值 评分标准概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。 4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。 3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相关的信息, 有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。 2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含较多不相关的信息, 有较多的抄袭原。语言结构不够正确，行文不够规范。 0---1 没有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相关的信息, 大多数句子都照抄原文。语言结构不正确，行文不规范。写作 18---20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。 14---17 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。 11---13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。 7---10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。 4---6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。 1---3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇及其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。 0 以下几种情况，给0分：1） 完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）2） 文不对题3） 只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容。三、任务型写作评卷场评分细则◆概括1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分2．死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序 1分3．改变主语或宾语的抄为主 2 分 (灵活地抄)4．稍为改动总体的抄 3分5．改变句子、用词，重新排列组织 4—5分 (字数不特别要求)◆120字自主写作 1．感想，语言，内容，连贯性2．语言为主, 内容的相关部分，综合考虑连贯3．首先看语言是否合格4．内容： 读后的感受, 成长的感受, 感激和祝福5．用了阅读理解中的素材不算抄袭6．内容偏离的时候以语言为主四、学生习作选评给分情况1 ( 1+5=6分) Dear Dad, On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom gave me the letter. You wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is Ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish I love you and Mommy. I very love you and mother, because not only you and Mom love me, but also you do every think is due to me. When I was ill, you and Mom are very busy for me, give me best love. Now I was 18 years ago. I become a strong and can do well for myself. I think you for you and Mom. I’ll use my all love for you, but sorry, I didn’t can earn the money for you, because I have to study. So hope you wait me. I wish you strong and healthy all the life. 2 ( 2+9=11分) In you letter, Daddy, I know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. You love me, you give the best for me. You imagining I will be like a lion who is brave. I felt very warm when I reading your letter. In my growing road you give me the best. When I in trouble, you give the help for me first. If I make mistake, you won’t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. In my life, you and Mum’s love is full of it. I can grow up without your love. Happy birthday, Daddy. I won’t make you sad, I would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society. Thank you. Dad. I love you and Mum forever. 3 ( 0+13=13分) In your letter, I know I was a lovely boy in your life, and I was know that lots of funny things happen before I was born. In my living, I was happy and lucky, because I believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. When I was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. When I was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when I go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don’t break the traffic rude. After I guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that I had never come through. Words fails me to express my thankful to you. Now, I dust hope can live happily and have a strong body. What’s more, wish you will healthy forever. 4 ( 3+16=19分) Dear Dad, You encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. You were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. I keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years. I’m totally moved by your words, my great father. I’m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter. Words fail to express how I appreciate you. I remember the day you taught me swimming. You put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if I were a brave lion and left me. I struggled to catch you but I couldn’t. You lifted me up a while and then back to water. I was able to swim that day and I was strong both physically and mentally. Thank you, Dad. Today is your 50th birthday. I’m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. Thank you for the warmth and health. I can’t be here without you. I love you. Wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. Wish you in good health everyday. Happy birthday to you. 5 ( 5+18=23分) In your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others. After reading this letter, I feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. I also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand. I still remember when I was in primary school, I failed to apply myself to studying. I was addicated to computer games. As a conseque I soon became the last one in my class. You didn’t abuse me at all. On the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. Only when I have read your letter did I realize that I behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see I didn’t do well for myself. I can’t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. I promise that I will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person. 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60％的同学认为 40％的同学认为 1．不应该收门票 2公园是公众休闲的地方 3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 2．支付园林工人工资 3．购新花木 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。 2．词数：100左右。 3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear Editor． I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks．高考满分作文1(1号题) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 亲爱的编辑， 我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我们60％的同学认为，入场费没有达到人们的预期，有一个公园被认为是一个地方，市民可以在家里或工作的一个很好的时候，他们不也忙。如果收门票必须由一个公园的旅客支付的，有必要建立一个大门和围墙。在最后一个城市将在一个坏看看。我们40％的同学认为，入场费可以接受，但不能过于昂贵。从门票销售的钱可用于支付公园的园丁，购买鲜花和一些其他种类的树木。 至于我自己，我觉得入场费是有用的，因为它可以用来保护公园。我们是否有同感，亲爱的编辑？ 此致 李华高考满分作文2(1号题) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 亲爱的编辑， 我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。 60出100学生认为，收门票，不应该购买前一进入公园，因为它是一个公共场所去时，都是免费的。如果要购买机票，大门和墙壁都必须有一个公园，这将使城市建成很丑陋。四十出100学生认为，收门票，应以前购买的一进入公园，但门票的价格应该是合理的。钱，是从售票获得可用于支付园艺工人和购买鲜花和各种树木。至于我自己，我真的觉得公园的好地方到周末和节假日。同时，我们作为游客，应支付入会费，当我们进入公园。毕竟，它需要很多钱，以保持良好的工作秩序公园。你是否同意我的，亲爱的编辑器？ 李华考满分作文3(1号题) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks? Yours truly, Li Hua 亲爱的编辑， 我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我的同学，60的占百分之认为入场费不应该强迫公众的想法。他们认为，公园的地方，市民享受闲暇自己。他们认为，一门和哀号的兴建，如果收门票，收费。这座城市将不再那么美丽，因为它应该有。四十我的同学占百分之的思想，入场费是行，但不应该失去控制。入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新类型。至于我自己，我想说，如果我们大家努力建设成为一个花园，谁对公园门票为关心我们的城市？ 李华高考满分作文4(1号题) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 亲爱的编辑， 我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。反对的收费公园占60％的门票。他们是一记，公园是供公众享用。如果优惠票公园的游客要求，一门要设立等，对四周的墙壁。如果是这样，上海将不看的，因为它美丽会。否则，那些在收取公园占40％的门票赞成票。他们都认为，门票价格应适当控制，而且入学金可用于支付园丁和购买花木新的类型。真理掌握在多数人的手中。我的论点是否立场，因此，亲爱的编辑器？高考满分作文5(1号题) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor? Yours truly, Li Hua亲爱的编辑， 我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。在所有我们谁也参加了讨论，60％的份额的观点，即入场费不应该收取点，而40％的市场份额持相反意见。那些谁不同意这样的看法认为，公园是一个地方，公众可以用他们的乐趣业余时间。在这个想法的支持，对那些认为公园门票不能失去控制。反对的人士则认为，一个城市的面貌将受到损害，因为门和哭声将建立门票如果要收集。那些谁的想法一致认为入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新品种。我认为它利大于弊收取一个公园入场费。我说得对，编辑器？ 此致 李华这应该很容易看懂呀，用得着翻译么 【全国卷I海南、宁夏】 【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1．外出购物 2．替房东还书 3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Mrs. Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. Yours, Li Hua 威尔逊夫人， 我要出去购物，也不会下午5时00分左右才回来。我已与我的两本书，你要我回到市图书馆。下午约1时许下午，保罗称，说她不能满足博尔顿咖啡明天上午你，因为她参加一些重要的事情来。她觉得很遗憾，但他说，你可以设置一些会议的其他时间。她想你叫她尽快回来你的家。她已经把这件事告诉转变苏珊。 你的， 李华[名师点评] 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。Computer As we all know, the computer is a marvelous machine. It has all kinds of types. Nowadays most computers have a memory processor in which information can be stored and be taken out at any time. The oldest kind of computer is the abacus. It was used in China long agoi The first modern computer was very large and expensive, but now scientists already have been making computers smaller and cheaper, at the same time easier to use and work faster and faster now. Computers can be used a great deal in many ways. It can do many kinds of work. They can be used in doing business and science research work, in some large factories, and our daily life. We even use it to play computer games at home. Today a lot of people buy computers. Computers is becoming more and more popular indeed. 计算机 众所周知，计算机是神奇的机器。它有各种类型。现在多数计算机均有存储器，信息可以随时被存储或提取。 最古老的计算机是算盘。算盘很久以前在中国使用。第一台现代计算机非常庞大和昂贵，现在科学家们已经使计算机变得更小和更廉价，同时更易于使用，并且运行速度越来越快。 计算机可以充分用于很多方面。它可以做很多事。它们可用于商业，科学研究，大工厂及我们日常生活。我们甚至用它在家玩电脑游戏。现在很多人购买电脑，计算机变得越来越普及

