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老师叮咛:李辉老师说,“书面表达套路套话都背过了没?如果你的答案是Yes,那么现在才是你开始做题的时候!”想要提高作文能力,技巧是关键!下面的六个技巧都是值得同学们优先记忆学习的提分技巧!经过了全网首席高考英语名师李辉老师团队高度认真的整理校对,无错、可信!可供全国各省高中生打印、背诵! 高考英语优秀作文的技巧特征:一、层次不乱 二、句式多变三、亮点若干 四、巧妙串联五、蠢错不犯 六、整洁卷面 一.层次不乱开头:第一个要点主体:第二个要点结尾:第三个要点二.句式多变1.长短变化 eg:时间过的真快。A long time has gone by before I realize it.It has been a long time since we last met.How time flies!Long time no see!eg:我成功了。I succeeded in doing...I am very successful in doing...I achieved my goal in doing...I fulfilled my dream.I did.... and I made it.eg:你很喜欢这里的天气,我也很喜欢这里的天气。You love the weather here and I love the weather here, too.You love the weather here and I love it too.You love the weather here and me too.2.主、被动变化eg:我每天都要完成大量的作业,很是疲劳。I have to do a lot of homework and I'm very tired. Mountains of homework every day buries me, making me exhausted.eg:我每天都坚持锻炼,这样对我的健康有好处。I take exercise every day, which is good for my health.Taking exercise is my daily routine, which, I believe, will greatly benefit my physical health. 3.同功能句型变化eg:听到这个消息后,我感到很兴奋。After I heard the news, I was very excited.On hearing the news, I was very excited.Having heard the news, I was thrilled.eg:我没有完成作业,老师很生气。I failed to finish my assignment, and the teacher was very angry.I failed to finish my homework, which made the teacher very angry.The teacher was angry with me because I failed....eg:如果我想实现梦想,只有努力学习。If I want to realize my dream, I have to work hard.Only through hard work can I fulfill my dream.eg:直到毕业了我才理解了老师所说的话。I didn't understand my teacher's words until I graduated.It was not until I graduated that I came to understand what my teacher had told us.eg:我觉得你应该学习数学。I think you should major in math.In my opinion, learning math is not a bad idea for you.If I were you, I would absolutely take math as my major.eg:抱歉,我不能参加这次野营了。I'm sorry that I can't take part in the camping.I have to apologize to you that I can't make it to the camping this time.How I wish I could put off the job interview and go camping with you guys.4.主语变化 5.同义词变化6.横向比较变化三.亮点若干英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西1. 一般学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构2. 恰到好处的名言、言语等3. 一语中的的修辞手法 1.高级句型例文:I’ve been studying American customs according to a task assigned by my teacher recently. Never in my wildest imagination can I be so crazy about American traditions that I’m desperate for more books to learn about them. However, it bothers me that books related to this subject are quite rare and limited, making it a barrier for me to do further exploration. To overcome this disadvantage, I’m desperately in need of your help. Could you please buy some relevant books for me? Any native books concerning American customs are OK. And three or four ones are fine. As for the date, could you please be kind enough to have them delivered before next Monday? Last but not least, I promise to transfer money to you immediately I receive the parcel. In sum, you are the very person who is able to provide me with a glimpse into brilliant and colorful American culture.模板:很多a lot ofa good number ofa large amount ofa great deal ofa mountain of homeworka sea of peopleabundant / adequate参加take part injoin inparticipate incompete insign up for …因此so/ thereforeas a result,as a consequence,consequently例: 这个暑假我有许多作业要做。I have a lot of homework to do in this summer holiday.学神版:My short summer holiday will be hopelessly filled up by mountains of homework, making it impossible for me to make any other plans to follow my little interests. 你的文章一定会深受同学们欢迎。Your article will be welcome to our students.学神版:The article written by a native speaker like you will undoubtedly be well received by students in our school, as they are eager to know more about the outside world. 2.恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色1.Practice makes perfect.2.God helps those who help themselves.3.Where there is a will, there is a way.4.One false step will make a great difference.5.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.6.Experience is the mother of wisdom.7. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.8. More haste, less speed.9. It‘s never too old to learn.10. All that glitters is not gold.11. Look before you leap.12. Rome was not built in a day. 3.大胆使用基本的修辞手法比喻eg:所有学生都在忙着准备考试。All the students are busy preparing for the coming exams.All the students are as busy as bees preparing for the coming exams.夸张eg:我感觉压力很大。I feel great pressure.I felt as if I were under a mountain and I can't even breathe.拟人eg:我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。I feel all my classmates laughing at me.I felt as if even the birds on the trees are laughing at me.