英语短文改错100篇

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I would like to tell you something【 more 删掉 】about our school sports meet。 It was【 held】 on Oct.6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1000【 students】 and teachers【加who】 attended it . Wang Lin , a student from my class won the 【100-meter】race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really【 a success】. That was because we were all trying to do 【our 】 best . Although I was not one of the【 winners】, I was proud of【 what 】we had done Looking forward to 【receiving 】 your letter Yours,Li Ping

Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination is now my goal in life. My first step was(改成is) to set small targets what（改成that） can be reached realistically. For example,I plan to set a timetable for my study. So after school,I will put finishing homework in the last(改成first) place. Additionally,I will make a list of my important task(改成tasks) including their due dates but(改成and) follow my schedule strictly. I will avoid find(改成finding) excuses for putting them off. At (此处加the)same time,I will ask for (去掉这个for)my friends and parents to help me. By achieving this(改成these) small targets,I have confident(改成confidence) that I will overcome procrastination.

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我给你改出来并解释了，保证10000%100的准确率：The story took place in Amsterdam, Holland in the（定冠词）early 1940s,after the German Nazis had occupied most of Europe. The Nazi party ruled Germany（国家） from 1933 to 1945. One of their key policies（复数） was to kill all the Jews in Europe.If any persons known to be Jews were（主谓一致）found ,they would be sent（被动形式） to concentration camps farther east,mostly（副词） in Poland.Families were separated and（并列关系） transported in trains .For many（可数名词用） days,they went（过去式） without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate ,some Jewish families went into hiding,often with（固定用法） the help of non-Jewish friends.

第一篇：Friend relationships(Friendship) can take different forms,but it is usual for close friends share(to share) similar ideas and interests.It generally take(takes) time to reach this point. And the closest(closer) people become,the more they rely on one(each) other.People want to do friends favours and hate to break a promise.(见括号内)第二篇：The elephant is （the) largest living land animal and one of the cleverest,and yet elephants are rather easy(easily) captured.They are very near_sight(near-sighted) and can not see anything clearly unless it is close to them .Hunter take(takes) advantage of this to get near(to) the elephant which they are wish to capture.(见括号内)

Friend relationships can take different forms,but it is usual for close friends (to)share similar ideas and interests.It generally take(takes) time to reach this point. And the closest(closer) people become,the more they rely on one(each) other.People want to do friends favours(favouritely)and hate to break a promise.(共五处错误)第二篇：The elephant is (the)largest living land animal and one of the cleverest, and yet elephants are rather easy captured.They are very near_sight(near_sighted) and can not see anything clearly unless it is close to them .Hunter take(takes) advantage of this to get near (to) the elephant which they are(去掉are) wish to capture.(共五处错误)