超级吃货两枚
写作思路：根据题目要求，以“外出野餐”作为主题，可以描述一些野餐的环境，和野餐的食物，最后进行总结，正文：
星期天，爸爸妈妈带着我和弟弟去野餐。我们来到了一片宽阔的草地上，草地一片绿油油的，旁边长满了美丽的花朵，还有几只小蝴蝶在花丛中飞来飞去。这里的空气很新鲜。
爸爸妈妈把东西放在垫子上，然后我们就开始吃起来，我吃了好多东西，有果冻、牛奶、面包、署片、还有香肠。
吃好饭后，我和弟弟拿出了一个小皮球玩，最后我和弟弟坐在大树底下休息了一会儿就开开心心的回家了。
马云的小女儿
On Sunday. My friend and I went to charity farms to go on a picnic. I brought some eggs and vegetables. Lily took some milk and a kite. Jane took the bread and banana juice. We cook together. I fly a kite with Jane. We are very happy. 翻译在星期天。我和我的朋友去仁爱农场去野餐。我带了一些鸡蛋和蔬菜。莉莉带了一些牛奶和风筝。简带了面包和香蕉果汁。我们一起做饭。我和简一起放风筝。我们非常开心。
戏说小默
Today, I went on a picnic with my family， Mother brought a barbecue rack, barbecue and some food， My friends and I are very happy. We had a good time. But also very tired。.. It was a happy and energetic picnic今天我跟我的家人一起去野餐。母亲带上了烧烤架，烧烤等一些食物。我们玩的很开心，但也很累。这是一个又开心又累的一次野餐。
l波波刘
A Picnic一次野餐I had a picnic with my parents last week.It was asunny day .We started at seven o’clock.We went to the park by car. This parkis very big. I think there were one thousand people there.I felt hungry whenwe got there. We drank juice and ate delicious foods.After eating, we playedon the park .At five o’clock, we went home.上个星期我和父母进行了一次野餐。那是一个晴朗的日子，我们七点出发。我们驾车到公园，公园很大，我觉得里面有上千人。当我们到达公园的时候我觉得肚子饿，我们喝了一些果汁，吃了美味的食物。吃完我们就在公园里面玩，然后五点我们就回家了。It was a happy day.这真是快乐的一天。
小M回归中
写作思路：确立中心，围绕选材，确定重点，安排详略，选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想，选择真实可信，新鲜有趣的材料，以使文章中心思想鲜明深刻地表现出来。具体如下：
Today does not have to attend all kinds of training, my mother and I discussed to go to the west Taihu picnic, relax and relax.
A beautiful west Taihu lake, green willow notes blowing in the wind, green grass like to the earth covered with green carpet, colorful flowers blooming so happy, I seemed to suddenly walked into a beautiful landscape painting, happy like a bird open his hands free to run.
Began to picnic, my mother and I found a cool shade under a layer of cloth, put up the tent, comfortably lying in the tent breathing the fresh air by the lake.
I felt a little hungry, I moved out of the stove, took out the backpack early to prepare a variety of food, began our barbecue - mother put the food on the stove roast, I am responsible for the seasoning, with the delicious taste floating over, I greedy saliva will flow down.
Eat and play, play and eat, tired also can rest in the tent for a while, is really cool, I am so happy that I don't want to go home.
今天不用去参加各种训练，我和妈妈就商量了去西太湖野餐，放松放松心情。
一来到美丽的西太湖边，绿油油的柳树纸条随风飘荡，绿茵茵的小草像是给大地铺上了绿地毯，五颜六色的花儿开得那样欢快，我仿佛一下子走进了一幅美丽的山水画中，开心得像小鸟儿一样张开双手自由飞奔起来。
开始野餐，我和妈妈找了一个阴凉的树荫底下铺上一层布，把帐篷搭好，舒舒服服地躺在帐篷里呼吸着湖边的新鲜空气。
感觉到肚子有点饿了，我就搬出带来的炉子，拿出背包里早早就准备好的各种美食，开始我们的野外烧烤——妈妈把食物放在炉子上烤，我负责放作料，随着香喷喷的味道飘过来，我馋得口水都要流下来了。
边吃边玩，边玩边吃，累了还可以在帐篷里休息一会儿，真是爽呆了，我都开心得不想回家了。