四.巧妙串联起:first of all, to begin with, above all...承:in addition, besides...转:however, on the other hand...合:in my opinion, all in all, in a word...五.蠢错不犯赘词现象多发中学生英语写作中常见的13种语言错误:1.主谓不一致My father and I likes(like) going fishing by the lake. Large quantities of soil has been washed away.2.时态、语态混用Last night, I had(删去)enjoyed a party. The painting on the wall(添加was) damaged seriously.3.句子成分残缺I stood up and saw there(添加was) a boy. The young man(添加was) running in the street. 4.习惯搭配误用I once heard from(of) the animal like this.We passed away(by) the building. 5.名词单、复数不分I made many friend(friends) in the summer camp. We can get some informations(information) from the Internet.6.动词单、复数不分Our teacher often say(says) that success lie(lies) in hard work.Mr. Smith, together with some students, are(is) coming to our school. 7.赘词现象多发I hope you can return back to(删除) our school soon.8.基本词汇拼写错误I flied to New York directly from Beijing.This will be done immediatly(immediately).9.前后人称不一致The boy was born in a poor family but she works(work) hard.We watched a few movies and we loved it(them).10.动词原形作主语/宾语Take(Taking) a walk after dinner is very good for you.At that moment, I didn't feel like take(taking) a walk.11. 逻辑主语与主句主语不一致Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. Walking in the street, a car hit an old man.13.一个简单句出现两个谓语There was(being) no work to do, he went back home.(When)I received you email,(and) I was very excited.14.中式英语Next week have a party.I sorry you I can‘t with you go Beijing.The family from rich become poor.六.整洁卷面英文书写大方、圆润、自然词与词间距适当字母大小适当无大面积涂改
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1改变句子开头方式在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增强表现力。· We can protect the environment only in this way.→ Only in this way can we protect the environment. 只有这样我们才能保护好环境。· A young woman sat by the window.→ By the window sat a young woman.窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。2用词要丰富为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.我喜欢看书,而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。·Thank you very much for your help.→ I really appreciate your help.很感激你帮助我。3合理使用省略句恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。· He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?· She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。4运用非谓语结构非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。· As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。·The baby was accompanied by her mother and it got quiet immediately.→ Accompanied by her mother, the baby got quiet immediately.有妈妈的陪伴,宝宝很快5结合使用长、短句在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,还有的讲笑话、下棋,大家玩得很开心。6使用短语代替单词一味使用单词也会让阅卷老师产生审美疲劳,适当地用一些常见的的词组和短语,也能让文章闪亮起来。· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.他已决定长大了当老师。· He doesn't like music.→ He doesn't care much for music.→ He shows no interest in music.他不大喜欢音乐。· Jim is very smart. He always gets new ideas.→ Jim is very smart. He always comes up with new ideas.吉姆很聪明,他总是能想出新的点子。· The students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.→ The students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.学生们认为应该省出一些零花钱来买书。7套用某些固定表达好的固定表达能让你的文章显得不那么生硬。· He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.→ He was too tired to walk any farther.他太累了,不能再往前走了。· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.这电影很有趣,学生和老师都很喜欢。· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.你的儿子已经长大,可以自己照顾自己了。8使用地道英语。我们只能写地道的英语。· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.别担心,大胆试一试,你很快就会学会的。· Thank you for playing with us.→Thank you for sharing the time with us.谢谢你陪我玩。9合理使用“高级”结构使用一两句定语从句,名词性从句或状语从句等高级的句型,能给文章增色不少。· This is the factory. We visited it last week.→ This is the factory which/that we visited last week.这就是我们上周参观的工厂。· We work hard. And we will make progress.→As long as we work hard, we will make progress.只要我们努力工作,我们就会进步的。10引用名言警句点缀在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章,不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧,而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。· As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.正如俗语所说:“有志者,事竟成。” 虽然这次你失败了,但你没必要灰心。只要你努力工作。坚持梦想,总有一天你会成功的。· There is a proverb going like this, “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is true that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.有句俗语是这样说的:“生活不是玫瑰花床。”每个人在生活中很可能在生活中遇到问题和困难,这是真的。· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”在当代世界,越来越多的人独自生活,这对我们的生命是不太好的。我们最好多交朋友,享受友谊。正如俗话所说:“远亲不如近邻。”怎么样,你学会了吗?祝你英语写作得高分!英语学习的供重豪:Emily0英语(不要0)
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备战高考,对于英语的写作技巧不掌握一点怎么行呢?下面是我给大家整理的高考英语基础写作技巧,供大家参阅!