英语写作 的难度较大，学生也不能很快接受，提高英语写作质量也不容易，那么你知道怎么写 英语 作文 吗?下面是我为大家带来的初中英语满分作文，希望你喜欢。

初中英语满分作文1

We take a holiday of 7 days because of the National Day.As we all know，October 1 is the National Day of China in Gregorian calendar.

In the holiday I went to visit the Yellow River Forest Park togeter with three of my classmates.It was very boring when staying in the bus for a long time，which made me doze off all the time，and at some time，I nearly struck my head on the chair in the front of me.After two hours' journery by bus，we finally got to the park.But to my disappoint，there was nothing interesting here，except some quiet normal things. Compared with the my school I stayed in，here was very noisy and messy.

Though the park is beside the Yellow River，the air is still a little smelly because there are a lot of animals such as horses，cocks and so on here，which make lots of wastes every day while few people clean them. In a word，the park is not so good as I had expected，and I felt unsatisfied about it.

初中英语满分作文2

Computer has been part of our life. We use it to work or to keep in touch with our friends. Computer provides people a way to recognize the world and share resources. For teenagers, they are so crazy about computer games. There always news reports teenagers playing computer games for a long time. Some people blame the company to create online games, while others criticize the school for not educating children well. Actually, parents have much responsibility to teach their children the danger of playing online game too much. What's more, not every child overuses computer, so it depends on their behavior.

初中英语满分作文3

As a student, it is my duty to go over my lesson after class, or I will miss the important point. Many students choose to study in the classroom or go to the library, as for me, I am in favor of the latter choice. I like to go to the library. On the one hand, it is quiet. A lot of students just sit in their places and won't make big noise, which provides an enjoyable environment for students to study. On the other hand, I can consult many reference books if I need. The library provides us all kinds of books. We can find help when we have questions. I find much joy in the library.

初中英语满分作文4

Dear Ling Feng,

I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.

You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn't fall behind others. Since then, we have become very close friends. I think I'll try to help others just like you.

Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I'll always stay in touch with you. I wish you success for the future.

Yours,

Liu Yan

初中英语满分作文5

Water is the source of life.We can't live without water.However,with the increasing population and industrial development,water pollution has become a serious problem.Large amounts of wastewater go into rivers and seas directly without being treated,which can be dangerous to people.Also lots of people pay no attention to saving water in daily life,while in some place water is badly needed.

It's time for us to take some measures to improve the situation.Factories should treat the wastewater before letting it go into rivers.We can play a positive role in saving water.For example we can reuse the water for wishing rice to wash vegetables and then clean a mop.

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