一、基础写作题的特点
高考设置基础写作题目的目的是要检测考生最基础的书面语言表达能力,如用词的合理性、句子结构的复杂度、语法运用的正确性、信息内容的完整性、句子之间的连贯性等。
1. 写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。
历年来高考作文题的题材都非常贴近考生的学习和生活,如校园活动、校外见闻、交友、旅游,和考生有关的话题讨论等。
让我们先回顾五年以来基础写作的话题。
2. 写作的体裁主要是故事性描述和应用文。
基础写作题的体裁主要有故事性描写和应用文写作两大类。命题形式可能是看图写故事、看图表说明、根据表格信息完成一封短信或一份通知这类的应用文等。
3. 内容呈现的方式具有半封闭性。
基础写作题是半封闭的,其特点是写作的内容是被规定了的,考生必须将文章所规定的信息点完整、全面地表达出来,但对于语言表达的方式、信息组织的先后秩序、需要补充哪些必要的信息等,考生又有一定的自主构思空间。
4. 用5句话表达。
基础写作只能用5句话来表达题目所给的全部信息点,用5个简单句很难完成任务,必须使用复合句或并列句来综合多个信息点,而且还要照顾句子之间的衔接和语意上的连贯。
二、写作技巧及顺序
由基础写作题的特点可以看出,它对考生提出了一些新的要求。
1. 通篇浏览,把握整体。
浏览文章信息,并对其处理,将其分割成五句话,做到哪句话包含哪些信息。主要考察应试者的信息组织能力。
信息组织能力包括信息归类、信息排列和信息表达三个环节。
首先,对于题目所提供的各种信息点需要依照一定的标准将信息进行归类,并初步计划将哪些信息放到同个句子中;
其次是将信息进行合理的排列,排列必须依照一定的标准,如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等;
第三是选择信息表达的秩序,确定句子之间的先后关系,这既要考虑语法上能否衔接,还要考虑语意上的连贯。在组织信息的过程中,还要对某些信息进行必要的增删,使文章意思连贯、语言畅通、逻辑严密。
2. 集中兵力,各个击破。
在第一部的基础上,把五个句子逐一写清楚,包含所需信息。在组织句子时注意一下几点:
a) 一个句子首先要找清楚主谓宾,然后想办法拓展这句话,把其他的信息加进去。运用复杂句子的能力。
b) 一个句子有且仅有一个谓语(并且谓语)。
改错:
I writing the letter to complain about I bought the shoed recently.
主要考察应试者运用复杂句式的能力。
第一类是复合句,包括含有名词性从句的复合句,含有定语从句的复合句,含有状语从句的复合句。
例:
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world.
第二类是并列句:
具有递进关系的并列句, 如由and,then,besides,in addition, furthermore,moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句;
具有转折关系的并列句,如由but,however,on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句;
具有平行选择关系的并列句,如由both…and…,as well as,as well,neither…nor…or,either…or…,not only…but also…等连接的并列句。
例:
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world.
第三类是一些特殊句型,如使用非谓语动词、强调句、倒装句、含有with复合结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子等。
例:
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.
c) 想办法为作文加分。
1. 多多使用各种连词,使文章更为连贯。
顺接/递进:Firstly/ secondly/thirdly, besides, in addition, what’s more, what’s worse, what’s more important, moreover, also, finally, last but not least,.
转折:but, however, nevertheless(然而), yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, while
原因:because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to
结果:so, therefore, as a result, so that, then, so ?that, such ?that
总结:to sum up, to conclude, in conclusion, in summary, finally, in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,
2. 多使用高级词汇,句式和短语进行变换,不要重复使用一个句式和短语。同时要注意避免常见错误:
1)不要为了减少句数而不断使用逗号,一定要通过从句,连词,非谓语等来减少句数。 如:It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields. 改为:
It was raining hard, so they could not work in the fields.
They could not work in the fields, because it was raining hard.
2)时态错误:一定要根据文章的语境判断该使用的时态
实战演练一
用不同的句型写出下面的句子。
经历 心情
被接纳为亚运会志愿者 兴奋
01 同位语从句: The news that I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games made me very excited.
02 宾语/主语从句: It made me very excited / I felt very excited that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian games.
03 状语从句: When i heard that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games, i felt very excited.
04 定语从句: I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asain Games, which made me very excited.
05 非谓语动词: Hearing that i had been accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games, i felt very excited.
06 普通连词:I was accepted as the volunteers for the Asian Games and i felt so excited about it.
07 倒装句/强调句:It was last week that i was accepeted as the volunteers for the Asian Games and I felt so excited about it.
实战训练二
第一节 基础写作 (共1小题,满分15分)
假设你是你校校园广播站的记者,请根据以下内容给广播站写一篇英语新闻报道。
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参考词汇:改革开放 reform and opening up
[写作要求]
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部所给要点;
2. 报道中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
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To celebrate the great achievements in the past 30 years of reform and opening up,a speech contest organized by Senior Two was held in the gymnasium of our school on the afternoon of March 15th, 2010. More than 1200 people were lucky to listen to the speeches on the spot, including all the teachers and students in Senior 2, the leaders of our school and parents of some students. Eighteen contestants / candidates from different classes in Senior Two delivered wonderful speeches very fluently. Some of them talked about the great changes which had taken place in our country through their personal experiences and others sang high praise for the wise policy of reform and opening up by comparing the present of their hometowns with the past. This activity made us more confident and proud of our country and we all made up our mind to study harder to build our country more beautiful.
实战训练三
基础写作
假设你是李华,昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛(Talent Show),并获得一等奖。以下是参加情况及获奖感受:
1. 看别人比赛时:紧张;
2. 自己表演时:想起Mike数月的努力与帮助,冷静;
3. 在最有挑战的问答环节:谨记Mike的建议,顺利;
4. 宣布结果时:兴奋,遗憾Mike不在场。
[写作内容]
请根据以上介绍,给回美国度假的外籍教师Mike写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1. 告知获奖;
2. 介绍参赛情况;
3. 表达获奖感受。
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达所给的全部内容。信的开头与结尾已给出。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Dear Mike
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Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to let you know that I won first prize in the English Talent Show yesterday afternoon. Before it was my turn I watched the others and got very nervous. But when I was on the stage, I thought of all your efforts to help me during the past few months and gradually calmed down. Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging, I got through it quite smoothly by remembering all your suggestions. When the judge announced the result I was very excited but it was really a pity you were not there.
Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
2013年广东省高考英语作文
Ⅳ 写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 基础写作(共1题;满分15分)
你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息,写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。
志愿者的选拔
到2015年,在全球选出约30名去火星的志愿者
志愿者的条件
至少18岁
做好不回地球的准备
愿与他人保持良好的关系
专家观点
火星条件太艰苦
面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧
志愿者观点
厌倦地球生活,想体验火星生活
如果成功,就是人类英雄
火星:the Mars
[写作要求]
只能用5句话表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯
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2012年广东高考英语作文
Ⅳ 写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 基础写作 (共1小题;满分15分)
你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物
姓 名:Allan Stewart
国 籍:澳大利亚
出生日期:1915年3月7日
世界纪录:2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大
学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。
第一个学位:1936年获得
第二个学位:医学博士
第三个学位:80多岁时决定学习法律,2006年获得硕士学位。
第四个学位:2012年通过网络学习获得,善于合理安排学习时间,受到老师表扬。
*硕士学位:master’s degree; **博士:doctor
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
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1、高考写作的实质——变相的考察句型与词汇的灵活应用
英语写作不同于语文作文的写作,如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈,那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容,是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定大家了,内容方面,不需要学生进行发挥,大家所需要发挥的就是给这个不变的内容不要老去穿毫无变化的校服(简单句),而要去穿一些不一样的衣服,让它显得不那么单调,让判卷老师能看到不同,而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。
2、写作的评分标准——怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口
我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右,写作满分25分,15分也就是个及格分,而很多学生都是为了提分才来到了新东方,那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩,该对的都对,包括内容要点的完整,语法与词形的正确,但是全都是很简单句子的一个堆砌,没有任何的亮点。而20多分的作文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装,它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服,而是李宁、耐克,或者是阿迪,所以让人觉得很“拽”,而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉。
3、写作提分的三要素——句型,连词,高级词汇
句子是我们写作文最大的单位,有了漂亮的句子,用好的连词将其连句成段,在加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀,一篇好的高考英语作文就有了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子,最难的是高级词汇,限于大家的词汇还比较有限,一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上,因为这个最容易把握。
但是大家又有这样的困惑,学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊,动辄成五十上一百句的,大家背的挺多,但是面对考试的时候,发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用,而是它们太干了,就好比一根干骨头,大家嚼起来很没有味,也不知道该把他们往哪里放。
在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行迅速提高的练习方法,在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来,就一定会有收获。找历年真题,一周只需要写两篇,但是要这么来写:
1. 把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。
2. 逐一地进行翻译,不是用简单句,而是要刻意地去想。
(1)可以用什么样的复杂句。
(2)怎样去避开不会的表达,转义。例如:
这本书是如此的有趣,以致于我读了一遍又一遍。
1)This book was so interesting that I read it again and again.
2)This was such an interesting book that I read it again and again.
3)This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again.
4)So interesting was this book that I read it again and again.
这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句,因为它用了倒装。
再例如:
如果征收门票,需要建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象。 这句话中肯定“收”那个动作很多同学不会表达,那能不能想一个转义的方式,既避开了“收”这个动作还能表达原句的含义。
A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn't help the image of the city.
这个译文中用一个大家很熟悉的经典句型there be句型化险为夷。
4、如何备考
其实这种思维大家都有,但是没有成为一种思路,让它能在考试中起到作用,那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地,一方面大家要分数,但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说,有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文,所以练习是很重要的,要是现在不练而把高考当练习,那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了,到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平,而是应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇,时间都是挤出来的,希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。
小琪1128
1.用较高级词汇替换第一反应词: 在写作的过程中,很多考生习惯第一反应想到哪个单词就使用哪个单词,比如谈到“好”就是good,而第一反应词往往是比较简单的,甚至不适合书面语言,所以千万别一想到某个简单而顺手的词就立刻下笔,而是思考它的同义词。思考后考生会得到4到5个同义词,这里的任意一个词都可能会比你想的第一个词复杂些。通常考生想到的第一个词是平时使用较多的词,也是比较简单表意比较笼统的词,所以放在口语中使用更加适合,而写作用词最好用书面词汇,并且书面词汇会比起第一反应词的笼统,表意更加具有指向性,进而可以使文章语言更具生动和真实性。2.学会用多个同义英语词汇表达一个中文意思 在中文中习惯“求同不求异”,所以我们习惯用同一个词来强调某一个概念,而在英文中正相反----“求异不求同”,所以就要学会用不同的词来表示同一个概念。比如:好的:就可以用positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good。3.句型要尽可能多样化 高考英语写作其实就是一个“SHOW",你要在短短几十分钟内秀出你学了十几年的英语就要学会尽可能地多使用自己会的句型和语法知识。尤其是在作文中非常好用的“非限定性定语从句”“时间状语从句”等等。4.连接词要常用 要想让自己的文章行文顺畅,逻辑合理,就要学会使用起到各种作用的连接词。5.字要尽可能公整 毕竟这是应试作文,判卷时间是很有限的,所以在很大程度上,文章的“外在形象”非常重要,因为我们留给阅卷老师的“印象”极为重要,所以就要让你的字尽可能工整~